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Semicolons and proper use of them
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Parenthesis
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56%
Run-on sentences
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24%
 
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Re: United Literary Minds of CS ~Please Join~

Postby Captain Hammer » Sun Jun 12, 2011 5:25 pm

No problem! And remember that spaces come after commas!

I'm sorry, but I usually don't get the chance to correct people so I may annoyingly do it alot in this club.
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Re: United Literary Minds of CS ~Please Join~

Postby Haagen-Daagen » Sun Jun 12, 2011 5:27 pm

It's absolutely fine. I like my work being criticised, even if it's as simple as a post. :) I need to be reminded several times in order to remember it.
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Re: United Literary Minds of CS ~Please Join~

Postby Captain Hammer » Sun Jun 12, 2011 5:29 pm

All of the letter 'I's need to be capitalized when refering to yourself and The first letter of a sentence is always capitalized. I'm such a freak! X3
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Re: United Literary Minds of CS ~Please Join~

Postby Haagen-Daagen » Sun Jun 12, 2011 5:30 pm

See? I keep messing up my typing! I fail at typing, but when I actually write I make absolutely no mistakes. Ugh, I am so very annoying myself. :(
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Re: United Literary Minds of CS ~Please Join~

Postby Mz. Hyde » Sun Jun 12, 2011 5:30 pm

So am I :D

Gah. I handed in a short story the other day, which I had proofread until my eyes fell out and guess what. I got a merit, because I forgot to punctuate didn't.....
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Re: United Literary Minds of CS ~Please Join~

Postby Haagen-Daagen » Sun Jun 12, 2011 5:34 pm

Dang. That stinks. :( I type really badly even though I watch the keys when I do it. I'm going to fail my computer class next year. XD
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Re: United Literary Minds of CS ~Please Join~

Postby Captain Hammer » Sun Jun 12, 2011 5:34 pm

Oh, you have no idea how many times that has happened to me, Surrender.
And don't worry Doglover (If you don't mind me calling you that), it happens to everyone now and again. I catch myself failing at simply typing even if I know what I should actually be typing in my head.
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Re: United Literary Minds of CS ~Please Join~

Postby Haagen-Daagen » Sun Jun 12, 2011 5:36 pm

I'm so glad others do that too. It's okay for you to call me that. As long as I know you are talking to me, I'm fine. :)
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Re: United Literary Minds of CS ~Please Join~

Postby Mz. Hyde » Sun Jun 12, 2011 5:40 pm

I got it back and it was circled in red pen!
They ruined my work with it, honestly, and because of my naturally linked sloping (MESSY!) handwriting, almost the whole story was circled. Even the bits that were actually correct.
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Re: United Literary Minds of CS ~Please Join~

Postby Captain Hammer » Sun Jun 12, 2011 5:41 pm

Surrender, I totally get that. My handwriting only gets worse as I type more and summer-vaction more. My t's look like f's...

Great, Doglover! So I must rant about this a little. I'm in a semi-lit roleplay, but one person, WHENEVER their character says something, they don't use "" they use '' wich is incorrect! And's is always:
"dhdhdjs" said Jane.
"Hsueifdjf." said Other Person.
"Bleckyblecky" said John.
(Not real names or actually what anyone said"
It simply gets annoying when is "said, "said", "said" all the time! What about exclaimed, answered, questioned, wondered, implied, said softly and angelicly? Anything to spruce it up a bit, right?
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