[elenah889]

PLutia of course wanted nothing to do with it ( pup Gnome ) origin was not so crule he wanted the pup to live. Plutia finaly gave in leting Aska have the pup to be her son. After aska left with her new son she let theothers met him. But on lillte female pup named Martel he seemed to like her alot. ( Martel is Undine's sister ). Gnome played with her and she played with him. Plutia came from her den and Origin came out some time later. Origin looked at the pup with much consern. Plutia on the other hand was upset but she got over it barely. One day when when everyone whent hunting Plutia and Aska stand behind at the den's. Plutia called Aska. Aska came and said " You called Plutia??" Plutia looked at her evily and said " Your a threatt to me know ". " How am I?" Aska said calmly. Plutia was walking in circles around her. Aska sat quitly. Plutia then said " how did you know I killed Undine??". " I-I-I did not know that you did." Aska lied as she stuttered those words. Plutis did a short sweet laugh and said " Im not stupid ". Plutia stop in her tracks and was facing Aska. ( what will happen next find out in the last chapter! Stay tune!!!!!!!!!!!!

[van]

it keeps u on the edge of ur seat! wanting to kno what happens next! nice job!

[elenah889]

thnxs!