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by Veja » Fri Mar 02, 2012 1:03 pm
(The characters are anthro)
Some cases of love happen out of no where, and then they fall apart right before your eyes. Mine did.
<3

Sarah and Dylan
I look up to see him coming towards me. I smile, I had waited forever for this. He smiles back in return, as he sits beside me and looks into my eyes.
A year later..I can't take this anymore. I just can't. He was neglecting his own family. Me. His two sons and two daughters. He acted like he didn't want anything to do with us. Maybe he didn't..

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Hannah & Claire
All of my children were practically fatherless now. "Dylan? Could you please help me set the table?" I ask him, and his reply made me want to get it over with and leave him. "You do it you, lazy pig!" He yells in response. He was sitting on the couch watching some stupid games highlights with a bag of potato chips and a can of soda-pop. I try to not act bewildered as I walk into Hannah and Claire's room.
"Mommy, why has dad been acting the way he has been lately?"
Claire asks me, and though she was turning thirteen soon, she still liked to call me 'mommy' because 'mom' didn't sound right to her and 'daddy' wasn't what she though her father of anymore. "I-I... Don't know, sweetie." I tell her as small tears start to well up in my eyes. I wipe them away as she and
Hannah step forward to hug me. I wrap my arms around them both and start to cry silently.
Should I continue? :3
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by micah » Fri Mar 02, 2012 3:15 pm
Vee: oh my god, that was so... cute... I... <'3
**Side note on this story, though: I'm using "he" in the gender-neutral stance, not because they are male.
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If I gave you a choice between the sun and the moon...
Which would you choose?
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the moon (Nanna, ○) x the girl (Ilati, ♀) x the sun (Utu, ○)
/ prologue
Ilati was very stuck up. Very annoying. Not exactly liked in her small town, and that is precisely why "it" had chosen her.
He wanted someone to get something out of saving the world besides, of course, the 7 or so billion folks who lived there. There had to be a person that changed because of it- that always gave him the fuzzies- knowing he had changed someone.
The critics, had he any, would tell him what an awful idea it was. Why not take the easy route and pick someone who was already pure and had a clean soul, someone who was destined to succeed?
Because, idiotic critics, because it was the easy route. Easy is child's play in a video game, when they're alone in their room, not trying to impress anyone. Just trying to make it out to "feel good". He was playing on expert when he should have been playing easy- toying with the world's life is not so impressive, once you get down to it. Yet there was one other reason why he [or "it" more formally] was fascinated with Ilati.
She was no one's daughter. No one's sister, no one's lover, no one's anything, only everyone's enemy. And this was something our omniscient "it" could relate to- because he himself wasn't anyone's anything either- he was only dubbed "the child of the universe" [and he had called himself that]. He still, however, could not figure out why it was this way. She was a beautiful woman, perhaps in her early twenties; she was warm on the surface- so people should have at least be attracted to that. However, no one liked her. No one went after her to even see if she was worth it.
He was almost surprised that she could still look at herself in the mirror, that she could still say warming things about herself. "It" guessed that being stuck up was her only way of dealing with it. Being mean was an outlet, not an accident, it was a way of life for her now.
But he was going to change it.
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Tell me dearest, which has won your heart?
Was it the one you thought of from the start?
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by Zeee » Fri Mar 02, 2012 3:19 pm
based off me and my crush<3
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owen xx rebecca
ive always liked you,
maybe even love
youve crossed my mind
at least a thousand times
id drop a tear in the ocean and say, 'when you find it is when ill stop loving you'
but ive got my whole life ahead.
right now i can say,
that your all i think about
all night, all day
i cant get over your intense smile,
your hair, your eyes
but most importantly
your personality
which makes you who you are, in a very special way
which makes me love you more, in a very loving way
your never gonna grow old to me in these young days,
but as ive said ive got my whole life ahead of me
id never let you go if i could have you now,
but i dont feel good enough
your surrounded by girls,
every time of every day,
and i never get a chance
to be one of them
unless im with the rest...
ive loved you for more than a year,
thats for sure
and scientists have proven, if you have a crush on the same person for more than 4 months,
* y o u r*i n*l o v e *
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if only you knew, and if only i had the courage<3
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by honeydukes » Fri Mar 02, 2012 5:37 pm
GigglePie wrote:Vee: oh my god, that was so... cute... I... <'3
**Side note on this story, though: I'm using "he" in the gender-neutral stance, not because they are male.
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If I gave you a choice between the sun and the moon...
Which would you choose?
____



