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Postby eden . » Sun Jan 13, 2013 11:33 am

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the first part of a story that I'm planning on writing, but I haven't figured out the complete plot for sure, yet. I'm basically posting my drabble in short story parts, therefore, because I have no idea what else I'm supposed to do with them.


      It must've been the summer of 1956 when I first met him. I was a tottering, teetering, awkward four year old child whose hair was to big for her head and couldn't find the dexterity needed to walk in a straight line. Mama had taken me to the park to play with all the other nice children in polka dot skirts and smartly ironed pants. I never liked going because I didn't like standing at the side of the swings while the other children screamed in delight without me. Hide-and-seek, tag, cops and robbers...I knew of them, but I never experienced them first hand. Mama like it very much, though, because she got to talk to all the other mamas about her problems, so naturally I ended up going, too.
      He was standing next to the empty bench farthest from the playground. It was shrouded under a huge oak tree, its leaves casting him in a cool, well-welcomed shade, I'd imagine, in the shimmering heat of that July fourteenth, 1956. I remember watching him because of how badly he stood out in the park. He was incredibly tall--especially to a four year old child whose mother seemed like an absolute giant to her. He must have been, by my estimation, an inch or so over six feet. Underneath his slate hat, his hair was steel gray and peppered with black and white. Despite the sun that we had been getting that past year, he was as pale as a sheet. And all he did was stand in place and watch the children run without rhyme nor reason. But why he had my childish attention, however, was because he looked out of place, like me. It was because of this strange connection, perhaps, that I wobbled over to him under the oak tree. He did not turn to look, acknowledge, or ask who my other was as others would have, although I could tell that he knew I had approached. He continued to watch the children run about and squeal like piglets. I followed his gaze but failed to see anything incredibly engaging, so I finally asked curiously and shamelessly in the way children do, "Do you want to play, too?"
      Regardless, I remember feeling strange asking this question because I was addressing a towering mass that did not seem to betray any sort of emotion. He turned his head to consider his pudgy form for a moment as if to check if I was serious before he smiled a little, finally bringing brightness into his deadpan eyes. He had the smile of a man that had seen many things. The slight wrinkles in his face became deeper and his almost colorless eyes seemed even more tired. He looked haggard, worn, and almost as if he was lost and searching for something essential to his very existence. Why was he alive? Why was he standing there at that very moment? Who was left for him? Those were the sort of questions his eyes held.
      But as a child, of course, I failed to recognize these things. All I saw then was the sparkling laughter that arose onto his face as he said with amusement, "No, dear, but thank you for the offer." He had to stoop over almost half his height to come even close to eye-level with me without completely crouching down.
      His voice was always something I could never quite place to this day. It was rich and heavy, very pleasant to listen to and easy to fall asleep to, and mixed with such a variety of accents that it was impossible to tell from whence he came. Some parts lilted and rumbled with arcane aura while more predominating timbres made his voice go up in tone at strange places. It made his "th"s slur into "z" and his "r"s throaty. If I were to try and label it in modern dialects, I would claim it to be French in some areas, German in others, distinctly Spanish for these parts, and incredibly Eastern Asian for the remaining ones. It was the sort of tongue that had spoken so many languages in his lifetime that they had all blended together into something exotic. It was obvious then, even to a four year old, frizzly haired child, that he had seen and been to many places.
      "Annie?" mama called me then. I turned to give her my attention and eagerly gestured to the man beside me, excited to show off my new friend. Her face, however, was stony and pale as she approached me. I abruptly dropped my grin and my grin as she extended her own, glaring at the man at my side.
      "Didn't I tell you to stay at the playground?" she scolded me as she seized my hand. She had not told me to stay at the playground.
      "Yes, mama," I said as I allowed her to drag me away, staring over my shoulder at the man watching me leave, his back now straightened.
      "Don't leave like that," she was saying to me, shaking my arm a little and making it wobble. I did not tear my gaze away from the man's.
      "Annie Banbury!" mama suddenly snapped, squeezing my chipmunk cheeks in one hand and whipping it around to face her's. "Pay attention when I am speaking to you. Do not talk to strangers. Do you understand? That man might've been dangerous!"
      I had no idea what sort of "dangers" mama could've been referring to, but nodded as best I could in her vice-like grip. She gave a heavy, regretful sigh as I did so and continued, "If you don't listen to mommy, we can't come to the park anymore. Do you understand?"
      I nodded because that was the answer she was expecting, and I even partially feared never coming back to this place ever again. The children, in my mind, were no loss to me, but where else was I to meet this mysterious stranger? My reasons, of course, were kept secret. Mama's expression softened as she tried to flatten out my unruly hair.
      "Don't be mad, sweetheart," she begged me. "Mommy's just doing this because she loves you."
      "I know mama," I said to appease her. She smiled and rose, taking my hand in hers and leading be back to the other children. I looked back, hoping I could steal one more look of the man once more, but he was gone.

