Your CS Pet Pairs? (NEW THREAD)

Discussion about the Pets, Items, Dress-ups, Events, Site, Forum or other CS features!

Re: Your CS Pet Pairs? (NEW THREAD)

Postby Ineedatribal » Fri Sep 16, 2011 1:04 am

~TheSecondHermione~ wrote:Image Image 
Jenny and Jack

Image Image
Karen and Jordan

Ah, the annoyance of younger siblings. 
Story?

Actually, they might make cool 2nd gens, but I'm not supposed to say that.

Awww, yes, Defo a story please!
Inee. That would be me!
How's your day going?
Free enough?
Image
How about now? C:
User avatar
Ineedatribal
 
Posts: 3261
Joined: Sat Dec 13, 2008 3:36 pm
My pets
My items
My wishlist
My gallery
My scenes
My dressups
Trade with me

Re: Your CS Pet Pairs? (NEW THREAD)

Postby ThisIsInCode » Fri Sep 16, 2011 8:14 am

Ineedaballoondog wrote:
~TheSecondHermione~ wrote:Image Image
Jenny and Jack

Image Image
Karen and Jordan

Ah, the annoyance of younger siblings.
Story?

Actually, they might make cool 2nd gens, but I'm not supposed to say that.

Awww, yes, Defo a story please!

Okay then. I like to imagine them as humans, so try to follow along. Also, sorry about the first question SkySmoke, it's really catching on.

I sat on a park bench, watching my sister run around on the playground in the park. This was the second time in two days, and I was finishing homework. Then I heard a voice.
"Hey, mind if I sit here?"
I looked up from my math sheet. He was very pale, with black hair and eyes that were nearly black. He gestured to the empty space next to me.
"Sure," I said. He sat down, and a little boy, probably his brother, detatched himself and ran off towards the playground.
"I'm Jordan," he said.
"Karen," I replied. He opened a book and I went back to my homework.
--------------------------

The sun was getting lower, and I glanced at my watch. It was 4:30, and we had to go home now.
"Jenny, time to go!" She turned around and walked dejectedly back towards the bench, and the little boy came too. She perked up, and said something to him. They took off running, and they got there as soon as I finished putting the rest of my homework away.
"Karen, can we come tommorow and meet Jack? Please?" She looked eagerly up at me.
"If the weather's good tomorrow. The weather guy said we might get a ton of rain tonight, and Mom said you couldn't o out if it was soaking wet."
"But if it's all okay, we can come?"
"Probably." I stood up and took her hand. "Now come on, we need to go."
"Can Jack come with us? He lives around the corner. He told me."
She was already giving me the "please-please-pleeeease" look.
"Sure."
Jenny was already walking home. Usually I had to drag her from the playground, but not with a new friend.
It was a little awkward walking kind of with someone I pretty much didn't know, but Jordan didn't say much. We just followed the younger siblings.
We got to his house pretty quickly.
"So..Maybe I'll see you tomorrow?"
"Maybe," he said. "Bye," he said as he led Jack up the driveway.
"Bye." I took Jenny's hand and led her around the corner back to our house.


Eh, I've done better. Should I continue?

Edit: Scary! I almost lost everything I wrote, because it logged me out. But I managed to hit the back button and it saved everything written here.
User avatar
ThisIsInCode
 
Posts: 1424
Joined: Sun Jul 11, 2010 4:12 am
My pets
My items
My wishlist
My gallery
My scenes
My dressups
Trade with me

Re: Your CS Pet Pairs? (NEW THREAD)

Postby artemis5001 » Fri Sep 16, 2011 8:51 am

SkySmoke wrote:
SkySmoke wrote:
Image Image
Victoria (Tori) (♀)~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~Nikki(♀)

Aww that was beautiful. Made me want to cry. <3
Image
♥♥ Dreamie filled 2011-10-18 05:59♥♥

Image
Pet's name: ♀Leurai
Adopt virtual pets at Chicken Smoothie!
User avatar
artemis5001
 
Posts: 612
Joined: Fri Aug 12, 2011 11:44 am
My pets
My items
My wishlist
My gallery
My scenes
My dressups
Trade with me

Re: Your CS Pet Pairs? (NEW THREAD)

Postby Marian5390 » Fri Sep 16, 2011 9:18 am

Amazing story. I loved how I could relate to every single bit of it the whole way through. (Though if I stated how I can relate to it, I don't think anyone would understand.)
User avatar
Marian5390
 
