by Lightttt » Tue Aug 04, 2015 2:44 pm
Alright, time to start ranting!
First of all, how Dovewing's power basically took over Ivypool's role in the story. If Dovewing was able to spy on the Dark Forest using her power, that makes Ivypool's work not so special. I realize that it was at the last minute and took a lot of effort on her part, but how come Dovewing gets to do what was supposed to be Ivypool's job? She had to suffer through all those injuries, and Dovewing gets to do pretty much the same thing using her power. It bothers me.
Spottedleaf and Firestar. While Spottedleaf was alive, she really didn't show any feelings for Firepaw at all. It just seemed like he had a tiny crush on her and that was it. But when Spottedleaf died, Firepaw said something along the lines of "Goodbye, my love," then attempted to kill the cat that killed her. Apparently Spottedleaf must have fallen in love with him in StarClan, because she proceeded to help him constantly and downright said that she loved him. It just doesn't make sense.
Ashfur. Just Ashfur. I really dislike how many people defend him for what he did, when he really doesn't have any excuse. Just because this she-cat doesn't like you back, does not mean you get to try murdering her father (also the leader of your Clan!) and her kits. That's insane. Squirrelflight wasn't even rude - she offered to stay friends! Ashfur's only fault was not "loving too much," it was attempted murder over something stupid.
I have more, but this post is getting kinda long...
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