[blkberry]

aaa the timer is soooo wrong omg ignore it,
i left this open when my laptop was getting fixed whoops
never mind then lmao
aaa i draw with a track pad so thats why it looks stupid tbh

um ?? edits i guess

s - hair, shine edit
c - longer fur, tail edits
uc, shorter fur, ears

next entry

[undead]

i love this!! your lining is so smooth and it all flows together nicely, this is a relly pretty entry and the items you gave it really makes it pop!! my only suggestion for your next entry is to add more of a design, so you can have variety^^

[blkberry]

i love this!! your lining is so smooth and it all flows together nicely, this is a relly pretty entry and the items you gave it really makes it pop!! my only suggestion for your next entry is to add more of a design, so you can have variety^^

aa thank you !! i'll try to make my next entry a little complex next time !!!

[Aey]

The line edits are smooth and match the original. If your style is "less is more" as far as fur goes, this works well. If not, you may want to work on -fluffiness-. People tend to fall all over themselves for the fluffier kalons.

Also, try to imagine that you're the artist creating kits from this kalon and another one. What are some distinguishing traits that can pass down as far as the design goes? This particular one doesn't have much, just a gradient. While it looks nice on this guy, the kids would have a hard time of it.

I don't mean to come across as discouraging! I wasn't going to reply at all, but you asked for some comments over on the FC so I stopped by. :)

[kaanekii]

aaaa what a total babe !! i want this really bad now ♥︎

[blkberry]

- snip snap -

aa i totally understand !! though it is more of my style to use short fur than fluffy, but i will try to add more fluff next time!!
and i never really thought of the traits besides edits? Thank you again! but like what if i try to make another simple design like this?since this one was based of a fox, what would you suggest for distinguish traits? Should i add more design to create a trait? Like try to make it more unique but still look like a fox?

aaaa what a total babe !! i want this really bad now ♥︎

aaa thank you !!!

[Aey]

I mostly see the artists add a secondary element to simpler designs. Pick something you love and kind of hide it around the design. Eyes, birds, flowers, stars, whatever.

This one has some geometric designs.
This one has some spotting.
This one has painty or inky splashes.
This one has stars.

The distinguishing part of the design doesn't have to reach out and smack you in the face, it can totally be soft and subtle if that's what you prefer.

There're also more ways to transition from one color into another than a gradient.
More complex transitions can be their own design.

[CHEET0H!L0RD]

why is it called medicine? i'll critique it if you answer

[blkberry]

why is it called medicine? i'll critique it if you answer

because i was listening to "medicine" by joji while creating her

[CHEET0H!L0RD]

why is it called medicine? i'll critique it if you answer

because i was listening to "medicine" by joji while creating her

oh ok. i think you could work on shaping things, such as the tail. it looks really one dimensional and the lines don't match on the bottom part of it (where the shine is) i think you could try to make it flow better?