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Re: The Advanced Writer's Club

Postby princess pudding » Sun Jan 13, 2013 11:43 am

      Well, it's growing...slowly x3
      You guys are accepted.

      >> I'm just going to start off a conversation.
      You can post, by the way, as long as you’re up on the list.

      I'm writing a story {possibly novel} based on a young witch.
      In your eyes, what comes to mind when you think witch?
      Green, ugly and bitter, or cute black cats and funky dresses?

      I'm trying to get a visual on how readers picture certain fantasy characters.
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Re: The Advanced Writer's Club

Postby abandoned. » Sun Jan 13, 2013 11:45 am

❅Cider Chi. wrote:
      Well, it's growing...slowly x3
      You guys are accepted.

      >> I'm just going to start off a conversation.
      You can post, by the way, as long as you’re up on the list.

      I'm writing a story {possibly novel} based on a young witch.
      In your eyes, what comes to mind when you think witch?
      Green, ugly and bitter, or cute black cats and funky dresses?

      I'm trying to get a visual on how readers picture certain fantasy characters.


I picture them as normal everyday people honestly ono
that is--in modern times
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Re: The Advanced Writer's Club

Postby eden . » Sun Jan 13, 2013 11:46 am

Ty for accepting <3

Oh I have a witch character actually. She looks super normal save for the fact that she's like 5'2"
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Re: The Advanced Writer's Club

Postby princess pudding » Sun Jan 13, 2013 11:55 am

      @asian no problem ^^
      I do have a witch character somewhere around here,
      but I've had people tell me she's too similar to anime and won't let me join. >.<

      I'm trying with a different outlook for a witch.
      Not really a normal kind modern, but rather, funky outfits, a black cat and michevious personality.
      Completely overdone and stands out far more then she should, I suppose.
      If it's seriously considered anime, then whatever.
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Re: The Advanced Writer's Club

Postby crescent + cheep » Sun Jan 13, 2013 11:56 am

Witch, huh?
Um...
I tend to think of a woman with chestnut brown hair, brown eyes with gold freckles, sometimes
immaculate, sometimes ruffled, she knows how to use her looks to her advantage, has and owl
and a ferret, can confound people with her voice... etc.
Maybe I went a bit overboard there, but that's what the witch in my head looks like.

To be honest, I've never really written about witches, except for a small paragraph I wrote a while
ago. this is the edited version, idk what I think about it, but maybe it helps. I'll take this opportunity
to ask for an opinion on the text.


EDIT: I agree with Arty about her character - independent and doesn't fit in and doesn't mind.
She sat on the edge of an ancient wooden desk, watching me. Me. It felt so good to be given some attention for once, attention
I didn't find out on the field. She had me entranced, I was unable to look away from her. I couldn't hear anything except her soft
voice, audible even over the distance between us, couldn't say anything but her movements, couldn't feel anything, not even the
cold stone floor I knelt upon. Her words echoed in my head, eating through all doubts I had about her. They bit through my body and
changed my very soul. I was hers. She knew everything about my, I could hide nothing. I had become her slave.
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Re: The Advanced Writer's Club

Postby Artesian » Sun Jan 13, 2013 12:06 pm

@Cider. I picture a witch as someone with an independent and agile mind. Someone who doesn't fit in with the system, knows it, and doesn't care. Usually, I picture them as being very good with people, except that they are generally perceived as frightening and eerie. They have a spiritual connection to nature, generally, and may or may not be evil and insane.

As far as visuals, I've been far too influenced by Pratchett, and I picture a witch as a grumpy older lady in a black pointy hat and black dress (not a dressy sort of black either. Just black). And maybe an ill-tempered cat nearby.

