Book Writers' Nook

[Lupen]

Anyone know any good wolf/canine/dog names? I'd like something unique mostly, maybe something Native American, Alaskan, Russian, German... or any other languages that make you think of snow, nature, bold, wolves... If anyones read Fell by David Clement-davies, I like a lot of the names from that book.

[::BluePhoenix::]

Username: ::Bluephoenix::
Favorite kind of book to write: Fantasy
Add me to the Book Nook!!!

[Pharaoh]

Anybody mind critiquing me?



Lifeless Limbs
Might Grasp Me Cold
And On My Flesh
Fore'er Take Hold

And I, Be One
With Nature's Light
And Stand A Tree
Into The Night

That Maybe Soon
Away I'll Fly
My Ka Alight
In The Eastern Sky

But Here I Stand
Root In This Soil
That This Brown Mud
Be Where I Toil

That My Heavy Bark
And Weighted Boughs
Might Never Know
Of Such Soft Clouds

So Away I Hold
And Cry To Sleep
Knowing I Will Be
Forever Deep

Rooted In The Ground
To Never Be
Nothing More Than
A Fruitless Tree

[Boo & Shady]

Anybody mind critiquing me?



Lifeless Limbs
Might Grasp Me Cold
And On My Flesh
Fore'er Take Hold

And I, Be One
With Nature's Light
And Stand A Tree
Into The Night

That Maybe Soon
Away I'll Fly
My Ka Alight
In The Eastern Sky

But Here I Stand
Root In This Soil
That This Brown Mud
Be Where I Toil

That My Heavy Bark
And Weighted Boughs
Might Never Know
Of Such Soft Clouds

So Away I Hold
And Cry To Sleep
Knowing I Will Be
Forever Deep

Rooted In The Ground
To Never Be
Nothing More Than
A Fruitless Tree

That's soooo good! I'm jealous of your poetry skills

[Pharaoh]

Anybody mind critiquing me?



Lifeless Limbs
Might Grasp Me Cold
And On My Flesh
Fore'er Take Hold

And I, Be One
With Nature's Light
And Stand A Tree
Into The Night

That Maybe Soon
Away I'll Fly
My Ka Alight
In The Eastern Sky

But Here I Stand
Root In This Soil
That This Brown Mud
Be Where I Toil

That My Heavy Bark
And Weighted Boughs
Might Never Know
Of Such Soft Clouds

So Away I Hold
And Cry To Sleep
Knowing I Will Be
Forever Deep

Rooted In The Ground
To Never Be
Nothing More Than
A Fruitless Tree

That's soooo good! I'm jealous of your poetry skills ;)

Awww, thanks! I make them when I'm upset or emotional, so a lot of them sound sort of emo. But it makes them tons better.

[Boo & Shady]

Anybody mind critiquing me?



Lifeless Limbs
Might Grasp Me Cold
And On My Flesh
Fore'er Take Hold

And I, Be One
With Nature's Light
And Stand A Tree
Into The Night

That Maybe Soon
Away I'll Fly
My Ka Alight
In The Eastern Sky

But Here I Stand
Root In This Soil
That This Brown Mud
Be Where I Toil

That My Heavy Bark
And Weighted Boughs
Might Never Know
Of Such Soft Clouds

So Away I Hold
And Cry To Sleep
Knowing I Will Be
Forever Deep

Rooted In The Ground
To Never Be
Nothing More Than
A Fruitless Tree

That's soooo good! I'm jealous of your poetry skills

Awww, thanks! I make them when I'm upset or emotional, so a lot of them sound sort of emo. But it makes them tons better.

LOL thats what I do! XD

[Pharaoh]

That's soooo good! I'm jealous of your poetry skills ;)

Awww, thanks! I make them when I'm upset or emotional, so a lot of them sound sort of emo. But it makes them tons better.

LOL thats what I do! XD

Px It's a great stress reliever too. If you want I can post more; I even have one that isn't depressing. lol

[Boo & Shady]

Awww, thanks! I make them when I'm upset or emotional, so a lot of them sound sort of emo. But it makes them tons better.

