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by MigratingCoconut » Mon Jun 06, 2011 11:11 am
• l o r r e l i • wrote:
the statue ------------------------------ the tree
(fail story is fail D:)
*Gapes* That story is amazing. It is so unique. I love it, you did a great job.
Signature is a work in progress...

1st soldier with a keen interest in birds: Are you suggesting coconuts migrate?
King Arthur: Not at all. They could be carried.
1st soldier with a keen interest in birds: What? A swallow carrying a coconut?
King Arthur: It could grip it by the husk!
1st soldier with a keen interest in birds: It's not a question of where he grips it! It's a simple question of weight ratios! A five ounce bird could not carry a one pound coconut.
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by Freyàh » Mon Jun 06, 2011 11:27 am
@• l o r r e l i • This is such a beautiful story! It really makes me stop and think for a while... I aboslutely love it! And I feel bad for both the tree and the statue...

Caitlyn (f) | Hadrian (m)
"I must be really stupid to go on this ride with you!" Caitlyn murmured, a bit nervous looking at the swinging ship, going up and down in the darkness of the night.
"Oh come on, it's our last night in this city. You haven't been on any of the amusement park rides yet." The boy next to her replied. Their school had organized a trip to a near city for a weekend, so the students could relax a bit from their last week of lessons.
"Well, I don't like rides! Why don't you go by yourself, you have already been on it... like, 7 times or more." she said and took a step backwards, trying to blend in with all the other people visiting the amusement park that night.
"You were the one who wanted to go on this. And now, like always, you back out at the last moment." he said, a bit of disappointment in his voice. Then he added under his breath teasingly "Scaredy cat."
"Fine then! Let's go, Hadrian!" Caitlyn said annoyed, and grabbed his hand then pulling him to the ride. He chuckled; Hadrian always knew how to make Caitlyn do things she doesn't want to. They sat on the last row, when the ride was on it's highest point it could get - they were there. Of course, it wasn't really that high, but for a person like Caitlyn who was terrified from all rides, it seemed as if they were in the clouds. She screamed like crazy each time the ride was going down, holding on the safety bar like her life depends on it.
"Good thing we are the only ones on this ride, because this is getting embarassing." he laughed.
"Shut up!" she screamed, and looked towards him. Hadrian was sitting next to her, and that was probably one of the reasons she agreed to go on this ride in the first place. Him. He was looking straight ahead, enjoying the view. He didn't even notice she was staring at him. Caitlyn didn't scream for the first time - the dark sky behind him and all these little sparkling stars... She couldn't hear the rest of the people down there, everything was quiet and it seemed like time had stopped. The girl was focused entirely on the sight infront of her, trying to drink up every little detail and every feeling from that moment, completely forgetting everything. Then suddenly, the ride took her back to reality, going down once again. Caitlyn remembered where she was, and screamed once again:
"Shut up!"
"But I haven't said anything...." Hadrian added, confused.
* * * *
It was now really late, about half past 10. There were no people except Hadrian and Caitlyn. They walked down the street alone, towards the bus stop. Caitlyn was going to wait for the bus, while Hadrian's dad was going to come with a car and take him home. When they reached the bus stop, both sat under a tree and started talking. Caitlyn couldn't help but try to remember all the fun things they did together this school year. But it was over. Friday was the last day of their sophomore year, and now they were in summer vacation. She also felt a bit of sadness, because she knew he went to England on summer vacations. Two months. She wouldn't be able to see him for two months.
"And you were like "Aaaaah!" the whole time! You should have seen your face!" he laughed.
"And you were like "Hey! Stop it!" the whole time!" she said, laughing.
"Huh? When?" Hadrian seemed confused, but then she punched him on the shoulder.
"Hey! Stop it!" he rubbed his shoulder. After a few moments of silence, they both started laughing. She thought for a moment what it would be right now if she hadn't been assigned to do that report with him. He would have probably still ignored her in all the classes they had together, and she would still do nothing but sketching in her notebook in class, instead of talking with him.
"You know, my father wants me to go and study in the USA in my next or senior year. He thinks that my education isn't good enough in this school." he murmured.
