Tough As Nails Adoption Fan Club (Happy Holidays!)

[kitten5862]

I like Lucio. ^^

[mirage.]

I like Lucio. ^^

Thanks, that's the one I'm leaning towards. ^^

[Frayah]

Bookmarking. ;)

[! october]

Do you guys think I should upload Shadow's story in parts? Like a section a a week? Or should I just wait untill I'm done writing it and upload it all at once? The ending is really sad, I was almost crying when I was doing the rough copy of it. ^^

[Atwood]

Personally I tend to go back and change things as I'm writing, so it might be better to finish it all before posting it in case you want to change something later, but you might want to post it in sections like chapters either way. :3

[! october]

I'll just wait untill I'm finished, I only need a few more weeks. ^^

[kitten5862]

Any critique on my form so far?

I would like to adopt!
Number: 10

Picture:

Name: Keshu or Ke for short

Species: Smili

Personality:

Likes: Ke loves her parents and her siblings so very much.

Dislikes: Keshu doesn't like at all that she had to leave her family at the age of 13 (in human years). She hates even more that her parents didn't tell her of this until it was the day before her 13th birthday.

Background:

Keshu is a species unknown to mankind, a Smili. She was born on a bitter cold day with many snow flurries dancing in the breeze. The first time her parent's got to see her it was like, well everything was going on in her parent's minds at the moment. They were incredibly excited to have their first child and she was so beautiful. Ke's eyes were the most beautiful they have seen in a long time. Her parents loved her to death and fight strangers so they couldn't get to her. They would even do the ultimate sacrifice, give their lives up for her. Keshu knew she had the best parents anyone could even dream of. A few years had passed by and Keshu was an older sister to 2 brothers and 1 sister. Keshu loved her siblings so much and if someone would even just call them names, she was there for each of them and stood up for them. The smili family still was happily living in a cold unknown region. It was extremely cold for others but not for the smili family, they have adapted to this cold enviornment very well.

Keshu is having a perfect life, for now at least. At 13 a smili has to leave the family to fend for themselves, and maybe even have a family later in life. Ke didn't know of this until she was almost 13. Her parents didn't want to tell her because they thought it would be the best decision for her future. Eventually they changed their minds and decided to tell her of the terrible news. Her parents approached her slowly and told her they needed to tell her something. Ke walked over to her parents and asked what was wrong, as she could see the sorrowful expression on them both. Keshu's parents told her what they meant to tell her earlier. Ke just sat there, wide eyed mouth open slightly. Ke was devistated, especially that tomorrow was her 13th birthday. This would be the only birthday she would dread. She shook her head and ran off, she didn't want to show her parents what she was thinking. A small tear rolled down her cheek. She curled into a ball and cried herself to sleep. She woke up the next morning to her siblings saying "Happy Birthday Ke!"

Her family had a elk sitting in the snow for breakfast. They all sat around the elk and started to eat it. At the end of the wonderful meal, it was time to say goodbye. Keshu and her family lined up and gave her a huge hug. Her parents told her she would be fine and that she could come back to visit when ever she wanted too. Her sibling came up too and said they would miss her. WIth that she turned and ran off to start a new life.

The first few days weren't the best. The snow was coming down harder then ever, the snowflakes that were coming down made it even harder to see. Ke never gave up, so she wouldn't give up now. Even thought she just wanted to curl up into a ball and die. She knew there was a good life awaiting her somewhere. She just had to keep trudging on to find it. Ke did just that, her paws dragging in the fluffy snow. An hour after walking she stopped, but just for a minute. Her paws were throbbing with pain, but she noticed she had stopped in a forest of evergreen trees. She climbed up the biggest tree she could find and settled down on a thick branch. Ke was finished walking for the rest of the day. Keshu sat there on her back gazing at the stars. To her it looked like they were trying to tell her something, but she ignored the twinkling stars that were actually getting annoying now. So with that she yawned and closed her eyes. The stars weren't done annoying her with their constant twinkling though, they were in her dreams. Thousands and thousands of stars coming closer and closer to her in her dreams. They came so close that she woke up and looked up. The stars were still just the normal size.

Keshu was confused so she just went on back to sleep. Ke didn't sleep trough the whole night. The stars were there in her dreams again, she woke up as soon as her dream started. She finally knew what she should do, keep moving on. Ke jumped down from the tall tree and ran straight ahead. The ground was too hard and cold for her to walk on just for one more minute. Keshu jumped up to a random tree and leaped from tree to tree, her tail keeping her balanced.

~Still editing~

[yearofdragon]

what do you guys think about my form?

I would like to adopt!
Number: Four
Picture:
Name: Cappichino
Species: Eastern dragon
Personality: Cappichino is a Happy little dragon,He is always optimistic but when he needs to fight he will.
Likes: Milk,the outdoors,clouds,colorful birds.
Dislikes: Fighting,darkness,planes,frogs/toads.

Background

Screeeeeeeeecccchhhhh that was the last thing Cappichino heard before he was hit, he had wandered into the middle of the road and had been hit by a car. Cappichino couldnt see anything but he could hear footsteps coming torwards him,the footsteps stoped and Cappichino could feel himself being lifted into the air. The sound of footsteps started again,then Cappichino fell asleep


When Cappichino awoke he was on cold metal table. To Cappichinos surprise his sight had returned,Cappichio yawned and slowly sat up. Every inch of his body hurt,just as Cappichino was about to stand up a man in a white coat walked into the room"so you finally woke up"he whispered,as he walked up to the metal table. seconds after the man walked up to the table a woman walked into the room "Did i hurt it?" the woman asked, the man shook his head"you just stunned it thats all"the man answered"but im not sure what species this animal is"the woman walked over to Cappichinoand cautiously put her hand out to pet Cappichino, She brushed her hand down his head and onto his back"he's very soft" the woman whispered as she stopped petting Cappichino.