the moon (Nanna, ○) x the girl (Ilati, ♀) x the sun (Utu, ○)
/ prologue
Ilati was very stuck up. Very annoying. Not exactly liked in her small town, and that is precisely why "it" had chosen her.
He wanted someone to get something out of saving the world besides, of course, the 7 or so billion folks who lived there. There had to be a person that changed because of it- that always gave him the fuzzies- knowing he had changed someone.
The critics, had he any, would tell him what an awful idea it was. Why not take the easy route and pick someone who was already pure and had a clean soul, someone who was destined to succeed?
Because, idiotic critics, because it was the easy route. Easy is child's play in a video game, when they're alone in their room, not trying to impress anyone. Just trying to make it out to "feel good". He was playing on expert when he should have been playing easy- toying with the world's life is not so impressive, once you get down to it. Yet there was one other reason why he [or "it" more formally] was fascinated with Ilati.
She was no one's daughter. No one's sister, no one's lover, no one's anything, only everyone's enemy. And this was something our omniscient "it" could relate to- because he himself wasn't anyone's anything either- he was only dubbed "the child of the universe" [and he had called himself that]. He still, however, could not figure out why it was this way. She was a beautiful woman, perhaps in her early twenties; she was warm on the surface- so people should have at least be attracted to that. However, no one liked her. No one went after her to even see if she was worth it.
He was almost surprised that she could still look at herself in the mirror, that she could still say warming things about herself. "It" guessed that being stuck up was her only way of dealing with it. Being mean was an outlet, not an accident, it was a way of life for her now.
But he was going to change it.
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Tell me dearest, which has won your heart?
Was it the one you thought of from the start?
o.o This is gorgeous!
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by Fat Unicorn » Fri Mar 02, 2012 8:55 pm
Fat Unicorn wrote:Father & Daughter
Amanda & Darryl
"Daddy, Daddy,
why are you so black and white, then gray inbetween?"
"Daddy, Daddy,
why don't you and mummy smile anymore?"
"Daddy, Daddy,
tell me of a time when you and mummy would smile."
"Daddy, Daddy,
what are those scars on your chest, Daddy? they scare me."
"Daddy, Daddy,
why does mummy cry at night, when I'm in bed trying to sleep?"
"Daddy, Daddy,
tell me of why those scars came to be on your chest, and why mummy cries."
"Daddy, Daddy,
why does my brother avoid looking at me? does he know something I don't?"
"Daddy, Dadd-"
"It's time for bed."
The litte girl looked up at her father, her eyes searching his own. She wanted answers, and she wanted them now. But after several seconds of a cold stare back, the girl padded away, trailing her free hand along the wall as she walked to bed. She settled into bed, wrapped herself into her blanket, and started drifting away into the realm of dreams.
Until the dull thud of something heavy falling with a crash to the floor, the sound of metal clashing against tiles, and the siren of an ambulance.
Continuing on..
[At the hospital]
"Daddy, Daddy,
why are you in hospital?"
"Daddy, Daddy,
I want you to come home."
"Daddy, Daddy,
why is mummy crying even harder at night?"
"Daddy, Daddy,
why are there bandages on your chest?"
"Daddy, Daddy,
why is everyone giving me strange looks?"
"Daddy, Daddy,
why is there a beepy thingy right beside your bed?"
"Daddy, Daddy,
why is it making a long beep sound?"
"Daddy, Daddy,
why are all the nurses running towards me?"
"Daddy, Daddy,
what's happening?"
"Daddy?"
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by vee. » Sat Mar 03, 2012 1:30 am
Benvolio Montague wrote:@Vellamore - I actually only skimmed through your story because I was so frustrated that I couldn't figure out what Minh's gender was! You did an exceptionally good job at keeping her gender-neutral. ^^
Maybe I'll read through the whole story properly when I have the time~
Oh hahaha, that's excellent! I wanted people to just assume she was a boy, because that's "the normal thing" to expect, and then I wanted them all to be shocked to find that this was about two girls. If you wanted to read through it again, it's on page 8 of my story thread (link in my sig).
Thanks to everyone else who left comments as well!
I've been reading as many stories around here as I can, but there's not nearly enough time to comment on them all, so if you've posted a story recently or if you're posting one soon, assume I'm going to read it xD I just read Giggle-Pie's story and I loved that one in particular-- your wording is always so lovely, dear!