Also, btw, Veruca with two c's, Verucca, means a wart. Like from Charlie and the Chocolate Factory. Small, flattish, wartlike protrusion. I still think it's a pretty name, but it has some... connections you might not want.
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Re: The Advanced Writer's Club

Postby anchor QUITTING » Sun Jan 13, 2013 12:11 pm

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    slam ( 5th link ) wrote:If words could describe my anguish, they’d be the long kind that even teachers struggle to spell. They’d be the ones that end sharply and make you blink in surprise. The words that make tears stream down even the palest of faces.

    “How are you,” you asked me, your voice smooth as silk. I wanted to draw back my arm and leave a stinging mark on your cheek, but I couldn’t bring myself to hurt you, even though you hurt me. So I just told you “I’ve been better” and shoved past. I didn’t turn to see the confused and sad look that I know lingered in your eyes; I know you well.

    I wish time could turn back. I wish you could hold me in your arms again and press your lips to mine and tell me everything will be all right, because right now, it’s not. Sometimes, when I close my eyes, I see that image of us running through the wheat field, holding hands and laughing. I miss those days.

    Is it bad that sometimes I hope that you wake up and miss them too?


    I lay my pencil down finally, and my eyes drift to find Conner out of habit. He's already looking at me, though, and I avert my eyes to the board, where Ms. Eastwood is putting up something in her messy writing. As she steps to the side, I read the words to myself.

    "Homecoming?" I can't stop myself, and the minute the word leaves my lips, all eyes are on me. I feel my throat constrict as they watch me, and offer them a small smile. In one, sweeping motion, everyone turns back around, except Conner. His turquoise gaze is still locked on mine, yet I'm not intimidated. I stare back until he turns away as well, blushing.

    Something about seeing him look away makes me bite my lip to hold back tears. He doesn't want to look at me? I shake my head, allowing a few loose strands of my black hair to fall over my eyes, and my fingers fly to the cuffs of my jacket sleeves. I tug them down, but my mind is elsewhere.

    Who am I supposed to go to homecoming with? Conner and I just broke up, and, quite frankly, I don't want him back. Actually, that's not honest; I do want him back, but he hurt me too badly for me to be able to admit to anyone but myself. I found him in bed with my best friend, Katrina. I'm still angry at Kat, but something inside of me can't be angry at Conner for over five minutes. But I can't just forgive and forget, no, it doesn't work that way. I need to play my cards right or I'm just going to get hurt again.

    The bell rings suddenly, jerking me from my thoughts. I gather my books in my arms, watching Conner from the corner of my eye. He seems to be packing incredibly slowly, and I speed up. He does too, and I narrow my eyes. Does he want to be alone together, the last two in the classroom? Sorry, Con, that isn't gonna happen, I thought to myself, and threw myself out the door. I take of running in the direction of my locker, and I can tell Conner is behind me, because I can hear him calling, "Will! Will, wait!"

    I don't stop; rather, I speed up. My fingers fly to my lock, clicking it open – I never lock it – and immediately reach for my backpack. Holding it up by one strap, I stuff all of my books and papers inside, not bothering to take the ones that don't fit. I can see Conner coming around the corner, can hear his voice flowing through the halls. "Will?" It cries. "Please!"

    His eyes meet mine for the second time today, and I hurriedly shuffle away, trying to blend in with the crowd of high-schoolers. Soon, the boy's voice is drowned out, and I breath a sigh of relief; I escaped.

    • • •


    "No, Nash, please, enlighten me," I say, grinning over at my best friend. He's propped up against the window sill, his dark brown hair in a messy, windswept style across his forehead. He's smiling back at me, and in his arm he holds his cell phone.

    " 'I'd love to get together with you. Are you free Friday night?' I'm going on a date with her! With Anna Scott, the girl of my dreams! Bells, how do I reply?" He looks as if he's about to cry, and I shake my head.

    My fingers dart out, closing around the small phone. Nash's mouth opens in protest, then closes again as she slides over to me, draping an arm across my shoulders and looking down at the screen. Anyone who walked in and didn't know any better would've thought we were a couple; everyone in the small town of Riverfall, Virginia knew we were just close friends, though, so that wouldn't happen, anyway.

