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redlines yaey |D by summer monday

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redlines yaey |D

Postby summer monday » Sun Nov 06, 2011 7:05 am

some redlines for Nonia c:
i wasn't sure what style you were going for, so i picked something between cartoon and realistic. your sketch was better than a lot that i've seen, but i just have a few things to point out x3

- the snout isn't as thick, and the forehead doesn't drop as far
- watch your stomach; it isn't perfectly flat
- the tail doesn't appear until after the back leg! yours comes before your back leg x3

really, i think that's it; you're already a very skilled artist ♥

also, just as a note, this canine's physique is very German shepherdesque, what with the face and sloping back, but not all wolves are like that. like i said, search for references! they're the best way to learn xx
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Re: redlines yaey |D

Postby Firedragon2009 » Sun Nov 06, 2011 7:40 am

I just wanted to say that like you said the tail doesn't come out until after the back leg but if it is curled you can see it on this picture ;3
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Re: redlines yaey |D

Postby summer monday » Sun Nov 06, 2011 7:43 am

lol, you're totally right; it hadn't registered to me it was a curled tail. hum, i must be slow today ;-;
anyway, thanks for pointing that out ♥
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Re: redlines yaey |D

Postby Firedragon2009 » Sun Nov 06, 2011 7:46 am

lol it's ok x3 and you're welcome ^^
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