inoritena wrote:teeny little critique here and then I'll leave you alone X3
so, depending on your art style and whether realistic proportions would actually apply, this may or may not be relevant to this sketch...but with the assumption that you're going for something more realistic I'm gonna give you a little critiquing on something important.
proportions.
so everything about this that you've solidified, i.e. the face/hair, are totally fine. I see you're going for a kind of style here. the only problem I have is with the red sketch you've put in. were she an actual person, she wouldn't be able to hold her head up. it would be too heavy. I would highly suggest looking up references for human anatomy/posing because humans are super confusing to draw properly.
specifically I can tell you that, at the angle drawn here, her neck is a teeny bit too thick for the chest/shoulders you've laid out. if you'd like, I can do a quick redline to show you how the proportions should be because I honestly couldn't find a pose to match this one that I could reference you to X3
thanks for the critique!
the red lines are still sketches to roughly give an imagination where a body part could be.... the neck isn't drawn yet (only the ventral part) and the shoulders will move to another place at some point...
and the pose was meant to be a bit awkward like a shrug or an insecure girls shrunk or something...
but as I said the red lines are raw lines and not ready yet =)
I also think the eyes aren't on their proper place yet... whart do you think?
