The Gentleman Shark wrote:I agree they did not talk like teenagers, but I still found myself enjoying the book. I hated the last book in the Cirque Du Freak series. It had built up to this big final battle, then halfway through the book the NARRORATOR dies! Then it gets all downhill from there with confusing time travel and a story that leaves lots of plot holes. Truly a horrible ending to a great book series.
I've found that the quickest way to ruin a series is to include time travel as a plot device. Sure, it can still be done well, but if done poorly, it can result in a confusing mess of plot holes.
AnnaBananaBug wrote:Moby Dick
plus, lets be real, that story line... guy stalks girl, girl falls in love with him?
~☾☆Tԋҽ Mσσɳ Gαȥҽɾ☆☾~ wrote:The Gentleman Shark wrote:I agree they did not talk like teenagers, but I still found myself enjoying the book. I hated the last book in the Cirque Du Freak series. It had built up to this big final battle, then halfway through the book the NARRORATOR dies! Then it gets all downhill from there with confusing time travel and a story that leaves lots of plot holes. Truly a horrible ending to a great book series.
I've found that the quickest way to ruin a series is to include time travel as a plot device. Sure, it can still be done well, but if done poorly, it can result in a confusing mess of plot holes.Exactly, time travel is the quickest way to destroy a book's universe.
Because no matter what you do, it will cause some kind of paradox like it or not. If
someone can actually give me a good example of this not being the case, please let me
know, I'm curious on reading something that used time travel very well.
For an example, I will fully admit as a Potterhead that Rowlings shouldn't have put time travel
in the third book of Harry Potter. The entire concept was done very poorly, and in later books isn't
even addressed again. There's many ways The Prisoner of Azkaban could've been written without time travel
to fix the issue. That book still stands as my least favorite book of the series after the final book for that reason alone.
Even the Warriors series of all things
fell into the trap of using time travel...
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