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by Simonpet » Wed May 13, 2015 1:52 pm
Name: Lily | Lilypaw | Lilyheart
Description: Lilyheart is a purple fox with blue eyes
Skill/Personality Notes: Lilyheart is all-around in her skills, though as her suffix suggests, she is very outspoken and has her own set of moral code that she lives by, as well as following the Warrior Code. She is mates with Acorntail, a Yemao Yumao, but never has kits with him as they are of two different species.
Lilyheart is based off of this fox. She is in a feline multi-species story, where most of the characters aren't naturally colored, or are cats.
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by oraoblivionis » Wed May 13, 2015 2:27 pm
Yey! New cats!

Brambleheart
Shes rather rude and disrespectful, but follows leader's orders. Every morning, her pelt sticks out like brambles. The first suffix is for her brown fur and her prickly morning fur. Her last suffix represents her loyalty to her clan.

Silverkit
Her mother is Brambleheart, and her father is Skyfang. Her pelt is silver, and it was from her father's mother's genes. Her Silver- suffix comes from her silver fur.

Skyfang
He is skilled in hunting and fighting. He is mates with Brambleheart, and father to Silverkit. He has blue silver tabby fur and lots of white. He has bright yellow eyes and a scar across his face from a battle.
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by detective who. » Wed May 13, 2015 3:21 pm
Simonpet wrote:Name: Lily | Lilypaw | Lilyheart
Description: Lilyheart is a purple fox with blue eyes
Skill/Personality Notes: Lilyheart is all-around in her skills, though as her suffix suggests, she is very outspoken and has her own set of moral code that she lives by, as well as following the Warrior Code. She is mates with Acorntail, a Yemao Yumao, but never has kits with him as they are of two different species.
Lilyheart is based off of this fox. She is in a feline multi-species story, where most of the characters aren't naturally colored, or are cats.
Hello again, Simon!
Lily- comes from the lily-of-the-valley, which is white. You might glance through the Grey section of Ailuronymy's prefix list; there are a few plants in there that have purple flowers.
I'd go for -fang instead of -heart on her suffix, if what you mean by all-around is what I think you do. Skill suffixes should always come before personality.
That sounds like a very interesting role play; have fun!
And good day to you, Neppy. Quick note before I begin: the first part of the name (Bramble- in Brambleheart) is the prefix. The latter part (-heart) is the suffix.
Brambleheart - Her prefix is fine, though keep in mind that it's for pelt colour, not texture; when she was given the name Bramblekit as a kit, her mother wouldn't have known that she would get bed-fur.
Her suffix doesn't really work, though. All cats are loyal to the Clan (or should be), otherwise their lifestyle would fall apart. -heart is if you're loyal to your own morals, no matter what, even if that means breaking the warrior code. It's great that she's loyal to her Clan, but it doesn't really deserve a suffix. You're probably better off with -pelt or -fur, unless there are other notable things about her skills or personality you could tell me.
Silverkit - The prefix is fine.
Skyfang - Check this. Sky- tells me too much to tell me anything about the appearance of your cat. Look over the White and Patched sections of the prefix list and see if anything catches your eye.
His suffix is excellent. I hope this helped.
On another note, where did those images come from? I've seen them around before, and they're really neat. Are they from a generator, or what?
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by Simonpet » Wed May 13, 2015 4:02 pm
A bit more in depth about my story...
It is a (fan-fic) story, set in Cherryclan. The first leader was Cherrystar, an odd-colored she-cat with her siblings, who became deputy and first medicine cat. They took in any feline, realistic or non-realistic in coloring or species. This lead to felines that were only feline in name (such as Taikeas or Tufted Two-Tails). Lilypaw and her friend, Acornpaw, were the ones to find a good camp to settle down in, part of the reason why Lilypaw became Lilyheart, due to her outspoken nature. Sadly, I haven't been able to complete the story. C: Now, onto the reviewing.Name: Acornpaw | Acorntail
Gender: Male
Description: xXx