    Anna, I typed, I'm free on Friday. c: Why don't I come over and pick you up from your house? Send me the address. Nash's hands tighten around me, and I can feel his chin bump my shoulder twice as he nods. I raise my finger, and tap send lightly, then toss the phone away from me and shut my eyes. Nash's arms relax and he pulls me to his chest, running his hand through my black hair.

    "Why would anyone ever want to hurt you?" he asks quietly, and I squeeze my eyes tighter shut; the tears will make their way down my cheeks if I don't. So I just curl up in my best friend's arms, my breathing even with his.

    I open my eyes, and his black ones burn into my own with an intensity that can only be described as fiery. "I don't know," I whisper. "I guess I'm just not good enough."


    flashbacks ( 4th link ) wrote:“Mom says come inside.” I ignored the voice, instead turning to snap a photo of the treehouse. It was dark against the snowy white sky, and I mentally congratulated myself.

    “Reese!” my sister moaned again, tugging at my sleeve. I shook my arm free of her and walked a few steps before wheeling around to face her.

    Her cheeks were flushed, and her dark eyes were narrowed in annoyance. Riley was small for a thirteen-year-old, reaching only to about my waist; or maybe I was just tall. She rolled her eyes at me, and then said, “If you don’t come inside right now, you’ll miss dinner.”

    I raised an eyebrow at her. “Since when do we have dinner?”

    Riley shrugged. “I dunno. Mom said it was important though, she won’t tell why.” She paused for a moment, training her eyes on my camera, before they rose to meet mine yet again. “Do you think maybe… maybe he…?”

    I sighed, then crouched down and kissed her cheek. “Let’s go inside.” Riley looked at me, tears glittering on her lashes, before she began to walk toward the house, me on her tail.

    The two of us stepped over the threshold and into the house, and immediately I knew something was up. Someone was laughing, and I immediately assumed it was Mom before brushing the thought aside. Mom never laughs anymore, and certainly not like that. I didn’t look for her though. I kicked off my shoes instead, closing my eyes and sighing as the worn leather slipped of my blistered feet. Times like these, I wish I actually had shoes that fit me. My jacket easily slid off of my small shoulders, and as it did so, I found my eyes wandering over to the mirror down the hall.

    The girl standing in the mirror was not me, couldn’t be me. Her eyes were wide and a brilliant green, but her face was dark and sad. Two months ago, the girl in the mirror was different. She was grinning, her eyes even smiled. A man usually stood at her side, smiling as well, and the two looked happy. Carefree. Of course, that never lasted.

    I shuddered before turning away from the mirror. I could still hear the laughter, and it sounded as if it was coming from down the hall. I bit my lip, hurrying to discover the source of that wonderful sound.

    Our dining room table had two extra places made up. My mother and Riley were sitting in theirs, and two were empty, but the two extra seats, the ones we never used, were made up and people sat in them. I stared at them blankly, trying to understand who they were. Dimly, I recognized the boy from somewhere, but I wasn’t sure where.

    I slid into my seat, and my mother looked up, a small smile on her face. The table had grown silent at my appearance, and Riley excused herself to use the bathroom quietly. “Reese,” my mother began, “This is Mr. Hunt and his son Dillon. This is my daughter, Reese.” Dillon Hunt. I knew him; he was in my English class. He sat in the very front, and was always being called on. I stared at him, confused as to why he was here, until someone cleared their throat.

    “You can, er, just call me Alex,” Mr. Hunt spoke, and I glanced over at him before nodding and flashing him a prize-winning smile. He smiled back.

    “I believe you’ve met Dillon before?” Mom’s stare bored into the side of my head, and I turned to meet her gaze. She was giving me one of those looks, ordering me to be good unless I wanted to sleep on the front porch tonight.

    “No!” I said, at the same time as Dillon said “yes”. Our eyes met, and for the rest of dinner, I avoided his eyes. Because looking into his eyes scared me; he looked at me like he knew my secrets, like he saw into my soul. Am I that easy to read?
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Re: The Advanced Writer's Club

Postby space oddity » Sun Jan 13, 2013 12:47 pm

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    Writing Preferences (Poet, Novelist, roleplayer...):
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    .: Tony Stark :.

