-Everette- wrote:Madziu wrote:
@-Everette- - Tail isn't a standard trait, I'm assuming you meant shine? ^^ Your halos unfortunately look like solid flowers which we do not allow just for halos. You'll have to modify them to look more like light. Your reverse munch will also need a few tweakings. I'll send you a message about this.
Username + ID#: -Everette- 928070
Kalon Name: Aster
Standard Design:
hereFinal Design:
hereEdit List:
NR: skinny, sclera, heterochromia, whiskers
S: hair, shine
C: backmane, tail, fur
UC: fur, ear, tongue, pupil
R: halos, horns, reverse munchkin
Proof of claim: N/A
Prompt Response: [Overview]
Aster is, in short, a power-hungry summoner that went a step too far. He is an adamant scholar who researched dark magic after having everything taken away from him by the ones in power. One day, he learned that there exists a small number of people who can overcome a demon possession and even wield the power of the demon. With his inflated ego, he decided that he was strong enough of mind to control such a being. So, he gathered his materials, found an abandoned storehouse, and memorized the chants. One week later, at the witching hour, he completed the ritual and a demon latched onto his body.
However, something was wrong. The demon didn't want to possess him. The demon itself turned out to be very mild mannered and reluctant to put Aster at risk through a possession. Being demon born, it didn't do anything to get to hell and was very new to the contract business. It was surely not prepared to do Aster's less than ethical bidding. However, the ritual was complete, the contract made, and they were stuck to each other, however not ideal the pairing was.
So now they cohabitate Aster's body, Aster unable to control the demon, and the demon acting as Aster's less problematic conscience. Neither of them get along, but they can agree on one thing: the ruling structure needs to be torn down.
[233]Aster: He/him | Korvus it/its/he/him
Edits made!I fixed the legs and the errors in the edit list.
I tried to make the halos more like light, I hope its good enough ><.
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