by salinity » Fri Oct 21, 2011 3:04 pm
by IndigoDreams » Fri Oct 21, 2011 3:10 pm
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by . Delirium . » Fri Oct 21, 2011 3:12 pm
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Him- 'The Raven' (He isn't really a raven but I may make him a character and it will have to do with his history)(I sorta just put a pet pair to this, even if the character wouldn't look like this.)
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The girl
A raven feather, softly hit the small girl's head, a whisper coming with it, "I'm sorry I hurt you."
The girl shook her head, tears stinging her eyes. "It doesn't matter, our lives are separated, your somewhere else, only your voice is here."
A voice, the same as the whisper came from the trees, "It...wasn't..supposed to happen...like this." The voice cracking and breaking.
The girl let a tear fall. "Stop don't go now. Take me with you. Don't take your voice away. Without it, I can't hear the birds singing or the frogs croaking. It all becomes null. Everything you introduced."
The voice replied again, this time weaker, "Doll, You've...got to let this.. go. That didn't exist. You need to return to normal." His lie lengthened.
The girl quickly shook her head, "I can no longer see, nor smell, without a voice or a sound, how will I dream. Don't take it away.You promised." Where the feather hit her head, a small prick of blood appeared.
The voice replied, seeming distant and dead, "Bye doll, it was nice, but this what I am, I have to, you understand. Your innocent, I can't feed on terrible souls. It will be okay soon." despite becoming distant, the cracking in the voice had stopped. Laughter filled the air.
The girl looked up blindly. "Please, you said, you said, you wouldn't."
The voice replied once more, closer, "I lied." A thump sounded as he jumped down, he pat the girl's head. "A lie, doll.Oh wait, you don't recall, what that is." he whispered, "Perfect." and with that the raven stole her soul.
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He smirked at the red-head girl sitting across from him at the table. "Is that a horror story for you...doll?"
The red-headed girl grinned. "Wonderful, now where did you want to go?"
He got up and directed her to follow, "To the forest doll, that's where it all begins." A twisted grin hid behind his smile. As he though, 'And the raven's tale begins again..'
red-headed girl
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(I know it's terrible, I was bored and it was suppose to be a pet pair story, and it is, but now I actually may make a story and characters for it,//shot, I need to get better at writing.)
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by corviidae » Fri Oct 21, 2011 3:39 pm
by peter quill » Fri Oct 21, 2011 3:55 pm
sionalover wrote:sionalover wrote:
Locked Doors....................................Penelope......................................Shut Windows
Heaven is perfect, heaven is wonderful.
Or at least that's what Penelope was always told.
But even in heaven there are things to be hidden.
Even in heaven everyone cannot be trusted.
Even in heaven there are locked doors and shut windows, with secrets behind every one.
And even in heaven, those locked doors and shut windows and the secrets they hide
Can mean death.
Death really wasn't painful, Penelope reflected. One sharp burst, and it was over; her pride had been more hurt than her physical body because she had died in disgrace, a hated outcast. But in heaven, everyone was beautiful, everyone was perfect, everyone was the same. There was no conflict, because everyone knew everything about everyone, so their were no secrets. Or so Penelope thought.
She longed to take her mask off, as it just felt wrong, but her fear of the punishment - being cast out from heaven, never to return - was greater than her urge to rip the thing off her face. Taking a deep breath, she lowered her pink eyes and kept her gaze well away from anyone else's; in heaven people could read each other's minds with just one second of eye contact and thinking about breaking the Holy Rules was just as bad, with the same consequences, as actually disobeying them. It was interesting, she thought, that structure and rules - the same things that caused so many problems and so much restriction on Earth - were used to make everyone free in heaven. But she was just a lowly angel, one of millions, not fit to think about such things as the many paradoxes of heaven, and it was treason against the most holy and perfect Lord God himself if one were to think about such things. And there was another contradiction - you knew everything but were only allowed to think about certain things. Everywhere she turned hypocrisy was blatant, but she was the only one that seemed to know or care. Perhaps that was because she was, like always, an outsider, different, this time shunned for thinking about the unthinkable. It was the story of her life- and now apparently her death.
The first whisper she had heard in almost a thousand years tickled her ears and pulled at her curiosity, drawing her towards its source. The thought that eavesdropping probably wasn't smiled upon crept into her mind as she stood silently with her ear pressed against the door; however, the idea that heaven was based upon unity and all-knowing was being violated merely by the closed door, so she figured that her sin could be excused in the wake of the huge one she had discovered.
