my only suggestion is-try not to make 'mary-sues'. daughter of luna? nope, that makes her automatic marysue. maybe she's daughter of another pony? ^^" alicorn isn't popular, either. for changlings its fine-but try not for ponies. otherwise its amazing art! great job! c:
Thank you all for commenting on this. They are helpful and supportive comments! I just made these characters because i was bored in school one day, ha ha. But to cupcake frosting, i'm not sure what you mean in your comment. Do you think you could re-state it in a clearer way? Thanks!
Cupcake Frosting, leave her alone! If she wants to make them daughters of Luna or Chrystalis, then that is up to her! I think this is great art, it dosen't really matter in the long run who's daughters they are!