"Well, are you going to keep him?"the man asked,cappichino turned his head so he could look at the woman, the look of surprise that bloomed on her face was almost scary"i cant keep this thing"she yelled,Cappichinolooked at the man, then he looked at the woman. The room was silent then the man spoke "ok,if youre not going to keep him then i will take him to the pound" Cappichino had no clue what the pound was but as soon as the man mentioned it the woman left the room,Cappichino tilted his head "ok then,come on little guy"the man Whispered softly as he picked up Cappichino and carried him to his car.

Cappichino wondered what was going to happen to him,the woman seemed so afraid of the pound,should he be afraid too? The man set Cappichino in the passenger seat and then climbed in the car,Cappichino rested his head on the door, he was still thinking, A couple minutes later the car stopped and the man picked up Cappichino and opened the car door"we're here little guy" he said sadly as he got out of the car. When Cappichino saw thepound he grew less afraid of it,there was a painting of a cat and a dog on the front. when the man brought Cappichino inside the woman at the desk looked at them both curiously "so, what do we have here?"she asked the man,the man stared at her for a minute "a dog"he answered as he set Cappichino on the desk "it doesnt look like a dog" the desk woman said curiously. Cappichino could sense a trace of anger pulsing off the man"just put him in the pound"the man said angrily.the woman picked up cappichino and started to walk torwards a door just before the desk woman took cappichino behind the door the man whispered"good luck little buddy, i hope you find a good home".

When the woman took Cappichino behind the door he saw the real pound,all the dogs in cages whimpering loudly,Cappichino didnt want to stay here the woman walked over to a large cage and opened the doorshe gently set cappichino inside and closed the door. Cappichino watched her walk away,cappichino was tired,hungry and his side still hurt. After a little while Cappichino layed on the cement floor and sleep slowly swallowed him. Cappichino woke up when the pound door opened,Cappichino Ran to the edges of his cage and saw a little girl walk through the pound door, Cappichino was suddenly filled with hope, maybe this girl would want to take him home,after the girl walked into the pound the desk lady followed her. The girl stopped at every cage looking at the dogs inside,Cappichino Sat down and wrapped his tail around his paws,Finally the little girl ccame to Cappichinos cage, Cappichino sensed love radiate off her body,She liked him,she really liked him! The little girl pointed a Cappichino"i want that one" the She said cheerfully, the desk woman stared at the little girl in supprise"You Want that one? are you sure?" ,the little girl nodded the desk woman opened Cappichinos cage and put a collar on Cappichino and hooked a leash onto it,she walked cappichino out of the cage, the little girl ran her hand down cappichinos side "you're soft" she whisperedas she followe the desk woman into the lobby the littl girls mother was sitting in a chair "WHAT IS THAT"she yelled"GET IT AWAY FROM MY CHILD" Cappichino looked at the girls mother, the girl looked at Cappichino,"Mommy, your scaring him, please stop yelling"the little girl said"the other doggies wernt like this one, he's my favorite" the desk lady handed the leash to the little girl"You did say she could pick Any puppy she wanted"the desk woman stated,the girls mother sighed"yes, i did say that i guess we could get that puppy"Cappichino walked over to the girl and licked her hand "See, he likes me"the little girl said happily.

soon the girls mother and the little girl took Cappichino out to their car,Cappichino got to sit in the back seat with the little girl,the little girl was softly petting Cappichino "so"the girls mother asked"What should we name him?"the little girl shrugged,the girls mom took a sip of some thing"i know what e should name him!"the girls mom yelled"we should name him Cappichino!" the little girl nodded then looked at cappichino"Cappichino it is"she smiled.

After about ten minutes of driving the car stopped Cappichino looked out the window, a large house stood before him This must be my new househe thought, the girls mom opened the car dor and got out,the walked over to the girls car door and opened it,Cappichino followed her.the girls mom opened the front door and the girl walked inside so Cappichino followed her into the colossal house.It was getting late so the girl had to go to bed,She asked if Cappichino could sleep with her but ber mom said no.so Cappichino slept in the living room.When cappichino woke up everyone was gone,had they abandonded him? Cappichino waited and waited and waited and waited but noone ever came home so he looked for a way to escape,after an hour of looking,he heard the door open he ran to the door ,it was the girl, cappichino was so exicted he started licking her,then.she screamed.she backed away from Cappichino "your toungue looks like a snakes!!"she yelled"Your not a dog!!"the girl threw her backpack at Cappichino then opened the door and told Cappichino to get out.Cappichino Slowly walking out the door she hated him,she really hated him. After that cappichino Ran away to a forestwhere he happily lives now,but he will never forget that girl.

[kitten5862]

How big is he?
Is he a baby dragon?
I like that they thought he was a dog, and the girl liked him best of all the real dogs. I really did like your form. C=

[Sapphirescript]

Is it just my computer or do barley any pictures work? Most of them are clear boxes so I copy and paste the pictures in new tab but its quite anoyying.