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Re: Siamese((My brain just broke. WIP. Critique!))

Postby Clavicle » Mon Feb 28, 2011 7:55 am

Kalika Kai: Thanks. Funny, because I hate the eyes here. XD They look too small for their heads, especially the one on the right ((from our point of view, he would be on the left)). I hate drawing eyes, though. They never want to turn out right. TT_TT

kindy101: Thank you. I really wasn't expecting this to be featured at all. I suppose that I have you guys to thank? Or however the system works here.

Those are their tails. O: It doesn't look like it in my messy sketch, but most of the fur on the top of their tails is haven off, and little crosses are sewn on. I guess it kind of looks like rope. And nothing much is really happening in the drawing, they're just standing there.

As for a backstory, there really is none. I just wanted to draw some siamese twins after browsing around FA and seeing a few drawings of them. X3 At first it was going to be just one person, and my fur/persona((I have no idea what to call them)) but then I just went and made them twins because I'm a Gemini. They were going to be part rat because that's what I am in the Chinese zodiac, but they turned into weird, elf/unicorn/rat things. oAo

Myuki_is_moe: Thanks. :)

Rebster: Thank you!

nutegirl: Many thanks.

-is getting tired of saying thanks- I'm going to go and look up how to do it in different languages...
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Re: Siamese((My brain just broke. WIP. Critique!))

Postby sumsum22 » Mon Feb 28, 2011 10:28 am

LOVE IT!
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Re: Siamese((My brain just broke. WIP. Critique!))

Postby Shiko Hayashi » Mon Feb 28, 2011 10:55 am

Here you are Perposterous. ^O^ Very many Thank you's in a lot of different languages. he he
There are plenty more where that came from...
(overused Google transate O_O)

Arigatōgozaimasu
Dankie dat jy
شكرا
Շնորհակալ եմ
Eskerrik asko
Дзякуй
Благодаря
Gràcies
谢谢
Hvala vam što ste
Děkuji
Tak
Dank u
Tänan teid
Salamat
Kiitos
Je vous remercie
Grazas
Vielen Dank
Ευχαριστούμε
Di ou mèsi
תודה לך
शुक्रिया
Köszönöm ( my own language)
Þakka þér
Terima kasih
Go raibh maith agat
Grazie
감사합니다
Gratias
Paldies
Ačiū
Ви благодариме
Terima kasih
Grazzi
Takk
با تشکر از شما
Dziękuję
Obrigado
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Re: Siamese((My brain just broke. WIP. Critique!))

Postby Clavicle » Mon Feb 28, 2011 11:46 am

Ffff, that's a long list. O: Thank-- Err, I mean... Köszönöm. XD

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Re: Siamese((My brain just broke. WIP. Critique!))

Postby Aleyiah » Mon Feb 28, 2011 12:27 pm

erm... just one question i forgot to ask in my last post.

what does WIP mean? (ive see it on these boards a few times)
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Re: Siamese((My brain just broke. WIP. Critique!))

Postby Clavicle » Mon Feb 28, 2011 12:43 pm

.Fool.of.a.Took. wrote:erm... just one question i forgot to ask in my last post.

what does WIP mean? (ive see it on these boards a few times)


It means "work in progress" as far as I know, although I don't think that I will be finishing this. XD -goes to change the title-
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Re: Siamese((My brain just broke. WIP. Critique!))

Postby Aleyiah » Mon Feb 28, 2011 12:44 pm

ah thanks.

i like it the way it is. the 'sketchy' feel suits it. :D
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Re: Siamese((My brain just broke. Critique!))

Postby Calicokat » Mon Feb 28, 2011 12:51 pm

At first I was a little creeped by this picture, but the anatomy is excellent and the expressions are very catching. I noticed that their upper bodies (chest up) are very well defined, keeping the eye focused on the interesting detail.
Other than that, the lines of their arms above their heads and down in front really draw the eye into the heart of the image. Very good design and excellent form. :thumb up:

Edited this once, looking at it again I noticed some different things
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Re: Siamese((My brain just broke. Critique!))

Postby brinh » Mon Feb 28, 2011 1:46 pm

Impresive. It's to busy, though, so try coloring it and erasing unessesary lines. Very, very good, though! :thumbup:
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Re: Siamese((My brain just broke. Critique!))

Postby CaptainHiccup » Mon Feb 28, 2011 2:36 pm

Really good. When I first saw it I didn't think that they were stitched together.. I just thought that they were intertwined and tangled.. XD
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