Posts: 3138
Joined: Tue Sep 29, 2009 4:25 pm
My pets
My items
My wishlist
My gallery
My scenes
My dressups
Trade with me

Re: Your CS Pet Pairs? (NEW THREAD)

Postby kimmy1479 » Fri Sep 16, 2011 11:53 am

Image Image
Image
User avatar
kimmy1479
 
Posts: 9231
Joined: Wed Mar 16, 2011 5:14 am
My pets
My items
My wishlist
My gallery
My scenes
My dressups
Trade with me

Re: Your CS Pet Pairs? (NEW THREAD)

Postby wibeke » Fri Sep 16, 2011 12:42 pm

ImageImage
Rowlf & Snitter

"Why do they do it, Snitter? I'm not a bad dog."
"I don't think they do it because they think you're bad."

---

Eh, the pets aren't perfect matches, but this pup reminded me of Snitter. This movie is so sad, I cry like a baby every time. </3
Whoever guesses the movie gets a cookie. ^^
Image





jen they/them ace dumpster fire
aka wibekapedia

always open for commissions on DA

talk to me about pigeons!


● ● ●

art shop - deviantart
my kalons
User avatar
wibeke
 
Posts: 9174
Joined: Fri Oct 03, 2008 8:38 am
My pets
My items
My wishlist
My gallery
My scenes
My dressups
Trade with me

Re: Your CS Pet Pairs? (NEW THREAD)

Postby Zeee » Fri Sep 16, 2011 1:10 pm

@SkySmoke; i just finished reading that story of yours, word for word, sentence for sentence.
...
Wow.
That's really all I can say at the moment! Thats really how much you stunned me with the.. the detail, the planning in the story... its just... You did very well. Are you going to write more? If not, at least, sometime in the future... write a sequel! .o.



ImageImage

The rain splashed against his presoaked cloak.
"Are you ever going to take that cloak off?" I laughed.

He chuckled wisely. "Probably not. Does it bother you?"

I grasped his shoulder and pulled closer, lifting my umbrella over him. He pushed it off.
"Does it ever?"

"No. "

I smirked, lifting a brow.

"Uhh.. Yes?"
He changed his answer, shifting brows up and vice-versa.

"Truo! You got it right the first time, you know that. And you should really be using an umbrella, or at least have a hat or a hood... or something over your head. Your gonna catch a cold."
I was always looking out for Truo.

"Alea!" He said it in the mopy, stunned voice as I did.

I pretended that the umbrella was alive, and shifted it around over his head.
"Oh Truo! Listen to Alea! You should be using me!"
I pretended to be it.

He pushed it away. Apparently he refused to take advice from an inanimate umbrella, let alone me.

He punched me on the shoulder, which made me flinch and drop the umbrella.
Suddenly, and immediately, I was soaked.

I pushed him playfully, and he ended up butt-first on the concrete. He looked down and looked back up with a smirk.
"Oh really. You wanna dance? Let's dance!" He teased, pushing me and pushed me, but I refused to go down. He gave my umbrella to a little child and his mother, and picked me up over his shoulders.

"Put me down!" I yelled over him, smacking and slapping and punching his back impatiently.
He put me down, just had I asked.

Suddenly, I wanted revenge.
I jumped onto his back, expecting him to use his reflexes and catch me, but instead I landed face-first on the ground.
"Ow!" I yelled, cupping my face in my hands. He picked me up with an emotional look.

"Im sorry."

I smirked, got up, and started running.
"Don't mention it."


[is anyone interested in more?]


feelsjoelman
User avatar
Zeee
 
Posts: 15044
Joined: Fri Jul 02, 2010 6:13 pm
My pets
My items
My wishlist
My gallery
My scenes
My dressups
Trade with me

Re: Your CS Pet Pairs? (NEW THREAD)

Postby IndigoDreams » Fri Sep 16, 2011 1:11 pm

♥ Cupid's Daughter and the boy who loved her ♥
(pets are out of order) (story?)

Image
Pet's name: Cupid's Daughter ♥
Adopt virtual pets at Chicken Smoothie!
User avatar
IndigoDreams
 
Posts: 4202
Joined: Mon Jan 10, 2011 8:37 am
My pets
My items
My wishlist
My gallery
My scenes
My dressups
Trade with me

Re: Your CS Pet Pairs? (NEW THREAD)

Postby Ineedatribal » Fri Sep 16, 2011 1:14 pm

Panic-Prone wrote:♥ Cupid's Daughter and the boy who loved her ♥
(pets are out of order) (story?)