LOL thats what I do! XD

Px It's a great stress reliever too. If you want I can post more; I even have one that isn't depressing. lol

Sure, if it's no trouble for you, I'd love to read more !

[Pharaoh]

Well, here goes!



Anger's Despicable
A Mystery In Red
That Takes You Through The Phases
Of Jealousy And Dread
Hatred Is A Burning
It Boils Away The Blood
And All Who Know You, Fear You
When You Cannot Find Their Love
Today My Heart Was Shattered
My Face Was Teared In Blue
And Worst Of All My Deep Charades
Was The One I Played On You


- - - - -


I Never Thought
A Written Page
And A Way To See
Could Be Defeated
By The Skill Of The
Brave And The Few
And How Acting Isn't Acting
But Taking Someone's Reality
And Wearing It For A Night
And If It's Happy
Everyone Smiles
But If It's Sad
The Tears Will Flow
And The Heavy Weight
On My Shoulders
Vanishes In The Moment
The Laughing
In The Act It Disappears
But Today I Did Not See The Joy
I Only Saw The Tears


- - - - -


People Often Tell Me
I Am Amazing
Talented
Gifted
That I Am Sweet
Sincere
Intelligent
They Say I'm Fun
Free
Witty
But It's All A Ruse
A Lie
Liars Are Special People
They Can Wear Faces
Masks
And There Is None On This Earth
That Knows My True Self
Not Even Me

They Say I Have A Knowledge
A Great Faith
They Don't Know
The Half Of It
How I Act Mature
Or Younger Than I Ought To
And How I Change
Say Different Things
To Different People
How Among Friends
I Am Unique And Ever-Changing
As If I Am Not Really
Who They Think
But A Mirage
In The Soft Sands
Promising Water
Bringing Only Pain

I Learn People
I Read Them
And I Know How To Act
What To Say
Some I Am Sarcastic
Others Funny
Occasionally Shy
But Never The Truth
And Those Lucky Enough
To See Through This Game
Learn Very Fast
That I Am A Different Person

Unlike What I Claim
My Life Is A Mystery
Nobody Ever Knows
What Really Lies
Behind Such Closed Doors
How My Life Is Like A Dream
A Movie On A Screen
I've Met People
Others Only Fantasize About
And Been To Places
People Don't Even Know Exist
And I Never Say A Word
About My Life
Because I Know The Truth
Would Only Sound
Like Lies

I Don't Want To Be A Liar


- - - - -


A Ghostly Night
The Pale Moonlight
Grows Bright
And Shows A Truth
The Forms Of Living
Forms Of Dead
As Creatures Creep
From Their Earthy Beds
On Hallow's Eve
With A Full Moon High
The Dead Will Walk
And Hear My Cry
Beware The Chants
Of Those You Spy
For The Witches' Call
May Not Pass You By
"Let Here You Come
And Hear A Tale
For The Devil Speaks
His Will Won't Fail
Don't Try To Run
And Don't Take Flight
The Moon Will Seek You
On This Chilling Night"

Happy Halloween


- - - - -


Dreams
Fade
Turn To Dust
Expressions
Faces
Sick Of It All
One Day
I Will Dream
A Dream
Come True
But For Now
Settle With
Broken Wings
That Cannot Fly


- - - - -


Life turns up and down.
Life turns around.
Life turns inside out.
Life turns all about.
Yet it seems that life
Will just keep turning.
All you can do
Is try to hang on.


- - - - -


"You're Ugly
Stupid
Unloved
Undervalued"
Nobody Knows
But People Hurt
Words Hurt
Actions Hurt
And When I
Am Hurting Most
Is When I
Am Hurting Least
Because I
Can Bottle
Up Pain
Much Easier
Than Sunshine
Sunshine Is Slippery
It Flies About
But Pain Lingers
Never Fades
For Every Word
That Breaks
My Heart
A Shard
Of Shattered Hope
Falls In My Jar
And That's
Much More
Than Sunny Rays
On Sunny Days
Because Sunshine
Is Fleeting
And Pain
Is Everywhere




Let me see if I can find the funny one...