Personality: Acorntail is bright, though often hasty in judgments. He acts like he is on sugar often, though has calmed down as a warrior, and even more so, an elder. As an elder, he often reminices on his life, and wonders what would have been had his mate, Lilyheart not died a warrior in the prime of her life.
Skills: Acorntail is, as his name suggests, very agile, in both body and mind. As an apprentice, he was one of the brightest, as well as jumping to conclusions that where just as often wrong as they were right. He is one of the best climbers in the clan and holds the standard for -tail cats in Cherryclan.
Other: Nothing
Name: Brownpaw | Brownleaf
Gender: Female
Description: xXx
Personality: Brownleaf is calm and intelligent, thinking before speaking. She has the makings of a -cloud, though as an apprentice, showed remarkable skill with herbs. Also, she gets excited often, as well as very social, especially with her friends. But despite this, she never takes on a mate or has children.
Skills: Brownleaf is a remarkably skilled medicine cat, surpassing her mentor in every way.
Other: Nothing
Status wrote:The fly intestines have panned out simply
amazingly! I have co-authored a paper on
them, which is very exciting. In other
news, I'm a lil' nervous about the future
again but I'm hopeful things will work out.
Dragon Cave wrote:none yet
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by Silxe » Tue May 19, 2015 5:32 am
Description: Silky white molly with hazel eyes and a pointed pink nose.
Skill/Personality Notes: She has an air of elegance about her, and walks with a refined flow. She doesn't posses any notable skills.
Name: Stagheart
Description: Very tall brown tom with some white on his chest, and a bit around his amber eyes.
Skill/Personality Notes: He is also a more refined warrior, but not quite as much. He is brave and very loyal to his clan. He is aware he seems intimidating, and has no qualms using this to his advantage, as he sees it as a perk that will help him and the ones he cares about.
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by oraoblivionis » Thu May 21, 2015 2:36 pm
Detective Who wrote:Simonpet wrote:Name: Lily | Lilypaw | Lilyheart
Description: Lilyheart is a purple fox with blue eyes
Skill/Personality Notes: Lilyheart is all-around in her skills, though as her suffix suggests, she is very outspoken and has her own set of moral code that she lives by, as well as following the Warrior Code. She is mates with Acorntail, a Yemao Yumao, but never has kits with him as they are of two different species.
Lilyheart is based off of this fox. She is in a feline multi-species story, where most of the characters aren't naturally colored, or are cats.
Hello again, Simon!
Lily- comes from the lily-of-the-valley, which is white. You might glance through the Grey section of Ailuronymy's prefix list; there are a few plants in there that have purple flowers.
I'd go for -fang instead of -heart on her suffix, if what you mean by all-around is what I think you do. Skill suffixes should always come before personality.
That sounds like a very interesting role play; have fun!
And good day to you, Neppy. Quick note before I begin: the first part of the name (Bramble- in Brambleheart) is the prefix. The latter part (-heart) is the suffix.
Brambleheart - Her prefix is fine, though keep in mind that it's for pelt colour, not texture; when she was given the name Bramblekit as a kit, her mother wouldn't have known that she would get bed-fur.
Her suffix doesn't really work, though. All cats are loyal to the Clan (or should be), otherwise their lifestyle would fall apart. -heart is if you're loyal to your own morals, no matter what, even if that means breaking the warrior code. It's great that she's loyal to her Clan, but it doesn't really deserve a suffix. You're probably better off with -pelt or -fur, unless there are other notable things about her skills or personality you could tell me.
Silverkit - The prefix is fine.
Skyfang - Check this. Sky- tells me too much to tell me anything about the appearance of your cat. Look over the White and Patched sections of the prefix list and see if anything catches your eye.
His suffix is excellent. I hope this helped.
On another note, where did those images come from? I've seen them around before, and they're really neat. Are they from a generator, or what?
Its from Feral Front.
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