Warrior Cat Names {Critiques and Advice} {Traditional}

[detective who.]

Name: Maplepaw (haven't thought of a suffix yet but I was thinking heart)
Personality: She is an introvert though very curious and inquisitive. She is ambitious and good at about everything except swimming. She is very nice though sometimes she seems rude because she avoids most conversations. Because she is so she she can be very mysterious.


Name: Mousepaw (Have not thought of a suffix yet)
Personality: Fun loving and a little soft hearted. He is strong willed despite being easily swayed to change his mind.

Hello, Chrislion! Sorry about the late reply; I've been rather busy.
I'm not sure if Maplepaw is ginger/golden enough for maple-, so you may want to look into that. -heart definitely does not fit her for suffix; that's for a strong-willed, moralistic cat. I suggest you look into the -fur/-pelt/-stripe suffixes, as well as -fang.

Mousepaw's prefix is great, but you might want to change his pelt; male tortoishells are very rare and almost always sterile.
I can't help you on his suffix; I need to know skills for that.
I hope this was some help, and if you reply I can definitely help you out more.

Okay, I had a debate on which names I should use for my oldest OCs, Nightclaw and Darkfur, since they do sound a bit plain, and I thought 'why not' for giving them new names c:

From what I saw from your critiques, -claw is for strong fighters, of which Nightclaw isn't... so ^^'

Name: Nightclaw
Description: A black she-cat with white patches with blue eyes
Skill/Personality Notes: She is a fast cat who is a better hunter than a fighter. She is an average climber/jumper, and is good at sneaking up on prey as well. As for personality, she is a slightly reserved cat, though this doesn't get in theway of her life as a warrior. Other than that, she is loyal and has a strong sense of justice.

Name: Darkfur
Description: A dark brown tabby tom with amber eyes
Skill/Personality Notes: Darkfur is a skilled fighter, and a better-than-average hunter, but only with mice or shrew. He is a poor climber, and isn't good at catching birds or squirrels because of this.

Nightclaw sounds like her suffix should probably be -whisker, which is for a strong hunter, or -foot, which is for a fast cat. That would be up to your discretion, from what you've told me.

Darkfur's prefix is great, but I'm not sure about suffix on him either. Perhaps you should go for -claw or -fang?
I hope that helps a bit, feel free to write in again~

[winter solstice.]

Thank you c: Nightwhisker and Darkfang sound great ^-^ they make sense and the names seem to sound amazing as well (:

I'll come back later on when I need help creating more ^-^

[Jazzcat]

Name: nightfeather( that's just the name I gave her)
Description: she's all black but some gray on her paws. She has blue eyeshadow a small gray spot to left of her left eye.
Personality: she is smart and thoughtful and she can think fast on her feet. She's a medicine cat and when he runs you can barely here her. She loves helping others. She has a very big heart, and tries to help everyone if she can.


Name: Smokespot
Description: she has a leopard like coat except its gray instead of gold. She has amber eyes and a little white on her tail.
Personality: She is a warrior and is very skilled in battle. She likes to swim and catch fish In the river. She is very aggressive on the outside and when you get to know her she's the nicest cat in the world. She would do anything for her friends and loved ones. Even betray her clan, she's loyal to bothe her friends and family and her clan.

Could I have some suggestions on a name for both please?

[detective who.]

Name: nightfeather( that's just the name I gave her)
Description: she's all black but some gray on her paws. She has blue eyeshadow a small gray spot to left of her left eye.
Personality: she is smart and thoughtful and she can think fast on her feet. She's a medicine cat and when he runs you can barely here her. She loves helping others. She has a very big heart, and tries to help everyone if she can.


Name: Smokespot
Description: she has a leopard like coat except its gray instead of gold. She has amber eyes and a little white on her tail.
Personality: She is a warrior and is very skilled in battle. She likes to swim and catch fish In the river. She is very aggressive on the outside and when you get to know her she's the nicest cat in the world. She would do anything for her friends and loved ones. Even betray her clan, she's loyal to bothe her friends and family and her clan.

Could I have some suggestions on a name for both please?

Hello, Jazzcat!
I'm not sure Nightfeather's markings would be possible, but her prefix does work. I'm not sure about suffix, though; I need to know skills more than personality.

Smokespot's pattern is called a spotted tabby, and her prefix is great for that. She sounds like -stream or -claw would fit her best; -claw is for fighting skill, and -stream is for strong swimming ability.
I hope this is helpful! Feel free to write in again.

