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Re: Helena-My Chemical Romance

Postby ~Jaded » Tue Jun 15, 2010 2:14 am

So...you all REALLY think this is intermediate worthy? o.0
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Re: Helena-My Chemical Romance

Postby ~Jaded » Thu Jun 17, 2010 8:27 am

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Re: Helena-My Chemical Romance

Postby danni.and.the.kiwi » Fri Jun 18, 2010 6:15 am

Cute, but no, it's not intermediate worthy. Sorry.
Here are some improvement suggestions:
1.Clean up your color. Try drawing and coloring on separate layers so they don't run together or overlap, as that looks messy and unappealing.
2. Clean up your lines or lack thereof. If you are going for a lineless picture, don't show lines, and if you are going for a lined picture, don't color over them. Also, play with the smoothing feature, it's great fun.
3. Work on your anatomy/style. I understand this isn't supposed to be realistic, but good stylized art has a basis in real life anatomy. Work on making your anatomy look more like real anatomy, and your nonrealistic art will look that much better.
4. Backgrounds, backgrounds. This background is distracting. Try making a background that is simple and doesn't conflict with the actual drawing.

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That being said, the music video for Helena is very nice, no?
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Re: Helena-My Chemical Romance

Postby wannabeaunicorn » Fri Jun 18, 2010 7:15 am

omg!i love this song and i love this band! :D gerard way is soo cute(;
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Re: Helena-My Chemical Romance

Postby ~Jaded » Sat Jun 19, 2010 3:09 am

thanks...i think i'm gonna draw a pic for a few other songs by them :D
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Re: Helena-My Chemical Romance

Postby BuffyWolfie » Mon Jun 21, 2010 12:05 pm

I love the eyes! Great job!
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Re: Helena-My Chemical Romance

Postby ~Jaded » Tue Jun 22, 2010 1:52 am

danni.and.the.kiwi wrote:Cute, but no, it's not intermediate worthy. Sorry.
Here are some improvement suggestions:
1.Clean up your color. Try drawing and coloring on separate layers so they don't run together or overlap, as that looks messy and unappealing.
2. Clean up your lines or lack thereof. If you are going for a lineless picture, don't show lines, and if you are going for a lined picture, don't color over them. Also, play with the smoothing feature, it's great fun.
3. Work on your anatomy/style. I understand this isn't supposed to be realistic, but good stylized art has a basis in real life anatomy. Work on making your anatomy look more like real anatomy, and your nonrealistic art will look that much better.
4. Backgrounds, backgrounds. This background is distracting. Try making a background that is simple and doesn't conflict with the actual drawing.

Happy Drawing
That being said, the music video for Helena is very nice, no?

Yeah i know you are right, im a thirteen year or kid with no experience with any of this stuff so...uh yeah...
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Re: Helena-My Chemical Romance

Postby ~Jaded » Sat Jun 26, 2010 1:28 pm

BuffyShakira wrote:I love the eyes! Great job!

thnx, i lub de eyes too :D
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Re: Helena-My Chemical Romance

Postby Bartimaeus » Thu Jul 08, 2010 4:42 am

... Awesome! ...Why is it sideways thouh? O_o.
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Re: Helena-My Chemical Romance

Postby ~Jaded » Thu Jul 08, 2010 5:07 am

ShadowSlayer wrote:... Awesome! ...Why is it sideways thouh? O_o.

i drew it sideways and so yeah....
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