(Okay, I has permission to skip to jumping off the roof! Also, Tris is jumping first
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TrisI sit on the train leaning against the wall opposite the door, staring out at the buildings. "Get ready," A woman from Dauntless say. She's already a member, she's way too old to be an initiate. (AN: Wow Tris, smooth XD. No offense meant by this statement) Get ready? Ready for what? Curiously I stand and walk to the doorway. I lean out and stare ahead to see what we have to do. At first I thought nothing was going to happen but one after the other people started jumping onto the roof. "Oh my god..." I say in both awe and shock. "Are they insane?" I grumble to myself and wait as our carriage moves closer and closer to the roof. When we are only a short distance away I walk to the back of the carriage. I mentally psych myself for what I'm about to do.
Come on, Beatrice! You can do this even though it is COMPLETELY insane! I think to myself. The carriage starts to pass the roof and I run. I leap out of the carriage and onto the roof. I fall over and land on my knees. My knees are grazed slightly but otherwise unharmed. I stand up, noticing a large crowd of dauntless borns and transfers by the edge of the roof. A tall man stands on the roof's edge. He tells us that the only way into Dauntless was to jump off. People begin to mutter between themselves. "Is there water at the bottom or something?" A boy from Erudite asks. The man - who is called Max - doesn't answer. "So, who's going first?" Max asks. There's an eerie silence. "I am," the words leave my mouth before I even realise what I said. The people in front of me split apart to form a path to the roof's edge. It was too late to back out now. I walk to the edge and look down. On the ground was a massive hole. I can't see the bottom. I take a deep breath, face upwards and jump.
KatI stand next to Four bouncing on the balls of my feet excitedly. I can hear yells of delight and fear from the roof. "They're here!" I hiss quietly to Four. I'm now bouncing quite high. I'm so tempted to yell but I contain myself as much as I can. "What faction do you think will jump first?" I ask. "I think it'll be one of my Dauntless borns!" I could keep babbling forever if I wanted to, to be honest! I take a deep breath and calm myself down. I slide a hand into my hair and look at the net. "You can help the initiates off the net, you are way stronger than me!" I mutter. I'm about to continue when, out of my peripheral vision, I see something grey land on the net. Wait, grey!? I look over immediately to see a rather small girl with blonde hair lying on the net...dressed in the grey clothing of Abnegation. My eyes widen and I look up at Four. "A stiff the first to jump?" I say nervously. "Unheard of!"