[;LEVIATHAN;]

Name: Glasspaw (I have no idea what his suffix should be, which is why I'm coming to you for help ;u; )
Description: Glasspaw is a brown tabby tom with white underbelly, white paws, and green eyes.
Skill/Personality Notes: His skills are fighting and rock-climbing. His weaknesses are swimming and hunting.
He is rather rude and mean to most cats except for the mother figure in his life but, in spite of that, he is also very fragile and could break easily if pushed. He's really just a little kitten who misses his mommy and daddy and needs a hug \( ;-; )/. He'd never admit that, though, choosing to keep to himself most of the time. He snaps at almost every cat who speaks to him and likes to go off alone and do things on his own, such as hunting. He sometimes gets into fights with his Clanmates and rogues, always getting himself into some sort of trouble. He justifies it by saying he's just a little ways away from becoming a warrior anyways. He's gentler with kits, however, and when he's not off sulking, getting yelled at, or yelling at some cat, he's by the nursery, letting the kits play with his fluffy tail and telling them stories of his adventures.
He is an apprentice of TorrentClan, lives in the Grand Canyon in the u.s. and is rather fond of other toms and eating scorpions.

[detective who.]

I'd say -claw or -fang would work for him, depending on how good he is at fighting and hunting. -claw is for excellent fighting skills, and -fang is for notable hunting and fighting skills.
I suppose you don't want me to go over prefix, if he's an existing character and you're not looking to change that.
I hope this helps!

Edit;; The prefix list has been started, huzzah! Putting up a poll about it in just a moment.

[Simonpet]

Name: Kitekit | Kitepaw | Kitenose
Gender: Tom
Rank: Kit | Apprentice | Warrior | Elder
Description: Cinnamon marbled tabby w/ cinnamon smoke, #4 white spotting, and hazel eyes (from here) -- xXx
Personality: As a kit, Kitenose is very curious, always asking questions, following scents, and getting into trouble. He has trouble taking things seriously, unless it relates to Clan culture, such as StarClan or Gatherings. Even then, he asks questions on why StarClan can't help out more often, or why cats fight on Gatherings anyways.
As an apprentice, Kitepaw becomes slightly more responsible, and grows into a superior tracker, able to track through rain and snow, and through any terrain. Because of this, he is a good hunter, although fishing, climbing, and fighting are at the average level of a warrior. He still likes to mess around with his friends, and can be sometimes playing with them instead of carrying out apprentice duties, something which he has been punished often for. As he gets closer to warriorhood, Kitepaw becomes even more serious and calm, though eager to impress his mentor and the leader.
Once a warrior, Kitenose is eager to show off his new privileges, although he is careful not to abuse them too much. He hopes to someday become a mentor and pass on all his knowledge to his apprentice. Though he wants a mate, and possibly kits, he doesn't know if any she-cats in the Clan share the same zest for adventure and fun that he does.
Overall, Kitenose is an eager, curious, responsible, adventurous, and shares a zest for life. He is a mediocre swimmer, an okay climber, a good fighter and hunter, and a superb tracker.
Skills: Kitenose is an amazing tracker, able to track through any weather, and almost any terrain. Therefore, he is a good hunter, although he needs to work on his techniques. Despite being a good hunter, he isn't a great fisher, nor is he a great swimmer. At best, his fighting is mediocre, although he does use his superior tracking abilites to turn the tide in an ambush, or when tracking invaders.

[detective who.]

Kitenose's name is absolutely perfect. He sounds like a very fun character, too. Thanks for writing in, Simon, and happy writing!

[blue neighbourhood]

It's nice to see you again. And I had a lovely time at camp, thank you!

On suffix, I would go for -flower, definitely.
I'm not sure your prefix works, though. Fawn- is for the colour, not the baby deer, and fawn is a very pale brown. I think you ought to try some others.

Sorry, everyone, on not working on the prefix list; I'll try to get to starting on that this week. Thank you all for your patience~

Ah, thank you ^^I'll look at the prefix list now! C:

Righty. I found Dust-, Dusk- and Tawny-, but I'm not sure uvu I have Dust on a few OCs, a main one too. On the description on Tawny, I'm not sure if it fits her. I like the sound of Duskflower and Tawnyflower though.

[winter solstice.]

Okay, back with a few cats who need naming c:

Description: a reddish brown tabby tom with 'classic' tabby markings, a lighter brown underbelly, and light amber eyes
Skill/Personality Notes: This cat is a curious soul, always putting his nose into something he can, often getting into trouble, though this has lessened somewhat upon becoming a warrior. He is of average skill level in hunting land- or air-based prey (mice, squirrels, birds, etc.), fighting, tracking, stealth, and jumping/climbing. His real strength is in swimming and catching fish.

Description: a golden-brown she-cat with faint tabby stripes on her tail, darker tabby stripes on her legs, and green eyes
Skill/Personality Notes: She is a kind, caring she-cat who strives to heal a cat's injuries or illnesses as best as she can with her vast knowledge of herbs.
Note: She is a medicine cat.

Description: a long-haired gray-and-white tabby Maine Coon tom with fur that refuses to be flattened by any amount of grooming. He has bright amber eyes.
Skill/Personality Notes: This tom is a laid-back and carefree cat who is somwhat of a flirt. His long fur makes him a terrible swimmer, the wet fur acting as dead weight, but he is of average skill for everything else.

Hope this is enough of a description ^^' Take your time please c: