Book Writers Nook V.2

[peachie.]

Added Dreamwave, but I'd tell you to revise it a few times. ^^
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OK, I have this awsome book idea but I want some opinions on it.

-Because The Wind Blows-
A Story based on Chinese and Japanese Culture

Main characters: Princess Panima 'Pan' and The Warrior Kerzin 'Ker'

Kind of a twist on Romeo & Juliet, except with Japanese culture and an expanded plot.
The whole thing is about how [I'll try not to give away too many spoliers ] a princess's, Panima's, kingdom is defeated and burned in war. The king of a neighboring country sends a warrior, Kerzin [Still thinking about his name], to escort her back to his kingdom, where he has engaged her to his first son. Panima falls in love with Kerzin, while he protects her from assassins and monsters on the way back, but Kerzin [all honorable and such] will not admit his love for her. Finally, after Kerzin is badly injured [and poisoned] on the border of the kingdom, he admits his love for Panima. But, they know they their love is forbidden. Panima suggests that they run away to live alone, and restart her country. Kerzin basically agrees, but as time progresses his injuries [and poisoning] grows worse. Finally Panima, fearing for the life of her lover, lets a patrol from the country take them back to care for Kerzin. Panima is engaged, and after Kerzin heals he is debriefed of his time with the princess and [because he fell in love, his punishment was] sent to the frontlines. Panima, still in love with her savior, begs her fiancee to let him stay with her and promises that she would marry him. Grudgingly, he agrees and lets Kerzin stay at the palace, but plots his death to end Panima's love for him. After several fails at murder, the prince [name unknown at this point] frames Kerzin for murder and gives him a choice between a death sentence or exile. Unwilling to let Panima go, he accepts exile, but is brutally tortured before being left off in the remains of Panima's country to die. [To be continued.....]

So, what do you think? I don't know, I'm probably going to change some of it and haven't decided on the names yet.
So, comments, critic, advice? I'm open to anything. ^^

Wow. 0.0 Amazing. :3

[Noel]

More than 6 is fine. ^^

Arg, I wish I had seen that.
Wow, is everyone here trying to be published? I feel like a little kid, I'm probably younger than all of you, and I've only been writing for about two months.

[peachie.]

I have been writing for almost half a year now and I love it. Anyways I have been writing a story and I want to see what you guys think about the blurb and I need help with the title.

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No Name. (suggest a name please after reading the blurb)

When a fire ruins Ruka and her pack's home she thinks everything is lost. Her mother keeps trying to match her up with a male-wolf named Marth but then she finds a lone male-wolf that she falls in love with. Aren and her think everything is perfect until some evil Horows decide to find three wolves in the wild and turn them human. Will Ruka, Aren and Marth turn back to wolves and escape? Or will they rest as humans? And what man will she choose? 

(Horrows are like wizards)

[sealsnoot]

@Hikari-879: The contest has a form you can fill out on the first page. And thank you. ^^
I hope to write it up later... but I have no muse for it anymore. ^^;

Howling in the Rain, that sounds good. I have no name suggestions, though.
Keep it up. :)

I've been writing for several years now, but I don't think its how long you've been writing that counts, its how much. It all comes with experience.

[blue_dun]

I'm not trying to be published, I just write for fun mostly. Though it would be awesome to be someday published.

[peachie.]

I'm not trying to be published, I just write for fun mostly. Though it would be awesome to be someday published.

Same here

[Noel]

I'm not trying to be published, I just write for fun mostly. Though it would be awesome to be someday published.

Same here

Well, its nice to know its not just me. I've only written the first couple chapters of a book, (46 pages, single spaced) and some short things. I recently got a story idea I'm going to start soon, but that's all I've done. Like previously said, I only started writing recently. :)

[Lil'Tiger]

Me too. However I feel like writing a romance book, but I'd have to make it seriously long o3o.

[Noel]

Me too. However I feel like writing a romance book, but I'd have to make it seriously long o3o.

I've never written romance... is it fun to do? My idea is one of those incredibly complicated ones.

[Lil'Tiger]

My romance book I'd like to write is about a woman finding her love on a plane, going somewhere (I don't know where yet x3.) Then after awhile stuff happens then the ending is kinda expected D8.