Writers, UNITE!

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Re: Writers, UNITE!

Postby Brightpaw » Sat Jan 14, 2012 8:41 pm

(Short story v.2 if you like it I'll continue!)

Dear....Diary,

My mum told me it would help to write in you, to record everything that's been going on. I know she'll give this to the councillors when I've finished, so I'm going to burn you after. Sorry. Anyway let me tell you all about it. It all started when I went to my new school, Mountford High. It's the sort if place where they sent the misfits and the ones who don't fit in. Like me, Jass. My real name's Jassamine. But don't ever call me that. Anyway, I'm short, and plain-looking, with layered chestnut hair, blue eyes, and fair skin. Oh, and freckles. So I went to this new school halfway through the term, and that's where it first went wrong. Everyone knows that if a new girl just suddenly appears something's happened. And it did happen. I forgot to mention, Mountford High is described by all as a lunatic asylum. And I was sent there because I can see ghosts. No lie. But no-one else can see them, so they Mark me down as a lunatic and sent me here. When I walked into my first lesson I found that we were chained round the ankles to our desks. I thought that was odd so I asked the girl sitting next to me why. Her reply was "Because apparently we would try to run. Although only Zane ever has." she pointed at a boy sat diagonally behind us. He had blonde, long hair, which looked as if he hadn't brushed it in days, and brown eyes. He was very muscly but also looked graceful, with his musician's hands and long legs. I smiled faintly, it looked like this wouldn't be so bad here after all.
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Re: Writers, UNITE!

Postby maximum entropy » Sun Jan 15, 2012 12:47 am

Ooh, continue! Me is liking!

Conitnuation of the cat story:

Jag sniffed and backed out. Snowy said
"Well, why are you here? Are you twopaw's property? Did you get lost?"
I replied "Yeah, Ginger was out on a walk and her terrible sence of direc-" And Ginger intturupted me.
"What's that shiny stuff on ther wall?" She demanded
"No clue." Rusty replied.
I continued "Direction failed her. I was so distrated by a mouse I got lost. And yes, we're twopaw's property." Jag came in, and looked at us with contempt.
"Well, if you think I'm hunting for the newcomers, that's out of the question. Let them do it themselves." Jag said.
"Jag!" Snowy exclaimed. "I can't do my share of chores, you realize that. And Rusty is a bit busy finding what he needs to care for us, so you need to hunt!"
"I can hunt," I said. "I'll hunt with Jag." Jag thought about it, then accepted. We left the cave.
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Re: Writers, UNITE!

Postby Brightpaw » Sun Jan 15, 2012 12:56 am

Brightpaw wrote:(Short story v.2 if you like it I'll continue!)

Dear....Diary,

My mum told me it would help to write in you, to record everything that's been going on. I know she'll give this to the councillors when I've finished, so I'm going to burn you after. Sorry. Anyway let me tell you all about it. It all started when I went to my new school, Mountford High. It's the sort if place where they sent the misfits and the ones who don't fit in. Like me, Jass. My real name's Jassamine. But don't ever call me that. Anyway, I'm short, and plain-looking, with layered chestnut hair, blue eyes, and fair skin. Oh, and freckles. So I went to this new school halfway through the term, and that's where it first went wrong. Everyone knows that if a new girl just suddenly appears something's happened. And it did happen. I forgot to mention, Mountford High is described by all as a lunatic asylum. And I was sent there because I can see ghosts. No lie. But no-one else can see them, so they Mark me down as a lunatic and sent me here. When I walked into my first lesson I found that we were chained round the ankles to our desks. I thought that was odd so I asked the girl sitting next to me why. Her reply was "Because apparently we would try to run. Although only Zane ever has." she pointed at a boy sat diagonally behind us. He had blonde, long hair, which looked as if he hadn't brushed it in days, and brown eyes. He was very muscly but also looked graceful, with his musician's hands and long legs. I smiled faintly, it looked like this wouldn't be so bad here after all.


My attention was drawn back to the front, where the professor was entering. He was flanked by two men in black carrying guns. "Okay..." I breathed. There was something about this school, and all the security, that freaked me out. I shuddered, and noticed in the corner of the room a man, who was gazing at me through sad eyes sunk deep into his mangled face. "Who's that?" I whispered to the girl sat next to me. "Who?" she replied, gazing around and frowning. The sudden realisation dawned on me that I was seeing ghosts again. As I turned back to the man, his face grimaced into a grotesque smile, and he waved the stump of one hand at me. I felt like I was going to faint, literally. I turned away back to the professor, but out of the corner of my eye I could see the man getting closer, till he stopped by my desk and leered into my face. I tugged at my chains, trying to get away, but his bleeding face kept coming. Eventually, I screamed and in one last desperate attempt to free myself, pulled the chains out of the floor. It was odd, as they seemed to free themselves. I staggered backwards, and blinked. The ghost was gone. I felt a sharp prick in my upper arm, then the world faded to black.