[Boo & Shady]

Well, here goes!



Anger's Despicable
A Mystery In Red
That Takes You Through The Phases
Of Jealousy And Dread
Hatred Is A Burning
It Boils Away The Blood
And All Who Know You, Fear You
When You Cannot Find Their Love
Today My Heart Was Shattered
My Face Was Teared In Blue
And Worst Of All My Deep Charades
Was The One I Played On You


- - - - -


I Never Thought
A Written Page
And A Way To See
Could Be Defeated
By The Skill Of The
Brave And The Few
And How Acting Isn't Acting
But Taking Someone's Reality
And Wearing It For A Night
And If It's Happy
Everyone Smiles
But If It's Sad
The Tears Will Flow
And The Heavy Weight
On My Shoulders
Vanishes In The Moment
The Laughing
In The Act It Disappears
But Today I Did Not See The Joy
I Only Saw The Tears


- - - - -


People Often Tell Me
I Am Amazing
Talented
Gifted
That I Am Sweet
Sincere
Intelligent
They Say I'm Fun
Free
Witty
But It's All A Ruse
A Lie
Liars Are Special People
They Can Wear Faces
Masks
And There Is None On This Earth
That Knows My True Self
Not Even Me

They Say I Have A Knowledge
A Great Faith
They Don't Know
The Half Of It
How I Act Mature
Or Younger Than I Ought To
And How I Change
Say Different Things
To Different People
How Among Friends
I Am Unique And Ever-Changing
As If I Am Not Really
Who They Think
But A Mirage
In The Soft Sands
Promising Water
Bringing Only Pain

I Learn People
I Read Them
And I Know How To Act
What To Say
Some I Am Sarcastic
Others Funny
Occasionally Shy
But Never The Truth
And Those Lucky Enough
To See Through This Game
Learn Very Fast
That I Am A Different Person

Unlike What I Claim
My Life Is A Mystery
Nobody Ever Knows
What Really Lies
Behind Such Closed Doors
How My Life Is Like A Dream
A Movie On A Screen
I've Met People
Others Only Fantasize About
And Been To Places
People Don't Even Know Exist
And I Never Say A Word
About My Life
Because I Know The Truth
Would Only Sound
Like Lies

I Don't Want To Be A Liar


- - - - -


A Ghostly Night
The Pale Moonlight
Grows Bright
And Shows A Truth
The Forms Of Living
Forms Of Dead
As Creatures Creep
From Their Earthy Beds
On Hallow's Eve
With A Full Moon High
The Dead Will Walk
And Hear My Cry
Beware The Chants
Of Those You Spy
For The Witches' Call
May Not Pass You By
"Let Here You Come
And Hear A Tale
For The Devil Speaks
His Will Won't Fail
Don't Try To Run
And Don't Take Flight
The Moon Will Seek You
On This Chilling Night"

Happy Halloween


- - - - -


Dreams
Fade
Turn To Dust
Expressions
Faces
Sick Of It All
One Day
I Will Dream
A Dream
Come True
But For Now
Settle With
Broken Wings
That Cannot Fly


- - - - -


Life turns up and down.
Life turns around.
Life turns inside out.
Life turns all about.
Yet it seems that life
Will just keep turning.
All you can do
Is try to hang on.


- - - - -


"You're Ugly
Stupid
Unloved
Undervalued"
Nobody Knows
But People Hurt
Words Hurt
Actions Hurt
And When I
Am Hurting Most
Is When I
Am Hurting Least
Because I
Can Bottle
Up Pain
Much Easier
Than Sunshine
Sunshine Is Slippery
It Flies About
But Pain Lingers
Never Fades
For Every Word
That Breaks
My Heart
A Shard
Of Shattered Hope
Falls In My Jar
And That's
Much More
Than Sunny Rays
On Sunny Days
Because Sunshine
Is Fleeting
And Pain
Is Everywhere




Let me see if I can find the funny one...

I like this one! It's true! Or, at least for me XD