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Sunset On Sunday by Barron

Artist Barron [gallery]
Time spent 1 hour, 19 minutes
Drawing sessions 6
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Sunset On Sunday

Postby Barron » Mon Dec 05, 2011 12:27 pm

A Pony resting in a pasture on a late Sunday afternoon as the sun is setting!! I am starting to get how to draw on here (: And I think this is my best picture so far!! I know it is not the best picture ever but it is pretty cute I think!! I was a mouse to draw and it is very hard!! The timer doesn't lie, you have to add an hour because I drew the lines at a different time!! Well, Let me know what you think and what I could do to make it better!! Thank you so Much!!
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Re: Sunset On Sunday

Postby Alaska. » Mon Dec 05, 2011 2:25 pm

This is a very nice picture and all, but I don't think it's intermediate worthy, sorry. With a little more practice it could be.

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Look out below crashing down to the ground
just like a vertical locomotive
That's a train, am I painting the picture that's in my brain?
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My flow's not great, okay, I conversate with people
Who know if I flow on a song I'll get no radio play

While you're doing fine, there's some people and I

Who have a really tough time getting through this life

So excuse us while we S I N G to the S K Y.

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Re: Sunset On Sunday

Postby Barron » Tue Dec 06, 2011 8:25 am

Thanks
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Re: Sunset On Sunday

Postby Barron » Tue Dec 06, 2011 9:41 am

I fixed the mane and the belly!! Let me know what else I should work on!! Thanks
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Re: Sunset On Sunday

Postby Alaska. » Tue Dec 06, 2011 9:48 am

I think the lines shouldn't be so thick, and i think you should work on a horse's anatomy a little.

This possibly for the head reference and to see all the little details.

This to see what a horse's anatomy is from the side.

And it is always good to use a reference to get the anatomy right ^-^

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I can't see past my own nose,
I'm seeing everything in slo-mo
Look out below crashing down to the ground
just like a vertical locomotive
That's a train, am I painting the picture that's in my brain?
A train from the sky, locomotive, my motives are insane
My flow's not great, okay, I conversate with people
Who know if I flow on a song I'll get no radio play

While you're doing fine, there's some people and I

Who have a really tough time getting through this life

So excuse us while we S I N G to the S K Y.

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Re: Sunset On Sunday

Postby Barron » Tue Dec 06, 2011 10:07 am

Thanks for the tips, I will get right now that!!
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Re: Sunset On Sunday

Postby Barron » Wed Dec 07, 2011 8:53 am

Thank you (:
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