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by cswolf. » Wed Nov 23, 2011 11:32 pm
Echelon & Arbiter wrote:Wildmagic_warrior wrote:That whole thing, the entire story, is one of the most amazing pieces of work I have ever read. You should seriously think about having it published.
I completely agree. Such a beautiful story<'33
I agree too :3
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by Mercess » Thu Nov 24, 2011 2:04 am
I thought this up during a dream. I was battling my nemises and the CS pets were fighting for me. At the end of the battle the alive warriors agedPeople think cs pets just age automactically into adults. We age from baby to middle stage right away. But the adult stage you have to earn it. In a battle for your life. You know the PPS pets? If you lose a battle you are brought back to life with a potion. The side affect is the Peter Pan Sydrom. This is me

I have passed the test. The hardest test of my time. I hated the test. It destroyed my favorite sisters Celly and Dalphne. They are now PPS.


Before i tell you about my battle, Let me tell you about my life B.B Or Before Battle
Anyone want more? I have the next 2 chapters with me.
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by ShadiSin » Thu Nov 24, 2011 2:24 am
Gah, SkySmoke..
as everyone has already said, that was wonderful.
The story made me tear up so many times, I absolutely loved it.
It's the sweetest thing ever, and some how always had a way of making me feel better reading it - I can read it again and again and it always had me on-edge when the end of a chapter was done and I wanted to read more. <3
You really should be published, you're an amazing writer.
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by Ineedatribal » Thu Nov 24, 2011 4:08 am
SkySmoke wrote:To anyone
still reading about these 2....
SkySmoke wrote:[center]

Victoria (Tori) (♀)~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~Nikki(♀)
Its funny how, when looking back, the moments that change your life seem so…well…normal.
YOU. Have been very naughty. You know why?
You're making me cry!
This story was phenomenal. Thank you for sharing it with all of us. If Nikki's stories were real, I'd definitely read those also. ^^
Inee. That would be me!
How's your day going?
Free enough?

How about now? C:
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by ika; » Thu Nov 24, 2011 5:18 am


[chapter one]
[chapter two]
am I hurting you? I'm trying to be gentle;
His name is Amour. He's been here for nine-hundred and forty six years. Alone. Can you imagine that? An endless space of time so bleak and lonesome that the human mind cannot comprehend it's severity. He has not seen sunlight all these years- and he will not. He says it would burn his eyes into blindness if he saw daylight.
Yes, 'he'.
I've been speaking to him.
When I awoke, the first thing I noticed was my warmth. I had regained full feeling in my arms and legs, the frosted numbness shaken right out of them. I felt fine; my ribs ached a little, but I was better. The damp floor beneath me no longer bothered my battered body as I opened my weary eyes, gazing around me at the dull cave walls. A flash of fleeting panic stabbed through me as memories flooded into my waking mind- spider, venom, trapped, hurt- They all lead to pretty much the same thing. I feared for my life. Then suddenly, the same deep voice startled me and I felt a jolt of nausea. "I thought you might prefer to rest away from me- you seemed somewhat..." The great spider paused, as if searching for the right word. "..disturbed, by my prescence. Your wounds have been tended to." And it was then, in that one sentence, that I knew I was not going to die here.
I couldn't bear the sight of you hurt, I had to do something.
"You may call me Amour- that is what I used to go by. I...I apologise if I have frightened you, that was not my intention. You see, of all the years I have been here, my eyes have not set upon one soul. When you fell in, I expected I was going mad- I had to see if you were real. And you are! You are real." The spider clicks his sabres, with a peculiar chiming sound emanating from his mandible. I realise with a jolt that it is laughter- he is joyful.
"All these years and not one person. Well, when I was a mere spiderling, children would run and throw stones at my face. They would laugh as I bled. But that is the extent of my contact."
Subconciously, my heart wrenches at this colossal being and his sorrow. Amour stretches one thick foreleg, then the other. He watches me. Clearly, it is my time to speak.
"That...that was wrong. They shouldn't have done that."
My voice is weak, and I stumble over my words. They sound so peculiar, after all the terror. But I mean them.
"And you haven't..you haven't sought revenge?" I venture warily, unsure as to whether I am being too bold. But Amour blinks solemly. "I would not hurt one of your kind- they are children, I simply could not." I seem to have adjusted to the rumbling tones of his voice, for now I am watching him intently, all trace of fear gone.
and now a friend at last. I am joyful-
Amour is gazing at me with such painful longing, that my eyes begin to burn with tears. Tentatively, I reach forward and place a trembling hand on the joint of his front leg. The hairs there are bristled to the touch, and his body is warm. He sighs softly.
"Tell me, friend- are you afraid of spiders?" He asks quietly.
I can't help but smile.
"Not anymore."
[[chapter three of my little series! I might write more if people like it <3

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by MigratingCoconut » Thu Nov 24, 2011 6:07 am
Ikaaaaaaaaa wrote:

[[chapter three of my little series! I might write more if people like it <3
Please do, I am intrigued and would love to read more.
Signature is a work in progress...

1st soldier with a keen interest in birds: Are you suggesting coconuts migrate?
King Arthur: Not at all. They could be carried.
1st soldier with a keen interest in birds: What? A swallow carrying a coconut?
King Arthur: It could grip it by the husk!
1st soldier with a keen interest in birds: It's not a question of where he grips it! It's a simple question of weight ratios! A five ounce bird could not carry a one pound coconut.
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by honeydukes » Thu Nov 24, 2011 7:05 am
pickleabanana1 wrote:I thought this up during a dream. I was battling my nemises and the CS pets were fighting for me. At the end of the battle the alive warriors agedPeople think cs pets just age automactically into adults. We age from baby to middle stage right away. But the adult stage you have to earn it. In a battle for your life. You know the PPS pets? If you lose a battle you are brought back to life with a potion. The side affect is the Peter Pan Sydrom. This is me

I have passed the test. The hardest test of my time. I hated the test. It destroyed my favorite sisters Celly and Dalphne. They are now PPS.


Before i tell you about my battle, Let me tell you about my life B.B Or Before Battle
Anyone want more? I have the next 2 chapters with me.
Please ^_^
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