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FAE Entry- Leopard Appaloosa {CRITIQUE APPRECIATED} by orse

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FAE Entry- Leopard Appaloosa {CRITIQUE APPRECIATED}

Postby orse » Mon Mar 03, 2014 6:34 pm

Here she is! I am so proud of her, and I had so much fun colouring her in :D
I'm worried about the spots but meh.
Feel free to critique or comment, I would appreciate it <3

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Re: FAE Entry- Leopard Appaloosa {CRITIQUE APPRECIATED}

Postby Kiwilady » Mon Mar 03, 2014 7:39 pm

Try highliting and making the shading more prominent
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Re: FAE Entry- Leopard Appaloosa {CRITIQUE APPRECIATED}

Postby orse » Mon Mar 03, 2014 7:52 pm

Kiwilady wrote:Try highliting and making the shading more prominent


I'll do that now, thanks. His coat is already light, so I used a darker shade to highlight. I'll make it more visible.
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Re: FAE Entry- Leopard Appaloosa {CRITIQUE APPRECIATED}

Postby orse » Mon Mar 03, 2014 8:00 pm

{ChampionArabian} wrote:
Kiwilady wrote:Try highliting and making the shading more prominent


I'll do that now, thanks. His coat is already light, so I used a darker shade to highlight. I'll make it more visible.


I've changed it now, how does it look?
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