Let's Read: Warrior Cats Series

[Arcaii]

Sounds like a dilute calico or tortoiseshell you're describing!

Spottedpelt is good for her, especially if she has small spots of those colors on her and she isn't vast majority white.

[Rain_]

Ok, so I'm making a graphic novel based on cats that try to survive in South Africa. So I need some thoughts on this. The tribe is mostly made up of pets. They live in an opening of a cave, I made this up when I was much younger and always had a dream to go to South Africa (Idk why, I had big dreams when I was younger :P) So there are many other creatures, such as servals, lions, and later adding caracals and cheetahs into the story. The cats are a small tribe who is struggling from lion attacks, especially a lion named Shadow. Savannah, the leader of the tribe's daughter, realizes that it's Serval is guilty for letting Shadow know about the tribe. The tribe's leader, Glacier (He used to be a pet and traveled a lot, liking how Glaciers looked like so he named himself Glacier) receives a message that there will be the worst times, yet a ''hero'' will come for the tribe. The ''hero'' is called Wilderness. Wilderness is a pet visiting South Africa with a group of researchers and staying there for 3 weeks. When the group is not paying attention to Wilderness, Serval comes up and forces Wilderness to follow her. So Wilderness does and gets to know more about Serval. Serval describes herself as good yet unusual cat to Wilderness. Wilderness believes that Serval is actually good, and becomes friends with her. Serval tells Wilderness to follow her again, and Serval tricks Wilderness to go to Shadow. She leaves Wilderness all alone with him. So Shadow chases Wilderness, Wilderness ends up at Tribe (There's a big hole on the ground that leads to the inside of the tribe's cave, so Wilderness fell in it) and yeah, I'm too lazy to write the other stuff :P How does it sound? I was inspired by Erin. A little

[I r o n.]

I made my last Warriors rp. It's traditional. I used the hollowed suffix and something prefix on tumblr or whatever. So far, one perosn wnats to join with -dead as the prefix. Hopefully, this 'll be succesful.

[Silxe]

I just saw a cat named Emberion.
Emberion
Someone hold me.

[abxy]

I just saw a cat named Emberion.
Emberion
Someone hold me.

As a rogue/loner, that's a cool name.
But as a Clan cat..
no.

[koolkatkoolkat123]

I just saw a cat named Emberion.
Emberion
Someone hold me.

No no no no nope nope nopeity nopeity nope nope

I just WHY

Were they physics students or something since when do cats know about ions. Unless they meant it as iron WHICH IS WORSE
I swear people aren't trying, even if I'm making cats for fun and not bothering too much about the name I still keep to natural sounding names, as in names to do with nature

Couple names I made and kinda like (Also for the character)

Honeycreek - Much loved tabby cat, very gentle and very clever (I kinda kill her off at the beginning,oops)
Cheetahflight - Vain Bengal like cat with spotted fur
Cindersplash- Ginger queen with dark blue eyes

Like I said i don't really bother making them traditional, i find it more fun and so much easier to remember which cat i'm talking about if they don't all have fur,pelt etc as their suffix but at least I'm sticking to nature and things cats will know about.

[Rain_]

Ok, so I'm making a graphic novel based on cats that try to survive in South Africa. So I need some thoughts on this. The tribe is mostly made up of pets. They live in an opening of a cave, I made this up when I was much younger and always had a dream to go to South Africa (Idk why, I had big dreams when I was younger ) So there are many other creatures, such as servals, lions, and later adding caracals and cheetahs into the story. The cats are a small tribe who is struggling from lion attacks, especially a lion named Shadow. Savannah, the leader of the tribe's daughter, realizes that it's Serval is guilty for letting Shadow know about the tribe. The tribe's leader, Glacier (He used to be a pet and traveled a lot, liking how Glaciers looked like so he named himself Glacier) receives a message that there will be the worst times, yet a ''hero'' will come for the tribe. The ''hero'' is called Wilderness. Wilderness is a pet visiting South Africa with a group of researchers and staying there for 3 weeks. When the group is not paying attention to Wilderness, Serval comes up and forces Wilderness to follow her. So Wilderness does and gets to know more about Serval. Serval describes herself as good yet unusual cat to Wilderness. Wilderness believes that Serval is actually good, and becomes friends with her. Serval tells Wilderness to follow her again, and Serval tricks Wilderness to go to Shadow. She leaves Wilderness all alone with him. So Shadow chases Wilderness, Wilderness ends up at Tribe (There's a big hole on the ground that leads to the inside of the tribe's cave, so Wilderness fell in it) and yeah, I'm too lazy to write the other stuff How does it sound? I was inspired by Erin. A little

[I r o n.]

Erins' know nothing about the cat genes, I'm afarid.

[Simonpet]

Ok, so I'm making a graphic novel based on cats that try to survive in South Africa. So I need some thoughts on this. The tribe is mostly made up of pets. They live in an opening of a cave, I made this up when I was much younger and always had a dream to go to South Africa (Idk why, I had big dreams when I was younger ) So there are many other creatures, such as servals, lions, and later adding caracals and cheetahs into the story. The cats are a small tribe who is struggling from lion attacks, especially a lion named Shadow. Savannah, the leader of the tribe's daughter, realizes that it's Serval is guilty for letting Shadow know about the tribe. The tribe's leader, Glacier (He used to be a pet and traveled a lot, liking how Glaciers looked like so he named himself Glacier) receives a message that there will be the worst times, yet a ''hero'' will come for the tribe. The ''hero'' is called Wilderness. Wilderness is a pet visiting South Africa with a group of researchers and staying there for 3 weeks. When the group is not paying attention to Wilderness, Serval comes up and forces Wilderness to follow her. So Wilderness does and gets to know more about Serval. Serval describes herself as good yet unusual cat to Wilderness. Wilderness believes that Serval is actually good, and becomes friends with her. Serval tells Wilderness to follow her again, and Serval tricks Wilderness to go to Shadow. She leaves Wilderness all alone with him. So Shadow chases Wilderness, Wilderness ends up at Tribe (There's a big hole on the ground that leads to the inside of the tribe's cave, so Wilderness fell in it) and yeah, I'm too lazy to write the other stuff How does it sound? I was inspired by Erin. A little

I love the idea, but a feral cat wouldn't live to go to from the Arctic to Africa, so Glacier should be renamed after something a bit closer (Mid. East, India, Europe, etc.).

[❤ Sunberry ❤]

Hi! I've been pretty much stalking for the past few days to read everything and supposedly "catch up" and I just wanted to say that this thread is really cool. Even with the mistakes, however, I'll still read to the end of the series (I'm on OOTS right now, but it's not that great )

This was mentioned a few pages ago, but I just wanted to state my opinion. I began reading the Warriors series when I was probable about ten or so and I adored it and saw (for the most part) no flaws, except with name issues. About a year or so later I decided to try to read Seekers and, even though I was young, I didn't finish the first book. It just wasn't that hooking, I guess. I'm a teenager now, and I can see the flaws that I couldn't before. (What point am I making again?!)

Anyway, my point is that just because someone's a kid doesn't mean that they're dumb and that they can't see flaws (although I understand your point). The Erins shouldn't be slacking in the way they write simply because they write for children. IMO that's one of their biggest mistakes. Good authors treat those they're writing for as equals and don't look done on them. I just wanted to touch a little more on that subject and thank you for taking the time to make this thread. c: