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[Boo & Shady]

How does this sound for a ghost horse poem?

The sun shone down and beamed on leather,
the horse's mane was soft like a feather,
the stallion was a creature like I'd never,
ever seen before.

His eyes were like jewels, how they'd shine!
I needed him to be mine, only mine,
before word traveled down the grape vine,
I had to have him.

Heart pumping, leather halter in hand,
I'd jump on him if I knew I'd land,
but he was a ghost so I'd fall on the sand,
but how I needed that horse.

And down my cheek rolled a glistening tear,
but my sobs nobody would hear,
and in my body and brain was fear,
as the ghost horse galloped away...

See see? ^_^

I see, I see! That sounds amazing. Not many people are good at poems ^-^ (or at least, I'm not?)

I'm not either XD But Dinky Bandit is! She's really good! Wayyyy better than me!

[Pharaoh]

Username: Meissa
Favorite kind of book to write: Fiction, or Poetry, but mostly Short Stories.
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[Wolfin]

New story idea!
The prologue starts with General Brutus, an alsation, is waiting for General Brook, Golden Retriver, and General Jet, black lab, who are the other two squad-leaders. All dogs in the squads have to wear a beige camo hat and can wear black sunglasses if they become a sergant or general. When Brook and Jet come they bring two wolf pups but are scared as they could grow up to kill the rest of the dogs. Brutus says that they will be recruited into Squad Alpha. The female wakes up and proclaims that her name is Charlie and her brother is Bullet.
Brook objects that all females are sent to Squad-Charlie. Jet reminds her that Charlie is a wolf and so will be able to step up to the challenge. They then leave and Brutus sees that Charlie has one blind eye.

The rest of the story is in the view of an american white staffordshire terrier called Sarge. He was abandoned by his owners and left out to die. During his aimless travelling he finds a patrolling wolf pup called Bullet. Bullet attacks him and Sarge fights back until another wolf pup attacks him from the other side. Charlie.
They both drag him back to Base-Camp and report him to General Brutus who sees how he must have fought back and welcomes him into Squad-Alpha.
Haven't worked out the rest, just at the end I've got a picture of Sarge and Bullet talking as Generals.

Any crit?

[MagicGirl]

On here we can post links to our storys and post ideas for others on here, right?

[Pharaoh]

-pokes post-

How do I know if/when I'm accepted?

[Aven]

When I say ^^ And you're accepted.


I. Liek. Teh. Poem. 8DDDD

[Pharaoh]

Wonderful! :3 I do have some poetry I'd love critiqued too... when I stop being lazy and get it up. xD

[Aven]

X3

[Boo & Shady]

OMG, very proud of my friend today! She wrote me an acrostic poem for my birthday, today, and my name is Bailey. Go figure. XD
It's very sweet!

[Lupen]

Username: .: Lupen the Wolf :.
Favorite kind of book to write: Fiction (Animals/fantasy) Also like writing scary/paranormal stories once and awhile for fun.
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