[Kawartsii]

shrugs
oh well.

Anyways, if you can't read my terrible handwriting, here are some thing's to help improve your art;;
- Try to do differenent styles on the yes: Be creative! Eyes are the most abstruct part on a animal. I love seeing unique and different types of eyes.

- The muzzle/snout of the bean needs to be a tad longer: I still love yours, but maybe bring it up a little bit from the chest.

- Your ears are good, but I add a little bit of a point to them... But your ears are fine.

- Create more fur on the bean! Don't be afraid to fluff it up <33 Add more charcter into it. Fur is very important on a animal eue

- Sturdy body: Now for this, I would suggest giving is a few abs detail into it. You drawing was a little bit 'low' as I should say. Lift the body fom the legs to make it more creative to it.

I hope this helps you <3333
And I hope to god I didnt sound like a commander or something. Im really sorry if I was to harsh 9-9

[Koujaku;]

This looks very good!

[Segie]

I really like this one ^-^
Your tips are good, I will be using them <33

[r.ddler]

I love you're art style oAo
My traditional is almost as good, but my digital... ehh.
Great now I'm comparing XD
But I really like the style.

[Kawartsii]

I love you're art style oAo
My traditional is almost as good, but my digital... ehh.
Great now I'm comparing XD
But I really like the style.

omg
this is like
soo old wooow |D

this is crap
my style kinda looks like this now ; w ;

[r.ddler]

Oh my, it's gorgeous.
I'm going through a massively cartoony stage, (since yesterday)
when I dramatically shade, and use stereotypical emotes on fluffy little characters,
If I had a better scanner, I'd show you if you wanted.
But hey, look me up on deviantart, I'm WolfScreamsNight, I might stop my posting hiatus.