[faun]

here is page one! (finally!)
i hope you like it!
this story is about a color blind..... creature ( holding a contest for names for the species! post below with a name if you wish to enter) who is going on a quest to find a bird, the celestia ara, to bring back the color in her eyes.

if you cant understand what is happening in the beggining, here it is:
Ari is having a dream about when she got struck and lost her color vision. then kashi wakes her up to look at the colors in a rainbow that she cant see.

here is the text in case you cant read the writing:

ari...
WAKE UP!
look ari! a rainbow!
kashi... you know i cant see the colors.
hello. my name is ari. and i am color blind.
witch is my i search for the bird. the celestia ara.
that bird claims the key to getting the color back into my eyes. and i am going to FIND IT