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Realistic Firestar by LOCW_Bluestarwarrior

Artist LOCW_Bluestarwarrior [gallery]
Time spent 50 minutes
Drawing sessions 1
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Realistic Firestar

Postby LOCW_Bluestarwarrior » Mon Aug 15, 2011 12:56 pm

I wanted to draw realistic, and this is what I got! I love the grass.
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Re: Realistic Firestar

Postby Solarizing » Mon Aug 15, 2011 1:11 pm

Since this is in Intermediate, I'll give you some critique. :3

The clouds are beautiful and the face is nice too. Try thinning the lines and connect the neck from the back of the ears to the shoulders (that was explained poorly I hope you know what I mean) Maybe make the legs longer and head smaller so it fits the cat's anatomy better, as it looks a bit cartoonish now. Add more shading and shining too and have some tufts of fur going out of the lines. It's looking great so far, keep up the good work! :clap:
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Re: Realistic Firestar

Postby LOCW_Bluestarwarrior » Mon Aug 15, 2011 1:14 pm

Yeah, I may just do another and get rid of the lines entirely! (Do you think it belongs in intermediate?)
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Re: Realistic Firestar

Postby Solarizing » Mon Aug 15, 2011 11:34 pm

LOCW_Bluestarwarrior wrote:Yeah, I may just do another and get rid of the lines entirely! (Do you think it belongs in intermediate?)


It might not be intermediate yet but it still looks awesome and you're definitely improving ;)
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Re: Realistic Firestar

Postby LOCW_Bluestarwarrior » Tue Aug 16, 2011 12:14 am

Thanks
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