"What?" she repeated, suddenly feeling like someone hit her really hard.
"No big deal, not like anyone would miss me! The people from school will forget me as soon as I leave!" he said laughing, but she felt a bit of sadness in his words.
"How...how could you say this! Everyone will miss you a lot, and you know it! You are the life and soul of the school!" she said angrily. And she was right - he was the cool, popular guy, the one half of the girls had a crush on, the one everybody liked. Then she added quietly "If not them, I will never forget you."
They stood there under the tree, silence surrounding them. It was only interrupted by the rustling leaves and a little nightingale's muffled singing in the background. He then suddenly added "Uh, my earphones are broken..." as he played with the wire in his fingers. One thing Hadrian loved a lot in his life, was music. He listened to it all the time - while taking walks, while in a car, in his room, always.
"Well, you can have mine." Caitlyn said cheerfully. She also loved music, and always had her earphones with her, although she rarely listened to music with them.
"Really?" Hadrian gasped, sounding like a kid which is being read a bed story, and the hero finally beating the dragon in the end. His eyes sparkling like a little boy's, too.
"Sure, let me just dig them out from my bag." the girl smiled at him, although her smile was probably left invisible in the darkness. She finally found them, and added "They're red by the way. Like your favourite colour." He took them gently from her hand, running his fingers softly over the earphones a few times, as if they were golden or something. Just then, the bus came, and Caitlyn had to go. "Thanks a lot." he said, and she hugged him tightly, before murmuring a "Goodbye", and jumping on the bus. Hadrian smiled, and sat under the tree once again, only this time listening to music from his new earphones.
Bleh x.x Really sorry for the terrible story, everyone ... It's based on a true story... well, most of it xD I made it sound a bit more romantic than it actually was.
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by dead poets society » Mon Jun 06, 2011 11:59 am

Lover (F)

Sinner (M)
'But... You can't just leave me here!" I shouted over the wind and the rain as it pounded down on me leaving me wet as he drove away. My thoughts were racing past. "I hate you!" I shouted as the rain and my tears mixed together on my face. I shuddered and started to walk home."Please forgive me" I pleaded on the phone. I wanted nothing more than to be alone with my lover, appropriatley name Lover. My voice was nothing more than a strangled cry. "Please come back to me" I said one more time. "Please" But it was over. She still hated me, and would never forgive me. Why did I tell her it was I who killed her father? It was rainy that night, and he was crossing the street... (More...?))


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by moira » Mon Jun 06, 2011 12:34 pm
Metamorphasis
Tomos
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Kaye Tomos lived in a small dog pack in a secret valley. It was a beautiful place, the lush green grass stretched on for miles, bordered by forests and craggy mountain peaks. But, he always wondered what was on the other side of those mountains. They kept him in and cooped up, and he was tired of it. As far as he knew, none of the generation before his had ever known life beyond the valley. It was two generations before that had first began to inhabit the area. Then, their children had stayed. There was always plenty of game and water. No humans could climb the peaks, or maybe they didn't want to. They were safe.
But, the thing Tomos hated the most was the fact that the dogs considered most attractive had the most beautiful patterns. He despised his dull and boring coat, and of course, the girl he treasured the most was completely out of his league.
Her name was Kaye, and she was by far, the most beautiful female in the pack. Around the same age as Tomos, she attracted a small flock of boys that followed her around and treated to her every need. He never stood a chance, against the handsome boys that were always there.
...
The day that the frustration of his very prejudiced pack was a special one. In fact, it was Valentine's day. Kaye, as usual, had received a flood of Valentines from all the other boys. Tomos hadn't bothered to send one. It would probably be crushed in the massive tidal wave the others gave.
He wandered in the forest, scowling, as he kicked a stone around. And that's when he met the strangest, brightest dog he'd ever seen.
Black and yellow, somewhat checkered, her pattern was so busy he had no clue where to look at.
"Uh, hello?" He calls out tentatively.
The female walks up. "So..Tomos..."
"How d'you know my name?" Tomos asked, unnerved by this personal greeting.
"I know everything about you. Especially how you don't like how you look." She replies plaintively.
