by SkySmoke » Wed Jan 28, 2015 2:58 am
Owner: SkySmoke
Horse's Name: Burlesque
Height: 15.3hh
Gender: Mare
Rarity: Uncommon
Bad Personality Description: Burlesque has a very high opinion of herself. She is stubborn and flighty. She will not back down from anything, ever. She is very self assured, and very untrusting; both of humans and other equines. Her method of defense is to attack first and ask questions later...if she ever asks them at all.
Favorite Color: Dark Purple, almost black
And Why?: It reminds her of night, which is her favorite time of day. The darkest part of night, where the stars are the most clear. Most people would say it is black, not a dark purple, but she doesn't see it that way. She feels like the stars lend just enough light for it to be a deep, rich purple.
How Have You Tamed Him/Her?:
I don't know if you could say that I tamed her; I don't know that you could ever truly tame a horse like her. Instead I'll tell you of the story of how I became hers...
I was at auction, not really looking for anything specific, when she came tearing into the ring. Most horses look afraid when they are herded or lead into the auction pen, but not this mare. She came running into the pen full speed with a shrill scream. The gate shut behind her and she spun around and gave it a solid kick with both hind feet. She then floated to the middle of the pen and lifted her head high; her nostrils flared as she looked around and pinned her ears at the sight of humans.
I was instantly drawn to her; I've always had a thing for the problem horses. I also immediately picked up on her breed; the mane longest at the forelock, the cloven hooves. She was a desert appaloosa mustang and she was pretty far from home. The breed isn't common and its even more rare to see one at an auction that is normally full of quarter horses and off the track thoroughbreds.
The auctioneer didn't say much, other than that she would be a handful, and started the bidding at $50.00. Everyone just stared and the mare stared back, almost challenging one of us to attempt to own her. I fell for it of course and the gavel slammed down as soon as I opened my mouth to bid the $50.00. I think they were just excited to have someone take her.
It took me five hours to get her into the trailer to go home and a day and a half to get her out. I put a bucket of water and some food in it so she didn't kill herself, but she would not back out or turn around and tried to kill me any time I attempted to go inside. I finally resorted to taking the food and water out and spraying the hose inside the trailer until she came out; wet and livid.
She would charge the fence any time I, or any other living creature, came near it. Violently charged with ears pinned, teeth bared and hooves flying. There were a few times I thought she was going to break out of the enclosure I had her in. I gave her a few weeks to settle in before attempting to work with her at all.
"Work" was a loose term. Nothing worked with her. I tried feeding her and sitting on the ground outside of the pen. She wouldn't come near the food until I left, even if I sat there for hours. I tried going in the pen with her to run her around and attempt the "join up" technique. She either wouldn't move, or charged me with the intent to kill me. I tried treats of all kinds, and even resorted to with holding food for a day. Nothing mattered to this mare and I was beginning to think I had made a horrible mistake; until I watched her one night.
I watched her a lot throughout the day. She was stunning to watch move and I couldn't wait to get all the tangles out of her mane and tail and get a curry comb to her coat. She didn't do much during the day aside from each and occasionally trot anxiously around the arena. She never seemed interested in her surroundings, or me, at all.
One night when I was done with all the work around the barn, I headed into the house and then turned and glanced at her pen from the window. I was surprised to find her watching the house, ears pricked forward, actually showing interest. I leaned against the wall and watched as she slowly walked the perimeter of her pen and looked at her surroundings. It was the first time I'd seen her calmly look at anything. Maybe it was the quiet of night that she needed to be able to let her guard down.
I slipped my shoes back on and headed back out to her pen.
"Hey there gorgeous." I whispered as I sat down on the ground about ten feet away from the fence. She looked at me over her shoulder and snorted softly before turning back to gaze up at the moon. I took it as a positive step because for the first time she wasn't being aggressive. Rather than push my luck, I stood up and quietly left.
This began our nightly ritual. I would ignore her and give her space for most of the day, then once night fell I would come out and sit next to her pen and talk. I found myself enjoying my time with her more and more each night. I told her things I never told anyone else. It felt like the cover of night was good for both of us and allowed us to let down our walls.
After two weeks I was finally able to stand on the inside of the pen and lean against the rail as I talked to her. I found she got closer if I wasn't facing her and I had come to trust her enough that I would face completely away from her as I spoke. I often lost myself in whatever I was telling her and sometimes found myself crying without realizing it until the tears dripped off my cheeks. I was telling her things I had never talked about. The more I talked about, the closer she seemed to get.
One night after standing in her pen for about an hour I stopped talking and rested my forehead against the railing, crying quietly until I felt the gentle woof of her breath against my shoulder. My breath caught in my throat but I didn't move as she slowly sniffed me all over. When she was done, she gently butted her nose against the middle of my back. I turned around slowly until I was facing her.
She was even more beautiful up close and her dark blue eyes sparkled with an intelligence I'd never seen in a horse before. I held my hand out and she slowly touched her muzzle to it. I spent the next hour slowly running my hands all over her body while quietly talking to her. When I was done she followed me to the door of the pen and watched me until I closed the door of the house behind me.
The next morning she softly nickered as I passed by her pen. I still kept our training sessions at night because I felt like it was therapeutic for us both. I won't say that our relationship was smooth sailing from then on out, because it wasn't. We had moments and set back and rough spots, but that first night she taught me something I will never forget; sometimes we have to let our own walls down for others to let us in.
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SkySmoke on Thu Feb 12, 2015 5:00 pm, edited 2 times in total.
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