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[Scei]

@Rise,Shine,Set
Splendid story!! I love the blossoming romance theme to it! im am very curious as to what's going on with Spencer's family, but i guess thats an important part of the story! Im getting great imagery from this which is probably the most important part! good job! overall length is fine ^-^ seeing as i dont even have to scroll down x3 how many words is it may i ask? (i was mostly guestimating -guess estimating- with the original wording xD)

@lnsomnia
Welcome! good luck!

@Mid-life
Great so far! continue with the good work ;D
Oh also! what form are they in? anthro, full human, or human with animal ears/tail?
/im not going to comment on it like Rise's until its finished/

[Mid-life]

@Mid-life
Great so far! continue with the good work ;D
Oh also! what form are they in? anthro, full human, or human with animal ears/tail?
/im not going to comment on it like Rise's until its finished/

Human with animal ears/tail.

[Scei]

Okay i thpught so ^-^ making sure :3

[Mid-life]

Okay i thpught so ^-^ making sure :3

Yes of course! I'm happy to answer other questions you have about my story. I'm thinking about numbering the pages like 1-4, but that might turn out to be confusing >.<

[Scei]

Yeaaah probably xD plus in the future i can set thwm up, and i might rearrange flashbacks or memories slightly so it works with the set up ^-^

Sorry it took so long to respond, my character shop just had a buyout rush ^-^;;

[Tatangi]

RavenBrigade || 6 || Post URL || Comedy/Romance/Fantasy/Adventure
Airianna, Riskey Gear, Oscar

Figured it's be easier to copy if I went ahead and added it to the post, anyway so here's my short story:

The rush was so addicting. When you first close your eyes and enter a world only so few can enter, your body feels like it's vibrating as your soul leaves your body and you move to the world of [insert world name here]. Here there are creatures known as [name], who appear to be animals, but the only difference is they walk upright. They are usually the friendly beings of this world, but then you have the half-bloods. They appear human, but with some animal parts like ears and tails. They were once slaves, but thanks to my kind they were brought to equal grounds with the [species1]. The thing is, my kind are not meant to be in their world, and yet we come only when we are allowed crossover for drastic events. We are the guardians of their realm. We are known as Peace Keepers, but the vulgar term tends to be Ticker. The Half-bloods blame the Keepers for their troubles these days, and are now rising to take over this realm. Their leader is a half-blood by the name of Oscar, which I was sent to take down. It didn't go that way... instead I was captured. Then again this could work in my favor. I can work from this inside and try to take down Oscar's empire without really bringing any harm to the Half-bloods at all. That is our only weakness after all, Keepers are not allowed to inflict harm on others of this realm. If we are killed here though, we are killed in our realm as well. Luckily my good friend Airianna, the [species1] princess, has her royal guards out searching for me. Will they get here in time before Oscar steals my life? Or maybe even my heart?

Obviously I've left some gaps because I read where you wanted to do a lot of the plot work yourself. I figured I'd give the basics skeleton and it could be fleshed out from there. Characters could be changed if needed, but I really like the idea of humans going to a world of animal like creatures and being their peace keepers when war may rage. Also the idea of Airianna being a princess to her people and Oscar being a leader of a rebel group is entertaining. Having full anthros think they are superior to nekos makes sense and I haven't seen it done before in comics. It'd be pretty original.

[Intelligentleman]

@Miss. Scei- eumh, about that... 1135 or something.. :/ but i'm glad you liked it! :D

[Mid-life]

@Miss. Scei- eumh, about that... 1135 or something.. :/ but i'm glad you liked it! :D

Wow. Did you have an idea before you wrote? Cause it didn't take you very long. The reason why it takes me awhile for me to write is because I need to think of a conflict and an ending.

Man.. idek what the conflict is gonna be ;-;

[Intelligentleman]

@Mid-Life, Nah, not really. What i did was look up reference pics, and after i had decided on two i was like 'hey, they look like school kids.' i choose random names from the net xD and Clio's perspective, and started making things up as i went along. I think i tend to plan quickly.

[Scei]

@rise1 Woah, 1135? seriously? o^o nice!! ^□^

@midlife,rise Yeaah i kinda work the same way, excwpt while im looking for characters i make up things about them and when i find the right one I'm like "her mother is dead, she hates pickles, she spends her time watching birds fight over seed putside her bedroom window" and the list keeps going x3