Tomos can't say anything in reply.
The dog smiles broadly, revealing a perfect array of sharp, white teeth. "Fine, fine. Well...How about I can make you the brightest, most handsome dog in the pack?"
Tomos' eyes brighten immediately. "Seriously? You aren't just gonna trick me, are you?" He's paranoid of this stranger.
She chuckles. "No, no, no. Never. Trust me. Just...stand there." She indicates a rock in a ray of partial sunlight. Since when has that been there...?
Tomos gives her a suspicious glance, but steps onto the rock.
"Good, good. Now...Stay still.." The dog says, still grinning in a malicious way.
The next thing he knows, a thick layer of glitter is tumbling from the dogs outstretched paw and he suddenly blacks out, his skull smashing the rock especially hard....
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Tomos wakes up a few hours later to find it's completely dark out.
"Wha-?" He gasps, sitting up suddenly. His head throbs.
"What happened...?" He wonders.
All he can remember is wandering into the forest. Was..was the strange yellow and black dog a dream? Was she real? What happened?
Shaking off the strangeness of this event, he lumbers back off to the pack.
...
The next morning, he awakes to see a few dogs staring at him. What's going on?
Did the others cover him in bugs again? Giving the dogs gawking at him a scowl, he gets up and stretches.
And that's when he notices his coat.

Instead of its usual black with red, it's glimmering in the sunlight. A dark brown base, sprinkled with white. And his shoulders...Butterfly wings. It's as if someone had painted them on him, delicately colored dark red, black and white. The pattern stretches from his lower neck, to his front paws to his haunches. He gets up to observe his new coat better. And then the memories of last night hit him. The witch-stranger lady...She was real. And she turned him into this! Jolting up, he sprints to the stream to get a good look at himself.
At the stream, he notices the only thing remaining the same are his eyes, which are the same shade of blue.
Oh boy, would Kaye ever notice him now!
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Too bad whatever goes up must come down.
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by OMGItsFireFoxx » Mon Jun 06, 2011 12:50 pm

Caitlyn (f) | Hadrian (m)
"I must be really stupid to go on this ride with you!" Caitlyn murmured, a bit nervous looking at the swinging ship, going up and down in the darkness of the night.
"Oh come on, it's our last night in this city. You haven't been on any of the amusement park rides yet." The boy next to her replied. Their school had organized a trip to a near city for a weekend, so the students could relax a bit from their last week of lessons.
"Well, I don't like rides! Why don't you go by yourself, you have already been on it... like, 7 times or more." she said and took a step backwards, trying to blend in with all the other people visiting the amusement park that night.
"You were the one who wanted to go on this. And now, like always, you back out at the last moment." he said, a bit of disappointment in his voice. Then he added under his breath teasingly "Scaredy cat."
"Fine then! Let's go, Hadrian!" Caitlyn said annoyed, and grabbed his hand then pulling him to the ride. He chuckled; Hadrian always knew how to make Caitlyn do things she doesn't want to. They sat on the last row, when the ride was on it's highest point it could get - they were there. Of course, it wasn't really that high, but for a person like Caitlyn who was terrified from all rides, it seemed as if they were in the clouds. She screamed like crazy each time the ride was going down, holding on the safety bar like her life depends on it.
"Good thing we are the only ones on this ride, because this is getting embarassing." he laughed.
"Shut up!" she screamed, and looked towards him. Hadrian was sitting next to her, and that was probably one of the reasons she agreed to go on this ride in the first place. Him. He was looking straight ahead, enjoying the view. He didn't even notice she was staring at him. Caitlyn didn't scream for the first time - the dark sky behind him and all these little sparkling stars... She couldn't hear the rest of the people down there, everything was quiet and it seemed like time had stopped. The girl was focused entirely on the sight infront of her, trying to drink up every little detail and every feeling from that moment, completely forgetting everything. Then suddenly, the ride took her back to reality, going down once again. Caitlyn remembered where she was, and screamed once again:
"Shut up!"
"But I haven't said anything...." Hadrian added, confused.
