Five nights at Freddy's Game Discussion

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@Four
Awesome cx

[jinbad]

All this talk about FNAF OC's made me make one.

A grey lynx with white hair, a tube top and shorts. Her eyes are very dark grey. Her name is Jazzy, but everyone calls her Jazz. She likes to sing and when it's kid's birthday parties she'll sing happy birthday to them, let them get on stage and dance with her. At night her white hair turns black, her left ear is torn, her right ear shows the metal, same with her left eye which is pure black with a metal plate around it. Her top has scratches in it while her stomach, shoulder and leg shows metal plates. Her right shoulder is ripped (showing the metal). Black liquid runs down her cheeks, which is either tears or blood.


She hangs out backstage at night and she become's active around the third day. They say nothing about her. How do you know she becomes active? You hear a girl quietly singing "happy birthday to you.. happy birthday to you.." and the singing will get louder and louder as she gets closer.

Thoughts?

First thought: MOMMY I'M SCARED!

[slwing]

Meh it's okay just that it's well okay could be better I would tell you the flaws but I don't wanna be a critic .

[mandalorian]

^^ Please tell me the flaws! I want to know c: As long as it's constructive criticism, not destructive.
And thanks.. I think? cx

[hellfire hounds]

I love the game, honestly. But the side affect was that it gave me severe paranoia, I kept looking around all the time in real life. xD
Favorite Animatronic; I hope this is clear, but Foxy! uvu
The one that makes me wanna go hide and act like a two year old who just saw a clown: Bonnie.
I don't know why, but Bonnie just. Creeps. Me out. Like severely. ene;

As of today, I've beaten the game. 3 days, no sleep, and I didn't pause. I HAD TO COMPLETE THIS GAAAME. Now I just need to complete 20/20/20/20...

[slwing]

Well I think that it make her more scary if you put a little more on what she does say maybe like messing with true cameras or something different that makes her a bit more unique than just singing and may be have her Look the same night and day and say she looked different before the place closed but I think her night look is cool and scary and adds some thing to her and the singing would send a chill down my spine I really like her I guess what I am saying I wish there was a bit more to her . And hello there how are you could you open the door for me ?

[mandalorian]

Ohh I see, yeah. I could have her mess with the camera's. I'll add some more stuff to her. She's still a WIP c:

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I reaaally need to draw a ref for Taiga, but I can't draw. It's legit stressing me out >_>
I think I'm going to keep Taiga looking the same day and night, just because it doesn't make sense to me how a animatronic would magically change to be all junked up at night then magically look fixed in the day. But I'm not sure if that would break canon or what.
Although even with Taiga still looking friendly in the night, if I were a watchman I'd be a little afraid anyways because of her clawing at the door and mauling me ;-; She'd still scare me in real life, even if she's not meant to really be a scary FNAF oc. Buuuut Taiga only hunts down watchmen and men with afros and sparkly tights so it's all good ^-^'
//Don't ask about her hate for men in sparkly tights with afros. Just don't. It's a loooong story.

[slwing]

I reaaally need to draw a ref for Taiga, but I can't draw. It's legit stressing me out >_>
I think I'm going to keep Taiga looking the same day and night, just because it doesn't make sense to me how a animatronic would magically change to be all junked up at night then magically look fixed in the day. But I'm not sure if that would break canon or what.
Although even with Taiga still looking friendly in the night, if I were a watchman I'd be a little afraid anyways because of her clawing at the door and mauling me ;-; She'd still scare me in real life, even if she's not meant to really be a scary FNAF oc. Buuuut Taiga only hunts down watchmen and men with afros and sparkly tights so it's all good ^-^'
//Don't ask about her hate for men in sparkly tights with afros. Just don't. It's a loooong story.

Okay....

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I've decided to make another FNAF oc too. She's a snake animatronic, doesn't like people AT ALL, and enjoys slithering into the security room through the vents and choking the watchmen. That's all I've got so far x3