Warrior Cat Names {Critiques and Advice} {Traditional}

[Keriae]

You're welcome c: I was going to post this morning but I didn't have time. The best thing to do would be to make them light grey (Arcticstreak) and white (Dewpelt, Thornfoot). Bare in mind that the whites need to have another colour under all that whitespotting too.

[Stonefly]

Name: Firestream
Description: short haired orange tabby cat with a small white spot on his chest. He has olive green eyes.
Skill/Personality Note: He loves water and swimming, he is on of few cats in his clan that can swim. He was given the Prefix because of his colour, and Stream as his suffix because of his ability to swim and his love for water.

[detective who.]

Hi, Stonefly.
Firestream is an excellent name for your tom, and has the added bonus of sounding and looking pretty cool. Happy writing.

[rocoboq]

Name: Spottedkit (Paw, Strike)
Description: Spottedkit is a silver cat with black spots all over her pelt. She has a bobbed tail she received when she was a kittypet, and has heterochromia. One eye is yellow green, and the other is light blue.


Skill/Personality Notes:
Kit (This is her current rank, the others are me planning ahead):
Spottedkit is a semi-traumatized kit who is still trying to get over her family's death. She had seen them killed in front of her by something unknown (this is going to be revealed in an RP I'm in) and kept getting nightmares about it. After running into a Marshclan cat and joining their clan, she became more trusting towards other cats she doesn't know well.
Apprentice:
As an apprentice, Spottedpaw has finally gotten over her family's death and is a young, semi-feisty cat who loves to run. She enjoys battle-training, even though she knows fights are not good. She also enjoys running and takes random runs around various places around the marsh, while occasionally hunting at the same time. Her running usually scares the prey away. She is very energetic and can be sharp-tongued, but not so often. She is stubborn and will stand up for what she thinks is right or believes in, but follows the Warrior Code as though if she broke it she would die... Most of the time. She does occasionally break some rules, but not major ones. She's also fairly smart and can think strategically, and can work well under pressure.
Warrior:
As a warrior, Spottedstrike is one of the fastest cats in her clan, if not the fastest, and an excellent fighter. She is quite feisty and energetic, and sharp-tongued more often than when she was an apprentice, but still not very often. She does still take random runs into the marsh, but while she does so, she hunts and brings back the prey she gathers. She had ran so often as an apprentice she could run quietly, lightly and fast, so she doesn't scare all the prey away. She still is very stubborn and stands up bravely for what she believes in or thinks is right. Spottedstrike enjoys being outside and doing stuff, and is not very patient, though she is still fairly smart and can think strategically. She can also think and work well under pressure, and follows the Warrior Code the same way she did as an apprentice, but with less rule-breaking. She does occasionally break very minor rules, though.

[detective who.]

Hi, Isabel.
Spotted- is an excellent prefix for this cat, but I wouldn't recommend -strike for her suffix. First off, it's untraditional, and second off, it seems to be used for good fighters, I believe. In that case, just use -claw. I do believe, however, that Spottedkit is a -foot cat; she's fast, she likes to run, and she uses her speed for something productive. -foot all around.
By the way, I'm not sure silver spotted tabbies would show up in the wild. Keriae?

[scribblefishyy]

CODE: SELECT ALL
Name:Eaglesoar
Description: http://i.imgur.com/LncbK1Q.jpg
Skill/Personality Notes: Eaglesoar left her own and clan and joined Moonclan (yes i know a kinda bad name for a clan.) She is bitter and stubborn, kinda like Yellowfang, but she can be very caring and very loyal. After Waterpaw Eaglesoars apprentice, grew old enough to be med cat, Eaglesoar was still young enough to join the warriors as a senior warrior. She was actually quite skilled at fighting, because she was a warrior in her old clan.

[Keriae]

A black silver spotted tabby could show up in a feral cat population, especially as black is a favoured and very common colour in such colonies; just look at Tashirojima in Japan. However, she would need very recent kittypet ancestry and one of her parents would have to be silver or smoke themselves - or even chinchilla, if one of her parents was a Persian, say. These genes only show up in purebred cats or cats that may have been crossed.
That being said, Spottedkit could not have heterochromia. It only shows up (as far as I know) in cats with a high percentage of white spotting. She would have to have white going above her eyes on her face for even one eye to be blue, as blue is linked to white and white only, bar from the oriental breeds.

[rocoboq]

Thanks! I'm not going so specific as to have Spottedkit be exactly authentic with the eyes (I like heterochromia, that's why I gave her it.), but her parents were kittypets; or at least her mom was. I'm still deciding whether I want the dad to be a rogue or a kittypet. :3

I think I'll use Spottedfoot when she becomes a warrior.

[detective who.]

CODE: SELECT ALL
Name:Eaglesoar
Description: http://i.imgur.com/LncbK1Q.jpg
Skill/Personality Notes: Eaglesoar left her own and clan and joined Moonclan (yes i know a kinda bad name for a clan.) She is bitter and stubborn, kinda like Yellowfang, but she can be very caring and very loyal. After Waterpaw Eaglesoars apprentice, grew old enough to be med cat, Eaglesoar was still young enough to join the warriors as a senior warrior. She was actually quite skilled at fighting, because she was a warrior in her old clan.

Good day, Dreamwhisper. I almost typed 'Dreamwhisker' twice, ehehe.

First off, if you know MoonClan is a bad name for a Clan, why are you using it? Unless it wasn't your decision, that's kind of a silly choice.
Now, name. Eagle- doesn't work for a golden cat; both species of eagles in England are brown (and also rather rare). Check the Golden section of the Ailuronymy prefix list on the front page for some fitting prefixes.
-soar isn't a traditional suffix, so I won't advise the use of it, and I've no idea what it's supposed to indicate. I'm not sure about suffix; perhaps -claw? It would help if you elaborated a little more on her skills and personality.
Also, I'm pretty sure that pelt is completely impossible. Maybe go for a golden tabby instead.

I hope this helps.

[RuffTheRuler]

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