Image
Pet's name: Cupid's Daughter ♥
Adopt virtual pets at Chicken Smoothie!

Oh yes, story, please. <3
Inee. That would be me!
How's your day going?
Free enough?
Image
How about now? C:
User avatar
Ineedatribal
 
Posts: 3261
Joined: Sat Dec 13, 2008 3:36 pm
My pets
My items
My wishlist
My gallery
My scenes
My dressups
Trade with me

Re: Your CS Pet Pairs? (NEW THREAD)

Postby Herdier » Fri Sep 16, 2011 1:20 pm

ImageImageImage

Maximillian, Fritz, and the Wounded Soldier

Triage

Note: This story is not for the faint of heart. I also use a bit of mixed German here. To be honest, I got the translations from the Internet. I hope that people are not offended. "Dummkoph" is the German equivalent of "idiot", and "Ja, mein Herr" means "Yes sir".


Boom!

Alarms sounded and the sounds of scattering paws and dogs in pain were heard. It was 6:00 in the morning.

Maximillian was sleeping on the top bunk of his tent when the blast happened. He awoke with a start. Realizing he had work to do, he threw his uniform on and dashed out the tent door towards the infirmary, his medic's kit in tow.

He was dumbfounded when he saw how many wounded dogs were already there. Those that could speak were calling out to the nearest medic for help.

Maximillian was also surprised to see that Fritz was also already there. His superior was bent over dog soldier. However, he wasn't actually healing him. He simply put a tag on the dog's paw and moved on. The tag was red.

Fritz spied Maximillian out of the corner of his eye and beckoned for him to come closer. "Here, come help me triage these soldiers," he said. He talked in a strong German accent, as did Maximillian.

Maximillian came over and watched his superior's actions intently. He was tying a tag on another wounded dog, this time a green one.

"What I would like you to do is give each and every soldier that comes in a quick examination, and to give them a tag according to their condition," explained Fritz as he finished tying the tag to the soldier's paw. He took four tags out of his medic's kit. Each one was a different color- Green, orange, red, and black. Fritz explained their meaning.

"Green is for soldiers that are barely wounded. Orange means they can wait a little while. Red means they need immediate attention, and I mean right now. Black means they are already gone or too far gone for us to treat them,"

Maximillian was shocked at his superior's words. He couldn't bear to think that he, as a medic, would ever have to leave a poor soul to die.

"But why can't we treat them all?" asked Maximillian.

"DUMMKOPH!" scolded Fritz, "We don't have the resources or the beds to do such a thing! Don't you think I wish that could happen too!? Now get triaging these soldiers!"

"Ja, mein Herr...," muttered Maximillian.

His first few charges escaped with their lives. Two reds, an orange, and three greens.

But his next few were not so lucky. All of them were black tags. By now, Maximillian felt like just sitting down and screaming "I DON'T WANT TO DO THIS ANYMORE!". But the work had only just started.

He was now on his third black tag in a row. The dog could barely speak, but he was fully aware of what was going on. Maximillian got a good look at his face. The thing that would haunt him the most for the rest of his life was the pleading look in the wounded dog's eyes. The dog somehow managed to utter out a "Help me," cry. But his wounds were too grave for Maximillian to even think about allowing him to be treated- there was no point. Maximillian wondered why this dog was alive at all.

"I'm so sorry," muttered Maximillian solemnly. He began to choke up. A though screamed in the medic's mind.

"I came here to help others, not to be forced to treat them like expendable garbage! Why must war be so cruel, even to her medics? Just... why?"

Starting to cry a little, he tied the black tag around the wounded dog's paw.

The last thing the wounded dog saw before falling unconscious was Maximillian walking away with his head down and his tail in between his legs.


I wrote that today. What do you guys think?
Image
Image

<-Totakeke
Achieved 4/30/13

Apollo Justice->
Achieved 8/16/16

Mister Spock
Achieved 12/19/17
User avatar
Herdier
 
Posts: 4581
Joined: Tue Jul 22, 2008 3:03 am
My pets
My items
My wishlist
My gallery
My scenes
My dressups
Trade with me

Who is online

Users browsing this forum: s t y x, TANKMEN and 7 guests