Form:
Username:
aqua972401
Favorite type of RP:
Animal, fantasy, human,
Sample of writing:
Autumn lay out in the field, relaxing next to her family. The small herd of sheep. She flicked her ears this way and that, listening for any danger that might be approaching. Nothing. She let out a sigh of boredom and stood up slowly, stretching her stiff body before walking to lick one of the three day old baby sheep. The sheep looked up at Autumn and let out a small baaaaa and Autumn barked a small greeting before licking the little sheeps face, clearing it of dirt and warding off the flies that were around her eyes, nose, and mouth. As she stood there in the pasture, the world around her was rather fair. A small breeze was blowing gently, ruffling the green growing grass the sheep were enjoying. The sky was rather blue, only a couple of puffy clouds in the sky. Autumn knew dawn was still a little ways off, so she left the baby sheep and began circling the flock, keping them in a close bundle. She hadn't lost a sheep yet, and didn't plan to. She flock obeyed her without any complaints because Autumn was family to her, and they did anything she said. She protected them, as long as they obeyed her.
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As the wind ruffled her snow white fur, she closed her eyes for a few seconds obsorbing the warmth of the weather. The sun was heating down on them, so she began to herd the herd towards the lake, so they could all cool off. So they began to approach the water, when she stopped them right before they entered the water. The flock stopped and stood there waiting patently as Autumn examined the water, making sure it was safe for them to enter. Autumn gave the bark of approval and the flock waded into the water and began to drink up the nice cool water. Autumn, after making sure no danger was around, entered the cool water cooling her hot body off. She was panting slighty and lapped up the water and took a quick dip, cooling her whole body off, before swimming back to the shore and standing on her favorite walk, keeping watch over the whole flock.
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She had heard her master talking about bringing the sheep in for the night, because he had talked to some of the local farmers and there had seemed to have been a lot of fox attacks lately. So, he had given her the command that when she sun starts to set, she was to bring the sheep in immediatly without delay. Autumns master had complete comfidence in bringing the herd in, so she had a big responsiblity of getting the sheep in the barn, and up the ramps, onto the second floor, all before dark. She was zoned out when she shook her head clear of the thoughts and focused once again on the sheep. One of the sheep was beggining to wander a bit too far away from the flock so she let out a warning bark, but of course the sheep payed no attention to her. So Autumn ran down to the sheep and began biting at her heels forcing her back into the flock. The whole flock glanced nervously at Autumn, and they all huddle back over out of the lake and into the pasture of grass. Autumn gave the sheep a rather mean growl before lying down by the herd, flicking her ears left and right, listening for any signs of danger.
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Her stomach was rather swollen at the time because she was soon to give birth to 10 pups, but it wasn't because she wanted to. it was because her master had made her. She had been placed with an agressive male a few months ago and her master wanted to sell the pups for money, but she wouldn't let him touch her pups. She would hide them in the barn and would take them out to the field with her everyday.
Any semi-lit/lit RPs you have:
No, but I do hope to start one soon. ^.^
Also! I would like tons of critique on this and if you could scroll through my posts and see some others and critique about those too, that would be helpful! I would like to become better, but I need someone to tell me how I can do better. Thank you.
