The Artist Army

[NinthWolf]

Bast thats a really nice piece, i love how you've done the tail, ish so fluffeh!

Toki, i love that redline its really accurate.

Moonstar- try and make the face more fuller, what i mean by this is give the forhead a more rounded shape and the muzzle is more thicker.

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Would it be possible for me to get a redline on this?
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[Spotty]

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Would it be possible for me to get a redline on this?
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I think I could redline it for you^^. Is it any particular species or breed it's supposed to be?

[NinthWolf]

just any kind of canine, mostly aiming for a wolf but no particular breed.

[danny fenton]

Okay~
Headshot of my fursona~!!! Lineless too~
Trying to figure out my style.
If I could get some crits or a redline on her muzzle and ear, they look strange because I haven't really started shading it.
I'd also like to know what you guys think of her hair. Took me a while but I quite like the way it came out. What'chu'all think? :3

Reposting this~
Never got any feedback ^.^

It's beautiful! great job.


My best oekaki by far. I SUCK at shading, and all of the tools. all i can really do is draw.

[Spotty]

:lol: just any kind of canine, mostly aiming for a wolf but no particular breed.

Okay, I got it, I went for a wolfesque kind of redline. Or it's more like a blueline since your original was kind of redish. I really like your sketch, I just have a few pointers. The head could be slightly smaller and more pointy, the body could be a bit bulkier around the middle with a slightly straighter back (if it's going to curve it's better to curve it a outwards than inwards) and the hind legs could use a little bit of work with the joints and angles. Other than that it's great, I like the proportions and the pose feels natural.

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My best oekaki by far. I SUCK at shading, and all of the tools. all i can really do is draw.

That's an interesting theme with the split face. You should make more drawings on a similar theme, perhaps evolve the concept. Have you read the "How To Use Oekaki?" Guide? It explains all the tools, and then you just have to practise. I noticed that you only spent six minutes on your drawing, and I know for sure that I would never be able to draw anything in that amount of time. Perhaps you should try to let the drawing take the time it needs, the results are often worth it. Shading is hard to do, I still struggle with it a lot, but you seem to be on the right track with the light effects on the sunny side. Be bold with your shading, large and clear areas of light and shadow, I think it's hard to overdo it^^.

[NinthWolf]

Thank you very much for the redline, i'll post back here when i have 're-done- it. Thanks
( i was Taliska, we swapped usernamed for a June fools joke on CS)

[Calix]

TheNinthWolf- I'd redline but I see spotty already covered that ^^ I love those ears <3 The way you do fur is also really pretty :3

ella556- That's a cool concept c: It's probably best not to use a texture to color a large area since it tends to be hard on the eyes. The background on the right side is really cool though c:

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I just finished this commission for someone, redlines welcome:

I also finished this the other day and forgot to post:

Critique welcome and appreciated ^^

[jules_]

@Calix ~ Those are wonderful, I love how clean and neat your lines are! I have no critique other than on the first image, the wolf/lizard in the front, it's front leg that's closet to the other wolf/lizard seems a bit awkward. I'm not sure if this is correct, but it seems a bit to long, and I think to much of the shoulder is showing.

I need some help with photoshop. I downloaded some brushes and brush packs, but I don't see how I can open them onto the program to use. Can anyone give me some instructions on what to do?

[brian emo]

TheNinthWolf- I'd redline but I see spotty already covered that ^^ I love those ears <3 The way you do fur is also really pretty :3

ella556- That's a cool concept c: It's probably best not to use a texture to color a large area since it tends to be hard on the eyes. The background on the right side is really cool though c:

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I just finished this commission for someone, redlines welcome:

I also finished this the other day and forgot to post:

Critique welcome and appreciated ^^

In the first pic, the closest front paw of the lighter green dog looks to thin, as well as the elbow of the darker one.
In the second one, the blue guy's eyes, muzzle, and closest back leg look strange.
Other than those, nice job!^^

[emberonis]

These are all beautiful, guys! =3



This is probably my favorite adoptable I've ever made. Made it for CW's summer event, all zoo based. =3 Modified from the original lineart:

Just wanted to show it to you, because I'm so proud of it... And currently, a little blind to it's faults. Critique for future reference?