Crystal Paradise

[Queen Hydra]

- ...You still missed things, and your image isn't showing up. You also don't seem to do as the rules say literacy-wise.

[Laughter]

Im sorry I lost my glasses so it's hard to read things
the link Ill fix but what am I missing?

[Agarwaen]

((Hehe walking zoo....))

Thorn frowned when Harquin jumped out of her arms. She watch her go the turned to walk out of the room but ran straight into the wall about 5 inches from the door. She sighed and just stood there for a mooment.(Moment^^)

[Agarwaen]

((wow really? mooment? what the heck that?....ill fix it....^^"))

[Queen Hydra]

- You have to read the entire first post. And capatalize things like the first letter in every sentence..and add periods at the end of sentences...

[Queen Hydra]

Clay stepped out of the elevator. Freely was shivering. She didn't like elevators, for some reason. Clay walked toward the exit of the Glass Building, but paused when she saw a girl standing right next to a wall, staring at it. She tilted her head, curious, and just watched the girl for a moment. "Something interesting about that wall?" She asked, curious to see if there was anything odd about the wall indeed.(Lol)

[Agarwaen]

Thorn sighed and took a step back from the wall. Her forhead was red from where she hit it. "Just wondering how it got there." She smiled a little.

[Queen Hydra]

Clay thought for a moment before replying. "That's happened to me. A wall moved out of no where and BAM, it hit me." When she raised her voice for emphasis on the 'Bam', Totters cawed loudly and fell off her head in a mess of flapping wings and flying feathers. "Ow! You stupid bird!" Her right hand flew to the back of her neck. "That chicken is trying to cut me to ribbons, I swear." She murmured to herself, rubbing the cut gently. Totters seemed to realize he wasn't getting his head chopped off and started walking in circles around Claysa.

[Agarwaen]

Thorn sighed, "Yeah. Things just like to get in my way." She tilted her head slightly to the side and watched the bird. She felt her hair move away from her left eye. The almost white irsis contrasted with her black hair and other violet eye. She looked up at Clay again.

[Queen Hydra]

Clay smiled. "Good to know the curse isn't just mine." She said, barely noticing the girl's one strange eye. She perked her ears. "Cool wings, girly. My name is Claysa, but I usually go by Clay. Amelia calls me by my first and middle name for some reason." Her expression turned to confusion for a brief second, showing she wasn't sure why Amelia did this, but then went back to a friendly smile. "This is Mimi." She held up the small gray kitten. "The ferret is Freely." Clay nodded to the small ferret. "And the rooster is Totters, because of his obvious balance problems."