Warrior Cat Names {Critiques and Advice} {Traditional}

[despairz]

Yeah, that pelt would work.

She seems like she'd be good at climbing trees, seeing as she has such long limbs. Mmm, I guess she would be a pretty fast runner, too. Possibly both? As of right now, she's categorized as a loner, so I believe she'd be good at running. Does this help?

[detective who.]

Yes, it does~
As a loner, either of those skills could help her survive and stay out of sight, depending on the territory.
If the climbing/running ability is notable within the Clan, she should be given -tail or -foot, respectively. Does that make sense?

[despairz]

That makes sense. So her name would be Ashfoot or Ashtail?

[Keriae]

A black silver tabby? No... I got her pelt from this cat but made her more of a grey-ish color.

And as for the personality;
She is generally an optimistic, happy cat. She's independent and a bit selfish, and prefers to not help others when they ask for assistance. She isn't exactly a "stuck-up" cat; she doesn't help others, so they can figure it out themselves. She isn't exactly the smartest warrior in the clan, as it takes a bit longer for her to learn, but when she does learn, she remembers it. (Name) doesn't hold grudges for long, nor does she get angry easily; again, when she does, it is over something absolutely terrible. Generally, she's kind and passionate, so getting on her bad side is rather hard.
--- I think that about sums her up.

That's a cinnamon silver mackerel tabby c:
If she's just blue she doesn't need kittypet ancestry, but if she had it, it would be easier to tie into her past.

[detective who.]

That makes sense. So her name would be Ashfoot or Ashtail?

Right~

And Keriae is right too; if she's a loner, it would be very possible for her to have recent kittypet ancestry.

Edit;; I will start working on that list soon, no worries. I'm going to be at a camp this week, but it is possible I'll do a few prefixes today.

[blue neighbourhood]

Heh, I'm back again... :3



Name;; I think Fawn___, I'm not sure of the suffix yet uvu
Personality;; She's quiet and patient, and seems shy to some. She's gentle and caring and has the motherly skills. She tends to think things over too much, and overestimates things. She isn't a fighter or a hunter - she helps out in the nursery (like Daisy :3).
Skills;; Patient, gentle, kind, soft-hearted.
As I said she doesn't fight, but can step in for hunting if she needs to (Illness in the Clan weakening best hunters, etc.). She isn't the best at hunting though, although she's delicate she's usually clumsy, or leaps too far or not far enough.

Sorry if I take a while to reply, I'm on holiday and won't get back home until Sunday night. I'll try my best to steal my brother's laptop though cx
Also, I hope you had a nice camp.. c:

[detective who.]

It's nice to see you again. And I had a lovely time at camp, thank you!

On suffix, I would go for -flower, definitely.
I'm not sure your prefix works, though. Fawn- is for the colour, not the baby deer, and fawn is a very pale brown. I think you ought to try some others.

Sorry, everyone, on not working on the prefix list; I'll try to get to starting on that this week. Thank you all for your patience~

[chrislion121]

Name: Maplepaw (haven't thought of a suffix yet but I was thinking heart)
Personality: She is an introvert though very curious and inquisitive. She is ambitious and good at about everything except swimming. She is very nice though sometimes she seems rude because she avoids most conversations. Because she is so she she can be very mysterious.


Name: Mousepaw (Have not thought of a suffix yet)
Personality: Fun loving and a little soft hearted. He is strong willed despite being easily swayed to change his mind.

[winter solstice.]

Okay, I had a debate on which names I should use for my oldest OCs, Nightclaw and Darkfur, since they do sound a bit plain, and I thought 'why not' for giving them new names c:

From what I saw from your critiques, -claw is for strong fighters, of which Nightclaw isn't... so ^^'

Name: Nightclaw
Description: A black she-cat with white patches with blue eyes
Skill/Personality Notes: She is a fast cat who is a better hunter than a fighter. She is an average climber/jumper, and is good at sneaking up on prey as well. As for personality, she is a slightly reserved cat, though this doesn't get in theway of her life as a warrior. Other than that, she is loyal and has a strong sense of justice.

Name: Darkfur
Description: A dark brown tabby tom with amber eyes
Skill/Personality Notes: Darkfur is a skilled fighter, and a better-than-average hunter, but only with mice or shrew. He is a poor climber, and isn't good at catching birds or squirrels because of this.

[junebug22]

Warrior cats are awesome