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Re: Writers, UNITE!

Postby Sulli » Sun Jan 15, 2012 1:58 am

Oh, I must join this. ;o;

I want to join the Writing Army!
Username: Hakuna Matata
Do you promise to write something at LEAST once a week? I do! I might not post it right here, though. I'm the type of person to write something and then think it's really bad and not want to share it. I could PM you with it if necessary.
What's your favorite color? Hmm, I really do like pink.
Animal? I really love horses and dogs. Horses because they are just beautiful creatures that have a wonderful mind. Very smart too. And dogs are very smart. I have one of my own and just adore him. He is really a sweetheart.
Fish? I don't like fish that much. I do love seeing colors of fish and things like that, but the animal itself, not really.
Type of mythical creature? Dragons! I love dragons!
Do you like fairies, elves, or evil creatures? Hmm, I do like them, but I never really write about them that much. Unless I get this amazing idea with elves and fairies or something.
Anything else (do not leave blank): I learned to write well from RPing with friends and random partners. I used to be very bad a writing. Like I had a really hard time writing only one paragraph and describing things. After several months of RPing I am now able to write many paragraphs with no problem at all. I'm much better at describing things, but still not great. And I listen to music to help me write. It's really fun listening to music while writing. (:
Show me another picture,
I'll try my best to see,
What happened to us baby, I've lost my memory.

I understand your worry, this doesn't feel the same
But I won't give up, I won't give up,
I'll try by best to see.

I don't wanna be sorry, I don't wanna give in,
I just wanna remember what it was like back then.


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Re: Writers, UNITE!

Postby maximum entropy » Sun Jan 15, 2012 2:02 am

Accepted! That's okay, I know how you feel. I wrote something a while ago about monsters and a damsel in distress, but hated it.
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Re: Writers, UNITE!

Postby Sulli » Sun Jan 15, 2012 6:28 am

Captain Rutabaga wrote:Accepted! That's okay, I know how you feel. I wrote something a while ago about monsters and a damsel in distress, but hated it.

Yeah, it happens a lot to me. I have something I wrote, read it over, hate it, throw it away and hope I never see it or anything like it again.

I actually just today finished writing this thing for my CS pets. I enjoy writing stories about them. >w< It's here if you're interested and want to read it.
Show me another picture,
I'll try my best to see,
What happened to us baby, I've lost my memory.

I understand your worry, this doesn't feel the same
But I won't give up, I won't give up,
I'll try by best to see.

I don't wanna be sorry, I don't wanna give in,
I just wanna remember what it was like back then.


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Re: Writers, UNITE!

Postby Raven~Scythe » Sun Jan 15, 2012 9:19 am

Captain Rutabaga wrote:Sorry! Anyway, I loved idt, but-throne is spelt that way, not like the way "I throw the ball to my friend."

must have been a spell check on my ipod. it always does that.
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Re: Writers, UNITE!

Postby maximum entropy » Mon Jan 16, 2012 1:12 am

Spell check doesn't always work... Ah well... Anyway, Google Chrome has spell check as one of it's settings, I like to use G C, and I make sure it's the right word...
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Re: Writers, UNITE!

Postby Roonil Wazlib » Mon Jan 16, 2012 7:31 am

Yay! :) I'm so happy I found this :)
I want to join the Writing Army!
Username:ClassicDisneyFreak<3
Do you promise to write something at LEAST once a week?Yep :) If I can't get on I'll tell you :)
What's your favorite color?Umm....green?
Animal?Owls (All of them)
Fish?Starfish! I don't know if that's a fish, but whatever.
Type of mythical creature?Selkies!
Do you like fairies, elves, or evil creatures?All three :)
Anything else (do not leave blank):Nope! :)
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Re: Writers, UNITE!

Postby Lena. » Mon Jan 16, 2012 10:38 am

I want to join the Writing Army!
Username: . : j i n x : .
Do you promise to write something at LEAST once a week? i will try but if i go somewhere i will tell you.
What's your favorite color? blue.
Animal? frogs.
Fish? seahorse (hope this counts).
Type of mythical creature? griffyn.
Do you like fairies, elves, or evil creatures? fairies.
Anything else (do not leave blank): i am so happy i found this club!!!! and i hope i get in.
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