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Done! <3 by HopelessOutsider

Artist HopelessOutsider [gallery]
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Postby HopelessOutsider » Thu Sep 13, 2012 5:48 am

"Niśāna, don't let it get to you." my father said setting me down. Not able to talk I nodded. I had been late to talk and grow, puppies make fun of me for it. "Just like your mom!" he said liking my ear. I had never new who my mother was because she died soon after my birth. Clouds started rolled in poring down freezing rain on me and my father. Quickly he picked me up and the other puppies walked under him. I started to whimper as cold hell started to fall. Father spotted a dark pit with a few quaint rocks for cover. He stood over me putting the other puppies in wile bolts of lightning ran past and thunder rolled loudly. I gave out a cold screech as he picked me up and fell into the pit with all of us. "Shhh, child you'll be fine!" he growled and wedged under a low rock. "I'm cold!" one of my brother said. "All of you come close and I'll tell you about your mother again." he started a story and soon went to sleep with all of us. I woke from thunder as something black and scary bit my tail and started to pull me away. I screeched as my father woke leaping at something with bright green eyes it was soon a fight! I herd growls and hissing. Cold blood filled wind blew at my face as I looked closely. I screeched, it was a blood thirsty Kronador! I screeched again as it slapped me on my nose threw me to the air as it smashed me to the rock. "LEAVE HER ALONE!" he yelled leaping in front of me. The Kronador slammed him to the wall blood drooled from my fathers mouth. I started to cry and screech. As I started I sat up and howled, IT WAS LIKE MAGIC! My father pushed the Kronador away giving the last killing bite. The Kronador closed his eyes and his head rolled back. IT WAS OVER, but my father lay still as I trotted over to him. "Did you here me daddy!" I said with a big smile. "Yeees-I did, you were grate." he said licking his lips. "Fallow the brightest star, you light there path to a new family." he said closing his eyes. "Don't leave me!!! DADDY! I-I will take them, and take care of them" I said turning to the others as the rain stopped. "Come, I'll keep you worm." I said licking my brothers nose. "We will find a father and mother, I hope."

After the tragic time of are life we became lost puppy as or search began for other wolfs. I will never forget him in all of my life as for my brother and me we found other lost puppies and a mother to take us in. Never hope to much just dream and you can do any thing.
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Re: WIP

Postby HopelessOutsider » Sat Sep 15, 2012 6:46 am

Keys to reading the story wrote:
She is reading
Read all in how you would think she talks
Her mother died at the puppies birth
Read caps loudly

I think that may help you!
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