    Pierce had muttered something to Tony before she left his playboy mansion. Mayachi Raisuki? So that was the hacker's name. And she gained access in section twelve on the main system? Dammit, how was she able to hack into that location? Tony's day was bound to get worse before proving better. He let out a weary sigh, preparing himself to explain all that happened a few nights before. Pepper wasn't going to be pleased with him, and even more angry than she was at the current time. "Alright, so-" He was about to begin his bar-hopping story but was interrupted by a tired, female voice. "That's not JARVIS. Uh, Pepper, there's also this..thing that happened to my security system." He paused, trying to plan out his words carefully. "It's more like a hacker, but I'm getting it under control." He rushed the end of his statement, hoping Pepper wouldn't want to mess around with his computer.

    He gently led her further away from the main entrance, and into the living room. Tony took a deep breath after running a hand through his hair. His skin felt pasty and the temperature humid from the past days of the hangover. "You know how Fury can be a pain in the a**? Well, he's always a pain in the a**, but my job can get slightly stressful- I mean, extremely stressful." He began his explanation, pulling Fury's nasty attitude in the mix. He wasn't sure if he considered this an excuse, but if it helped make the story seem better, he'd use it.

    Tony leaned against the wall, arms crossed in exhaustion as he continued his speech. "That vacation we wanted to take, well, Patchy there decided he needed me to stay. So instead of us sipping cocktails on a cruise, I was stuck there cleaning up wreckage that Reindeer Games made." "Patchy" or Director Fury was one of the causes he needed a drink...or ten. That vacation was something he had planned for the longest time. It wasn't as if he got many breaks from being Iron Man. He was always needed, and couldn't leave his suit without something happening.

    "I decided to grab a few, and yes, I asked the entire team to join me." Tony added, glancing over at his girlfriend. "Everyone but Scarlett didn't want to come. Don't know why, you'd think it would be a privilege to go bar-hopping with me. Maybe it was a good thing though, Thor would have caused havoc." Tony shook his head, the thought of the Norse god in a bar coming to his mind. It would have been very amusing to say the least. Though, Tony wasn't sure if he wanted to save his hide if Thor decided to strike down a wall.

    "To get to the main point, I drove Pierce to one of my favorite bars- we drank some rather...harsh drinks, and we sort of...kissed. She kissed me, if that matters." Tony winced as he awaited Pepper's reaction. He knew it wasn't going to be a friendly one, but he hoped she would eventually forgive his terrible behavior. Going to a bar with a female coworker was stretching it, but then kissing her? Well, it didn't sound good. He strolled over to his girlfriend, staring her down with his glossy brown eyes. "I want this- us, to work, Pepper. I've never been more sure of anything." He murmured, words sounding sincere. "I need you. You're the only one I have."

    He pulled back, going over to the kitchen and grabbing another Motrin. "Why don't we skip all this. Take a drive out of town? Pepper, I haven't had a vacation in two years." He pleaded, getting desperate for a week of relaxation. Fury would be fine without him, the entire Avengers team could do without Tony for a week. They could keep things under control, and, so far, Loki wasn't surfacing anymore trouble. "Come on, Miss. Potts, I think we deserve a vacation." He added, using her last name formally in a teasing manner.

    "Sir, the security problem still needs your assistance.
    " JARVIS reminded Tony of the hacker, or Mayachi, who needed to be dealt with. Tony walked out of the kitchen and passed Pepper, saying, "Right. I need to deal with this hacker." He then left the living room and slipped down the halls and towards his room. This Mayachi person was getting on his nerves.


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Re: The Advanced Writer's Club

Postby princess pudding » Sun Jan 13, 2013 12:48 pm

      @anchor && regals accepted c:
      @Artesian You’ve got to be kidding xD
      Honestly, that might be a funny pun for the story.

      Hmm, that’s interesting. I seem to generally get the same answer.
      I definitely see a witch as independent and mischievous, while at the same time not afraid to stand out. Here’s how I’m picturing the main character for my story: Chestnut brown hair && hazel eyes, freckles, and a black witch hat. Her dress is made up of mostly black, with a frilly apron-like section in the middle, as well as white cuffs. Most everything about the outfit is too large for her and proves difficult to walk in. She has a black kitten that follows at her feet/lurks nearby, and an old, raggedy broom. She’s clumsy and often causes trouble with her magic, but refuses help from anyone. She stands out but doesn’t seem to mind, and has difficulty trying to understand human life. Her odd taste in fashion makes her an easy target for other witches, thus leading to the fact she's young and oblivious.
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