Warrior Cat Names {Critiques and Advice} {Traditional}

[Keriae]

If by chocolate you mean like this, Mousefoot will have to have kittypet ancestry, most likely recently c: otherwise he cannot be solid brown; brown tabbies and black cat are genetically identical apart from one lacks the agouti gene.

[atii]

@Keriae
yeah, he was a kitty pet before he became a warrior. purebred havana brown.

[detective who.]

Bump.

[lady chocobo]

Description: boop!
Skill/Personality Notes: this black molly is bad at organizing things and refuses to makes promises. she's terrible at lying and hates StarClan. very good at hunting climbing prey good at withstanding harsh, cold weather, thanks to her long fur. is strict, independent and very stubborn; will often refuse help, and doesn't trust others easily.

[oraoblivionis]

Name; “Mau” or “Blackwater”
Age; “Around 20 to 30 moons.”
Gender; “Female”
Personality; “She can get a bit crabby when triggered, but will shake it off soon. When you insult her, she tells you to stop, or she’ll claw your face.”
Additional Info; “Her prefix, Black- is representing her fur. The suffix, water, was chosen to to her flowing personality and her white fur.”
History; “A few moons after a flood, Blackkit was born, the runt of her 2 brothers. She was usually laughed at by her brothers for her being weak, and sying she’ll be in the Nursery forever. Her self-esteem stayed the same though. She had herself, and that was all she needed. Her apprentice ceremony came before her two brother’s because of her strong self. At the age of 19 moons old, she became a warrior. Soon after, she was blamed of killing her mother, Snowfoot. She was exiled.”

[RuffTheRuler]

Name: Blackcloud
Skill/Personality Notes: Wise, quiet, fair, sly, daring, curious
He's good at hiding, running, and climbing.

[Keriae]

Please be aware that that feline has advanced Vitiligo, also known as Leukoderma. That cat will be on the older side of things and due to the nature of Clan life may not be a warrior any longer, if they are still alive.

[detective who.]

Description: boop!
Skill/Personality Notes: this black molly is bad at organizing things and refuses to makes promises. she's terrible at lying and hates StarClan. very good at hunting climbing prey good at withstanding harsh, cold weather, thanks to her long fur. is strict, independent and very stubborn; will often refuse help, and doesn't trust others easily.

Hi again, Lady.
On prefix, check out the Black section of the prefix list linked on the first page; I'd rather you found your own. You'll be more satisfied that way.
In the way of suffix, I'd say -tail or -whisker, depending on whether her climbing or hunting skills are more notable.

Name; “Mau” or “Blackwater”
Age; “Around 20 to 30 moons.”
Gender; “Female”
Personality; “She can get a bit crabby when triggered, but will shake it off soon. When you insult her, she tells you to stop, or she’ll claw your face.”
Additional Info; “Her prefix, Black- is representing her fur. The suffix, water, was chosen to to her flowing personality and her white fur.”
History; “A few moons after a flood, Blackkit was born, the runt of her 2 brothers. She was usually laughed at by her brothers for her being weak, and sying she’ll be in the Nursery forever. Her self-esteem stayed the same though. She had herself, and that was all she needed. Her apprentice ceremony came before her two brother’s because of her strong self. At the age of 19 moons old, she became a warrior. Soon after, she was blamed of killing her mother, Snowfoot. She was exiled.”

Hello, Terebae. Nice to have you here.
Her prefix is great, but I'm not entirely sure what's going on with her suffix. A suffix isn't meant to represent appearance; and what do you mean by a 'flowing personality'?
What are her skills? In a suffix, those are more important than personality. If you help me out, I can give you some advice, but as it is, I don't have a lot to work with.

Name: Blackcloud
Skill/Personality Notes: Wise, quiet, fair, sly, daring, curious
He's good at hiding, running, and climbing.

Black- is a great prefix for them, as he would have had much more black on him when he was made a warrior, though I'm not sure why you chose -cloud as their suffix. From what you've listed, perhaps they deserve -foot or -tail instead?
It's also possible they would desire a name change, due to their prefix not fitting well at this point in their life, but that's up to you.

[CoolComrade]

Could this type of cat be found in the wild? I was wondering because its nose and the inside of the ears are super pink.

[Keriae]

I've never seen a white cat with such prominent pink, and it's not albino so I'd say the picture is probably edited. However, a white cat can definitely occur in feral colonies, though black and tabby are the default colours.