* * * *
It was now really late, about half past 10. There were no people except Hadrian and Caitlyn. They walked down the street alone, towards the bus stop. Caitlyn was going to wait for the bus, while Hadrian's dad was going to come with a car and take him home. When they reached the bus stop, both sat under a tree and started talking. Caitlyn couldn't help but try to remember all the fun things they did together this school year. But it was over. Friday was the last day of their sophomore year, and now they were in summer vacation. She also felt a bit of sadness, because she knew he went to England on summer vacations. Two months. She wouldn't be able to see him for two months.
"And you were like "Aaaaah!" the whole time! You should have seen your face!" he laughed.
"And you were like "Hey! Stop it!" the whole time!" she said, laughing.
"Huh? When?" Hadrian seemed confused, but then she punched him on the shoulder.
"Hey! Stop it!" he rubbed his shoulder. After a few moments of silence, they both started laughing. She thought for a moment what it would be right now if she hadn't been assigned to do that report with him. He would have probably still ignored her in all the classes they had together, and she would still do nothing but sketching in her notebook in class, instead of talking with him.
"You know, my father wants me to go and study in the USA in my next or senior year. He thinks that my education isn't good enough in this school." he murmured.
"What?" she repeated, suddenly feeling like someone hit her really hard.
"No big deal, not like anyone would miss me! The people from school will forget me as soon as I leave!" he said laughing, but she felt a bit of sadness in his words.
"How...how could you say this! Everyone will miss you a lot, and you know it! You are the life and soul of the school!" she said angrily. And she was right - he was the cool, popular guy, the one half of the girls had a crush on, the one everybody liked. Then she added quietly "If not them, I will never forget you."
They stood there under the tree, silence surrounding them. It was only interrupted by the rustling leaves and a little nightingale's muffled singing in the background. He then suddenly added "Uh, my earphones are broken..." as he played with the wire in his fingers. One thing Hadrian loved a lot in his life, was music. He listened to it all the time - while taking walks, while in a car, in his room, always.
"Well, you can have mine." Caitlyn said cheerfully. She also loved music, and always had her earphones with her, although she rarely listened to music with them.
"Really?" Hadrian gasped, sounding like a kid which is being read a bed story, and the hero finally beating the dragon in the end. His eyes sparkling like a little boy's, too.
"Sure, let me just dig them out from my bag." the girl smiled at him, although her smile was probably left invisible in the darkness. She finally found them, and added "They're red by the way. Like your favourite colour." He took them gently from her hand, running his fingers softly over the earphones a few times, as if they were golden or something. Just then, the bus came, and Caitlyn had to go. "Thanks a lot." he said, and she hugged him tightly, before murmuring a "Goodbye", and jumping on the bus. Hadrian smiled, and sat under the tree once again, only this time listening to music from his new earphones.
Bleh x.x Really sorry for the terrible story, everyone ... It's based on a true story... well, most of it xD I made it sound a bit more romantic than it actually was.[/quote]
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by Shark-salad » Mon Jun 06, 2011 1:25 pm
~*Moo*~ wrote:Rainbow.freeze wrote:~*Moo*~ wrote:Beauty And Flame
~~Part 4 continue~~
I stroke and groom Farasah gently as he sits on my lap. "Mommy," He asks, looking up at me. "When can we go somewhere together, out of the castle?" I chuckle. "Far, honey, we cant leave our castle. Its our home, our life. Including the fact their is chaos around the kingdom." I tell him. He frowns sadly, as I hold him close to my chest. Dont worry...We might be able to someday.. I whisper into his ear.
"But mommy," He argues. "What kind of.. chaos?"
I frown. "Umm. well.. Since your the prince and very very valuable and everyone loves you, they try to.. take you from me. And I cant let that happen.
You wouldnt understand the other things happening." I say.
"Everyone... loves me?" He asks.
I grin gently. "Yes. Everyone is our family. Everyone loves one another inside, even if they dont outside." He perks up. "Oh," Far says. "Cool!"
I set him into a new paw-made bed I had just made for him. I gave the crib and baby toys to a needy peasent. "Sleep well, sleep tight, dont let the bed bugs bite." We share a little laugh as I tuck him under the covers.
