The first :3
lilly=3 wrote:Tesalong wrote:
Sorry for the sudden, random and odd names everyone. I keep getting stuck on them so I went on a website with lots of baby names, the site says that Obadiah means servant of god, sounds pretty relevant to the story :3
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Tahirah {-}---------------Obadiah {m}
The goddess, this year Tahirah the controller of earth, swooped down and sat at the prepared throane made especially for her. Her finger traced one of the golden vines carved into it before turning to the crowd of people that had a question, a wish, a desire, and it was her turn to listen.
She attempted at a smile before nodding to the king, the man stepped forward and bowed with a nervous smile. "Tahirah, it's been four years since we last saw you and as always it's a pleasure, you're much more peaceful than your other siblings."
Tahirah motioned for him to continue, to ask or say what he wanted.
The king, with another nervous smile took a steading breath, the slightest mistake and he might not be around to see his daughter get married the next morning. The enitre kingdom knew this risk, but they were willing to take it. "I would like the weather to be beautiful this summer, the last few have been, well, not very comfertable."
The goddess hid a smirk as she remembered the flood she had unleashed upon them. "The weather was bad becuase the prince wouldn't do what I had asked of him."
"Oh?" The king said, not hiding his suprise.
"Yes, I asked of him to name his first born Malachi, but he did not."
"B-But my son has not had any children yet!" The king sputtered in protest.
Tahirah looked at the king curiously, this was getting interesting. "Are you quiet so sure? If you looked in the prince's room I'm sure that you'll find both child and father." Wispers waved through the crowd as a handful of guards went to see if this was correct. The wispers turned into cries of outrage as the young prince came out with a boy at his side.
The king stared furiously at the crowd, making the wispers go silent. "Explain yourself my son! You have brought chaos to this kingdom!"
The prince looked at the boy and bowed his head, "His name is Obadiah." the words seemed to echo in the eerie silence.
Tahirah stood up from her throane, a plan forming in her mind. "I will forgive the kingdom so long as I can have the boy as my servant and you name the next son what I had asked of you before."
The prince cried out and hugged the boy closer, hot tears forming in his eyes. "No!" He screamed as the gaurds took the child from his hands and set him infront of the goddess.
Tahirah picked the boy up as the prince was dragged away towards the castle doors, "Now, what are your desires?" She asked. The day went by as person by person stepped forward, asking for rain, a good harvest, the creatures to stop eating their garden, some were of revenge and war. But the entire time the child was in her arms, the dark grey eyes studing her with intrest.
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Mabye I'll finish this later X3
OMG more please
Tesalong wrote:Okay, time to acknowledge the compliments that I've been getting:
@Everyone who posted about it: Thanks so much guys! It means alot to me. I've gotta go plot for what's going to happen next, I have a few ideas but don't know which to choose. Wish me luck :3
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