Looking for a native (British) English speaker! Reward!

[Ava Ire]

Hey guys,
I'm looking for a native speaker of English (from England or at least the UK) to quickly read over an email for me. I'm German and have to write an email to a university in England for the first time and I'm kinda nervous about it.^^ I'm especially concerned about it not being polite enough, since I feel like Germans tend to be a bit more straightforward. xD I'm probably overthinking this way too much but I'd really appreciate it if someone from England or the UK who knows how to write formal emails (in university context) and has good spelling could read and correct it for me, it's not very long.
I'm willing to give you a rare wishlist pet, or, if I don't have one, several uncommons.
Thanks!

[milk tea]

I could try and help!

[Ava Ire]

I could try and help!

Great, should I pm you or just post it here (anonymised, of course)?

[milk tea]

I could try and help!

Great, should I pm you or just post it here (anonymised, of course)?

Just send me a pm! I can't guarantee to be the greatest help in the world but I will try my best<3

[Ava Ire]

I could try and help!

Great, should I pm you or just post it here (anonymised, of course)?

Just send me a pm! I can't guarantee to be the greatest help in the world but I will try my best<3

Sent you a pm!

Second opinions are also much appreciated!

[bxsmxth]

If you need a second opinion, I'm here!

[Ivystars]

I could help as well? Not British, but English is still my first language ^^

[Hippomax123]

I could also help?
I am British and have lived here my whole life.