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Tryout art by skrapple

Artist skrapple [gallery]
Time spent 1 hour, 30 minutes
Drawing sessions 2
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Tryout art

Postby skrapple » Tue May 14, 2013 1:13 pm

For Kiamara 266. owo
Critique, anyone? I know, I failed at the head fur. I may go back and fix that later >w<

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✫✫ Hi, I'm Skrapple! ✫✫
I am an adult and
I use she/her pronouns.

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kes. is my boyfriend
and we like to gift each other.
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Pet's name: Cinnamon

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Re: Tryout art

Postby diplocaulus » Tue May 21, 2013 11:14 am

dagjadgdlggj i believe the timer is wrong. this looks like it took waaaay more time.
for critique.... for the head fluff u might want to try loosening ur hand and making sharp overlapping lines?
and one other bit of advice, on the front left paw u might want to try making a little bit of the overlap line to make the pose look better. Thats all i have to say. U did good on thies ppeice hands down bud
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