"Shush little baby, dont say a word, momma's gonna buy you a mockingbird.
If that mockingbird dont sing, momma's gonna buy you a diamond ring.
If that diamond ring wont shine,
Momma's gonna call you forever mine." I sang as he fell asleep slowly, And I kissed him gently on the forehead. "Well, you are forever mine. So I dont need to say it.
...
Even though you weren't mine in the first place..."
Now I feel horrible with myself. I go to another room and smack my face on the wall. Hard. I cant believe I STOLE him, having all this fun being a mother, when the actual mother could have...
Wait. I know why I did all of this.
My other children betrayed me. Broke my heart and smashed it to peices. Now Farasah is the only one able to heal it...
Why cant I just.. Have my own child? No. Now I would have to Betray Far, if I had a new baby, I wouldnt have time for him. There wouldnt be a father. I would have to give him back, he would ask so many questions and hate me because he was stolen... No. i wouldnt do that to him.
I look out the window blankly and stare into the darkness, then jump out the window. I land gracefully on my paws, a little wobbly, then I knock on a door.
"hello," The lady says. "Oh. Hi queen." Its the lady I took Farasah from.
"Oh..." I say, as I see she is holding a child. "I see you have a new child."
She nods. "Yes. I still love Farasah, but he is no longer mine. At least we didnt have to give him to foster."
I frown. "What? Foster?" She nods again. "Yes... you signed a paper for a new rule. Each woman and their mate can only have one child."
I keep frowning. "I signed a paper.. I dont remember. Well, anyways, you can visit him if you like. He doesnt have to know you were supposed to be his mother.
...
And Im dearly sorry."
She grins. "I guess its alright. It happens to all of us, right?" I nod. "Yes... my other children betrayed me. Turned to the dark side."
She gasps. "Oh, really?"
"Yes."
"That's sad. And sure, id love to see him.
He'd be broken up if he knew he was taken away from someone, so its okay. I understand."
I lead her up to my bedroom, along with her mate and child. She stops her husband and gestures for him to take their baby and go back to their hut/house.
I lift the covers gently off Far's face. "There he is."
She looks astonished. "He... is so.. handsome."
I nod. "Yes."
"May i?" She asks, gesturing to kiss him on the forehead. I nod as she leans in.
(Continue?)
Shush like baby, dont say a w o r d, Momma's gonna buy you a m.ocking.bird
If that mockingbird dont sing, momma's gonna buy you a diamond ring
If that diamond ring wont shine,
Momma's gonna say 'Your forever mine
Yesshh im am now stalking you.
My ears fling up aswell with hers as that man walks up the wall and into the window. "What are you doing here?" I ask the man. His voice is muffled and hard to hear.
"I am here for reasons."
"What reasons?"
"...Reasons that are and will be always unknown to you."
"Try me." Me and the peasent lady say at the same time.
"..."
"Tell me NOW." I demand, stomping my feet impatiently.
"My master sent me here. For the child." I see him glare down at Farasah. Me and the lady (her name is Amy) both dash for Farasah, but I let her hold him. Then she gives him to me, and whispers in my ear, "I cant take him from you, even if Im protecting him. He's your child, and im no strong to fend off the man.." I nod at her and snuggle Far in my arms.
"No no no..." He says. "I dont want to take the child, but my master does.. That's why I came back before. I stole him, and I didnt like it.."
I scowl at the man. "Dont pull that crap." I say. Wow. Ive never said crap before. Im sooo out of style. "We know you came back here to steal him again." I am now snuggling him tighter. Little cries and sobs come out of Far as he snores and awakens. "Shh... Farasah.. No no dont cry honey."
(Continueing later.. I got a little streak of PERMANENT MARKER on my computer screen and its messing up my writing.)
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by ariel. » Mon Jun 06, 2011 1:49 pm


Fletcher[m] ------------ Cassandra[f]
The stars, the moon, they have all been blown out
You left me in the dark
No dawn, no day, I'm always in this twilight
In the shadow of your heart
And in the dark, I can hear your heartbeat
I tried to find the sound
But then it stopped, and I was in the darkness
So darkness I became---
Might write a story for these two (:
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