"We will die if we are caught!" a sharp voice murmured, and Penelope instantly knew who it was: Laviticus, the Most Noble and Righteous Chief of the Elders Council.
"No stupid angel is going to find us out; they still think heaven is perfect!" the sly, intelligent Marcus, the Most Noble and Righteous Overseer of Justice, shot back, and she could picture in her mind exactly what he looked like, the vivid image of his stunningly handsome, almost cruel, mask-hidden face filling her mind. Gritting her teeth slightly at the insult against her and all of her fellows, she resolved that she would listen to the best of her ability in the name of the justice of heaven. Although, with the Overseer of Justice being involved in the scandal, she didn't know who would deal out his punishment.
"Now, what we have to do is find some way to get rid of that old fool Aurelius..."
Penelope's eyes widened in horror as she listened to their plan; they were going to try to murder His Holiness Aurelius, King of the Angels, and then claim themselves Princes of the Angels in his place.
"Such treachery must be stopped!" she murmured to herself, then floated off silently to go expose their wrongdoing to all of heaven.
Part II:"I am not lying!" Penelope's throat burned like fire from lack of water and her voice was low and cracked due to overuse, but she knew that to become silent would mean her death.
"You must be, because the Most Noble and Righteous Overseer of Justice and the Most Noble and Righteous Chief of the Elders Council could not be involved in such a scandal! You should know that telling such a defamatory lie, especially one involving two of the most important angels in heaven, means-"
"Execution; yeah, I know." Penelope affixed her questioner with a stunning magenta that had wooed many a man during her mortal life; generally she was discouraged from looking anyone directly in the eye due to the fact that her irises were so much prettier than what was normal and therefore acceptable, but she figured that, considering the situation she was in, her eye color was the least of her worries. "I am not crazy, and I am not lying. After all, would I tell a lie that would kill me?" She managed to keep her voice calm and level, even though the inner turmoil she was experiencing was equal to being thrown in a hurricane.
"No, I suppose not." Her questioner seemed sobered by her cool words, or perhaps just was taken with her sheer beauty; Penelope didn't care which it was, since he had shut up finally. "But, but... then everything we've been told about heaven being perfect is a lie!"
Now it was her turn to be stunned. "Yes, I guess so," were the only words she could muster. As her brain began to process the enormity of the lie they had been told, she murmured out loud, "Well, doesn't that mean that heaven doesn't exist? Because heaven is perfection, and if there isn't any perfection, then how can there be heaven?"
"I... I don't know. I don't know anything anymore." His voice dwindled into nothing, and she almost felt sad for him, even though a moment before he had been threatening her with death.
"I don't think anyone does, so you're in lots of company, even if it isn't so good." His mouth twitched involuntarily at her comment, and Penelope gave him a small smile.
"Too true," he agreed. "Well, you might as well go." He gestured towards the perfectly white door and she rose from her seat gracefully. Just as she was about to exit, she paused and turned, saying to him with all of the sincerity in her heart, "Thank you."
"Heaven is just an illusion, and so is perfection," Penelope murmured to herself, not angry but resigned to the fact. "What is this place, then, if it isn't heaven?" The landscape around her was stunningly beautiful but eerily silent; surely a real heaven would be full of life, not of lies. "It it perhaps hell in disguise? Or is it maybe still Earth, and my death and all the time I've spent here are just illusions as well?" The thoughts chased each other around in her head like an eternal game of cat and mouse, giving her an unbearable migraine. Falling to her knees, she brought her hands clumsily up to her temples, attempting to stop the pain that was making her see double.
"What is happening?" she asked aloud of the wilderness around. Her question remained unanswered as she collasped, unconscious.
Comments? Should I continue?
by Inatae » Fri Oct 21, 2011 4:01 pm
by G.L'S » Fri Oct 21, 2011 4:18 pm
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by honeydukes » Fri Oct 21, 2011 6:30 pm
G.L'S wrote:]
Suffer and Agony
Boy and Girl betrothed from birth
but if they only knew...
If they only saw the prophecies
then maybe they'd see the hate in him
maybe they'd see her suffering
but no one saw
and no one knew...
I might continue the story as they age. Should I?
by bonegrindr » Fri Oct 21, 2011 7:06 pm
by Fortune's Fool » Fri Oct 21, 2011 8:40 pm
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