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Re: Help Please!

Postby ~Kitten~ » Wed Aug 03, 2011 1:40 pm

He has a bit too much of a neck and also his head is a little smaller then usual.
Hope this helped <3
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Re: Help Please!

Postby Ember Sky » Thu Aug 04, 2011 7:26 am

Ha, Yes The Neck I know. I rushed. Yes I'll add your name^^

I really don't even need the picture.

Kitten I don't need Crits though, Thanks for helping.
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Re: Help Please!

Postby bardlyJaskier » Thu Aug 04, 2011 8:21 am

I can colour in too, if it will help, I'm pretty good at it,(My examples are NOT in my gallery)

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Re: Help Please!

Postby Kurloz Makara » Thu Aug 04, 2011 8:24 am

did you put my name in the thingy? pwetty plz?
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Re: Help Please!

Postby Ember Sky » Thu Aug 04, 2011 8:27 am

Layer two you remove^^
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Re: Help Please!

Postby bardlyJaskier » Thu Aug 04, 2011 8:34 am

Mooniie wrote:I can colour in too, if it will help, I'm pretty good at it,(My examples are NOT in my gallery)


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Re: Help Please!

Postby Ember Sky » Thu Aug 04, 2011 8:35 am

Oh, Sure I am sorry xD
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Re: Help Please!

Postby Sir Dingo » Thu Aug 04, 2011 5:50 pm

Can I do a red line? XD

I only have one example that is the newest in my gallery. >n<''
As for the crayon look, I would make the scatter up to around, 30-40... And maybe something else.. I haven't tried, but I will test out when I do a red line. :DD Shading, what do you mean? Fur shading?

I have to admit, tracing at first does help. I used to trace photos. But then, I developed a style. Use references as well.
This isn't bad either, it's quite good, actually. :DD
Though, are you going for a realistic style, or a non realistic one? I see your style so far in the middle. :)
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Re: Help Please!

Postby spyro128 » Fri Aug 05, 2011 1:51 am

my idea is putting a little bit darker color on the belly and chest and blend the colors alittle:3 ~D
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Re: Help Please!

Postby spyro128 » Fri Aug 05, 2011 3:25 am

just in case you didnt get my message....... put a darker color on the chest and the belly and blend the colors together alittle hope it works for you!








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