[val.]

please criticize but nothing too harsh. anything i should change/tweak? any new names?

p.s. they only have three toes on purpose

[salaya]

hey! great job and concept, could i be added to clean up the lines a bit? No traits would be changed

[val.]

@Salaya - yes! this was just a little demo draw, i'm still trying figure out how i can mix (not the right word!) the two different animal skeletons. thanks for the feedback!

[PeanutButterRum]

Some friendly crit.

the leg muscles are to bony on the knee. The claws look a tad wonky for the paw size. the paws need to be a bit bigger. the shoulders are way too big. and back leg is too long for being lifted up

[The Worst Username]

The shoulders are a bit large, and the leg being lifted up is too long. This could probably use some smoothing, too.

[salaya]

@Salaya - yes! this was just a little demo draw, i'm still trying figure out how i can mix (not the right word!) the two different animal skeletons. thanks for the feedback!

could i be added to help out a bit?

[val.]

@Butter Rum - thanks, but i was kinda aiming for a large shoulder. i wanted to make the front paws bear paws but i went with dog paws instead c:

@PeacockFeathers - what do you mean by smoothing?

@Salaya - you are added c: if you can make another version with red line edits so i can study ^.^