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Re: Mmm... COFFEE ~<3

Postby foxesblood » Sun Jan 09, 2011 7:46 am

Sorry but I have one more thing to say, if you want be good to others use the critiques they give oyu! And if you don't want want people to critique your work then don't post in intermediate! I'm sorry but there are good artist who post in beginers because they don't want to be critiqued, so don't post some where that you expect people to critique your work if your just going to cry about it. I'm sorry agin I'm not trying to be mean but I'm getting FED UP with people doing this! Okay I'm done sorry if I helped this get out of hand.
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Re: Mmm... COFFEE ~<3

Postby wendigo » Sun Jan 09, 2011 7:47 am

I think that this has potential (spelling) to be an intermediate :) It's cute :3 But don't excpect people to say that that they love your pic everytíme :) And you guys I think you're dragging this too far :just practise (spelling) and soon enough people will comment you picture and say that they love it! :D
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Re: Mmm... COFFEE ~<3

Postby HarvestHugger » Sun Jan 09, 2011 8:01 am

If you want your art to be good, you just need practise! Nobody is singling you out or making you feel bad. We're just saying maybe you should take a step back into the Beginner's section. You'd get good recognition there, I bet! You just need more practise. People WILL like your art, but before they do you need to put the work into it. Then people will notice and like it. Don't take constructive critiscm to heart. There's a difference between, 'This sucks!' and 'Maybe you could make the hand smaller.'

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Re: Mmm... COFFEE ~<3

Postby Nobodeh » Sun Jan 09, 2011 8:01 am

I think it's pretty good, almost intermediate. Now, I'm not an expert, but I think the cup should have a flat bottom, the hand a bit smaller, add some shading, and make the lines a bit smoother :3 hope I help, and I think your well on your way to intermediate :D
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Re: Mmm... COFFEE ~<3

Postby TheSilverfeather » Sun Jan 09, 2011 8:16 am

I think this looks great, it's way better than my own sister could do on computer! I really think it looks awesome :3
Just spent a long time looking through the comments, and I just wanna say that critique is important to improve ;) No need to take it as something bad, I love critique, since experienced drawers might post what they think ^^

Don't take this as something bad, just wanted to be a bit friendly to you ;)
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Re: Mmm... COFFEE ~<3

Postby ☠ CANNIBAL ☠ » Sun Jan 09, 2011 8:23 am

Thank you to the people who posted on here
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Re: Mmm... COFFEE ~<3

Postby Nobodeh » Sun Jan 09, 2011 8:26 am

;3 no problem, You can draw better than me though XD that's for sure ;D so keep up the good work!
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Re: Mmm... COFFEE ~<3

Postby CK's Nightmare » Sun Jan 09, 2011 8:33 am

hmm.. I you do better than I did when I first started here, and I was 15 at the time I think xD (16 now :P)
But don't take critism so hard. We all have something to learn, and I really wish people would give me more critism x3

I think it's really cute :) you have a nice style :3 the only critism I will give(more like tips), is two things: First, the cup. It kinda shouts because of the thick lines. I tried to focus to look at the wolf, but my gaze kept slipping down at the cup. It would be more ballance if the cup had the same thickness on the lines as the wolf has :)
the other thing is a background. you don't need a fancy one. Just maybe a lightcoloured one to comlpiment the rest ^^

I don't drink coffee... I don't like the bitter taste :P But the ekspression on the wolves face makes me wanna take a coffee-bath as well :D Keep up the good work, I hope to see more from you in the future! ^___^
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Re: Mmm... COFFEE ~<3

Postby Orbitsy » Sun Jan 09, 2011 8:37 am

I don't think anyone said you're crying ?
Critique is important, I love getting critique. Nobody's art is absolutely perfect. If you can't accept that, I suggest not posting in a board where people are going to reply with critique ^^
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Re: Mmm... COFFEE ~<3

Postby Leurai » Sun Jan 09, 2011 11:59 am

1. Do not post your age on the forum.

2. If you're looking to improve, don't throw a pity party "I'll leave CS/stop drawing forever/*SIGH* no one's nice to me" crap when you get critique.
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