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Cheetah ^^ by BPeppers

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Cheetah ^^

Postby BPeppers » Mon Sep 27, 2010 3:27 am

I think this is my best oekaki yet.

Is it intermediate worthy? If not, what can I do to fix it?

Comments and criticism really appreciated!

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Re: Cheetah ^^

Postby foobiejoobie135 » Mon Sep 27, 2010 3:42 am

OMG! cheetahs are my Fav wild animal IN THE WORLD! good job!
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Re: Cheetah ^^

Postby BPeppers » Mon Sep 27, 2010 3:43 am

Thank you. ^^ Do you see anything I can do to improve it?

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Re: Cheetah ^^

Postby Dream flash » Mon Sep 27, 2010 4:17 am

i think that it could use biger eyes on the cheetah thats being licked but thats it. the rest of it is astonishing...well done :clap: :clap: :clap: :)
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Re: Cheetah ^^

Postby BPeppers » Mon Sep 27, 2010 4:32 am

Thank you! Do you think it's worth intermediate?

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Re: Cheetah ^^

Postby BPeppers » Mon Sep 27, 2010 6:40 am

Please? I need to know if I can post in intermediate. ^^

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Re: Cheetah ^^

Postby winchester. » Mon Sep 27, 2010 7:18 am

I think that the ears should be more rounded and that the Legs are confusing to me, thats just me opinion, Othere than that its well, Wait, your name, scratch it and make i a tad smaller, its to main-point veiwed
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Re: Cheetah ^^

Postby Blitz. » Mon Sep 27, 2010 7:24 am

I think your almost there, just add a bit more detail and shadeing :3

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Re: Cheetah ^^

Postby Queen of the Night » Mon Sep 27, 2010 11:52 am

nothing is wrong :lol: i think u did grate :!:
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Re: Cheetah ^^

Postby BPeppers » Mon Sep 27, 2010 1:04 pm

So if I shade it it'll be intermediate worthy? *Bonks head* I knew I forgot something!"

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