★ Create A Clan Fanclub V.3 ★

[Dinolil1]

@Everyone

Which one should work as a prophecy?

- War is coming; One shall fly and one shall fall.
- Wings shall collide; both for justice, one for freedom, one for order.
- Peace shall be torn by wings; one will thrive and one will grieve.
- Wings will reveal the one that should've not have been.

[♥ Owl ♥]

♥ @Grey_Hoodie - ah ok. thanks!

so after some fixing, how about this?

the sparrow's greatest ally, the small snake, will turn it's back and strike with fangs so strong that it will tear the clan

@Dinolil1 - I think the second will be pretty interesting ♥

[scarecrowz]

@Dino
I think the last one sounds interesting!

@Grey_Hoodie, obsenceSympothy

Thank you both so much for the information!

[beeqlass]

@owl

oouu i like that! sounds like theyll have a suffix of -fang maybe?

[carpe noctem.]

@dino the second one sounds rather intriguing!

[Grey_Hoodie]

@Sushinekko, memes, haha... i honestly don't get them most of the time though xD

@Dinolil1, I especially like the sound of the second one c:

@♥ Owl ♥, Since you're talking about a snake, it might be better to say that the clan was poisoned rather than torn (poisoning could suggest a cat who is really good with words and can easily sway opinions to suit his/her own ideals). You could also say that the sparrow was always somewhat suspicious of the snake but fell easily to its charm and opened up an opportunity for the snake to strike.
All this prophecy talk is getting me excited for my own clan since they don't have a direct form of communication with Starclan xD

@_Ravenfeather_, of course! I'm glad I could help C: I'm still trying to learn cat genetics, so thanks for the patience!! Also, I'm not sure if Featherflower is actually lilac or not. Lilac/lavender is the dilute of chocolate and lilac looks like this. I'm pretty sure Featherflower is blue, but she might be spotted rather than mackerel. If you would like me to go back and change the genetics, I'm happy to do so c:

[Grey_Hoodie]

@sushinekko, I understand what memes are used for xD I just don't really follow them so I miss out on a lot of context (if there is any). I don't typically use memes when I draw, though, so that might explain my lack of understanding in them

@♥ Owl ♥, I thought another written version of the prophecy might help a little bit, so I've crafted up another one. I hope I'm helping haha. Anyways, onto the prophecy:

The sparrow's nest unknowingly houses a snake whose poison will create chaos in the mind and cause conflict in the forest.

Again, this prophecy is incredibly simple (since I'm a novice). It suggests Sparrowclan is blind to a threat that will create major inner conflicts within the clan. Also, I'm not sure who the "savior" would be, since you're original prophecy doesn't really mention one. I'm really excited to see what will come out of your prophecy though. Helping you out just kinda makes it more interesting for me xD

[Dinolil1]

@Owl

You could also say: Under the sparrow's wing lies the wicked serpent.

[♥ Owl ♥]

♥ @Grey_Hoodie - oooo I like that. and do kinda need a savior now do we lol. maybe it can be:

then a sheep, whose blood is different, will come from a far to save the forest.

I'm suggesting that a kittypet by the name of Sheep will be contacted by starclan to save the clan. the kittypet wakes up from the dream, feeling confused, but shrugs this off as he thinks it was just another one of those weird dreams. then in the middle of the chaos, the kittypet decides to explore the forest, just like every other kittypet. he then gets in the middle of all of the chaos somehow and the kittypet will try his best to put a stop to it.

don't worry, i'm a scrub too when it comes to making prophecy since I only really made one or two in the past. I want to make more so I can get better at it and not be a scrub anymore. ♥

[Grey_Hoodie]

@Dinolil1, I like the sound of that! To me, it sounds like the threat might actually be the Sparrowstar's apprentice or kit rather than just a random cat in Sparrowclan which could be really interesting.

@♥ Owl ♥, I like the idea of a kittypet being the savior. Alongside Sheep (or Ewe if you want to be comical), you could also name the cat after the mongoose or any sort of raptor since both attack snakes. I'm not sure what kind of conflict will be occurring in the clan (whether or not physical fights will be breaking out or if cats simply don't trust one another), so I'm not sure how a kittypet can come in and help out. However, the "savior" part of the prophecy could look like:

{sheep}
Foreign to this land and collared with a bell, it will take the sheep's stampeding hooves to drive it out.

{Bird of Prey}
Within its new hunting grounds, the [hawk/eagle/etc.] catches sigh of the snake and dives, talons extended.

{Mongoose}
With a mongoose encroaching in on its territory, the snake’s only choice is to fight or flee. The forest cannot be home to the both of them.

I'm not sure if I really like any of the above, but you can mess around with them however you like, or you can completely ignore them xD