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by s y n » Sat Mar 03, 2012 4:23 am
This next little snippet of writing is dedicated to my best friend and I.


Hailey [♀] .&. Aaron [♂]
Somewhere along the lines,
of us being best friends,
I realized that it didn't stop there.
I've heard it all so many times,
but is it seriously true?
I sincerely hope that it is, I'll admit.
Boy, you're flirting, I can tell.
And I know I'm flirting back.
I have a question: Where do we stand?
I want to be with you, and hold you,
and love you unlike all those Mr. Wrongs.
You've been with them all along; It's time for a change.
If only I could tell you and make it known,
but what if the same is not true for you?
What if it ruins "us"?
I wish I could tell you how truely I feel,
but if you do not return it,
will we be unable to be simply best friends?
Alright, so you know, I've made it clear.
But you are still so vague.
Perhaps this was a bad idea.
She's said she likes me, but is it a joke?
I can't take it too seriously,
just in case it is.
I'll ask him out and hope he says yes.
If he says no, I will tell him it was a joke,
so that we can remain best friends.
She sounds like she's joking,
so I'll assume that she probably is.
My reply will be with a joke, too.
Why can't he give me a straight answer?
It can't be both a yes and a no.
I wish he didn't have to be so difficult.
She seems to be angry at me.
I don't think she found my reply funny.
So does that mean she wasn't joking?
Doesn't he know that I was serious?
That I really want to date him?
I've made it obvious, how can't he tell?
She tells me she loves me in a joking way.
I tell her I love her back, my tone like hers,
but how can't she tell I'm not kidding?
I tell him I love him, and I truly mean it.
He must not know this however;
His reply is always joking.
Does she love me for real?
When I say "I love her", my friends know it's true.
I wish she knew, too.
If only she knew.
If only he knew.
previously known as dexus
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by black swan;;;;; » Sat Mar 03, 2012 4:28 am

-> Evelinne [female]

-> Illi [male]

-> Ash [male] ( Illi's brother )

-> Luna
means "Moon in Romanian,just so you know. [female] -> Evelinne and Illi's guardian angel.
Feeling Ugly, Looking pretty
Yellow Ribbons, Black Graffiti
Word is written, Bond is broken
No big secret left unspoken
Sun is painted in the corner
But it's never getting warmer
All the lies they keep on selling
But you never check the spelling
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Am I allowed to write this story later?
I'm listening to this one amazing song and I'm trying to translate from Russian to English.
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by OMGItsFireFoxx » Sat Mar 03, 2012 8:56 am
Fat Unicorn wrote:Fat Unicorn wrote:Father & Daughter
Amanda & Darryl
"Daddy, Daddy,
why are you so black and white, then gray inbetween?"
"Daddy, Daddy,
why don't you and mummy smile anymore?"
"Daddy, Daddy,
tell me of a time when you and mummy would smile."
"Daddy, Daddy,
what are those scars on your chest, Daddy? they scare me."
"Daddy, Daddy,
why does mummy cry at night, when I'm in bed trying to sleep?"
"Daddy, Daddy,
tell me of why those scars came to be on your chest, and why mummy cries."
"Daddy, Daddy,
why does my brother avoid looking at me? does he know something I don't?"
"Daddy, Dadd-"
"It's time for bed."
The litte girl looked up at her father, her eyes searching his own. She wanted answers, and she wanted them now. But after several seconds of a cold stare back, the girl padded away, trailing her free hand along the wall as she walked to bed. She settled into bed, wrapped herself into her blanket, and started drifting away into the realm of dreams.
Until the dull thud of something heavy falling with a crash to the floor, the sound of metal clashing against tiles, and the siren of an ambulance.
Continuing on..
[At the hospital]
"Daddy, Daddy,
why are you in hospital?"
"Daddy, Daddy,
I want you to come home."
"Daddy, Daddy,
why is mummy crying even harder at night?"
"Daddy, Daddy,
why are there bandages on your chest?"
"Daddy, Daddy,
why is everyone giving me strange looks?"
"Daddy, Daddy,
why is there a beepy thingy right beside your bed?"
"Daddy, Daddy,
why is it making a long beep sound?"
"Daddy, Daddy,
why are all the nurses running towards me?"
"Daddy, Daddy,
what's happening?"
"Daddy?"
Awwww. Very good. Will you be writing more?

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