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Trick or .... by Mr.Milo

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Trick or ....

Postby Mr.Milo » Sat Oct 09, 2010 2:20 pm

Well i really wanted to get some feedback on this its most likely not intermediate worthy but what are some things i could change please help! :)
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Re: Trick or ....

Postby Lilian Nightshade » Sun Oct 10, 2010 3:48 am

Your art is getting even better, Milo :) this is really nice.
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Re: Trick or ....

Postby Mr.Milo » Sun Oct 10, 2010 4:08 am

Thankyou ive been taking your tips!
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Re: Trick or ....

Postby two.stride » Sun Oct 10, 2010 1:10 pm

The nose/muzzle is very good, although I must say there is something wrong with the forehead. The eye is too small and too far up, and the face is very short(not including muzzle). Hope that helps:)
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Re: Trick or ....

Postby Mr.Milo » Sun Oct 10, 2010 1:59 pm

Thanks and you are right ill see what i can do to fix it! ;)
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Re: Trick or ....

Postby Not me nope » Sat Oct 30, 2010 8:49 am

I love the shading on thiS¬!
i cant really think of any more crit for the time bieng!^^
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Re: Trick or ....

Postby Mr.Milo » Mon Nov 01, 2010 11:23 am

Thankyou! and yes your right i need to finish so you can really judge this!
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